英语写作 Let’s watch the video

Writing,Letswatchthevideo,Task:,Learntowriteaboutpersons,Describeapersonwithaword.,short,tall,thin,fat,beautiful,ugly,friendly,funny,Describeapersonwithasentence.,Sheisashortwoman.,Heisaverytallman.,Heistallandthin.,Heisshortandheavy.,Shehaslongstraighthair.,Shehasshortcurlyhair.,Helikesdriving.,Helikessingingwhenheishappy.,PK,Whoisthebest?,描述外貌(look)的单词：,描述穿着(wearing)的短语：,shorttallthinstrongsickhandsomebeautifuluglyfatheavyofmediumheightofmediumbuildgood-lookingnice,wearaT-shirtwearapairofjeansweararedsweaterwearabluedresswearapairofglasses,Wordcollection:,描述性格(characters)的单词：,描述爱好(hobbies)的短语：,kindfriendlyoutgoingcutelazysmartshypolitequietstrictserious,likereadinglikeplayingbasketballlikedancinglikesinginglikedrawinglikehelpingothers,Wordcollection:,Writesomesentencesaboutthisboy.,提示词：Jimmy,16,mediumheightandmediumbuild，blackhair;wearshortsandaT-shirt;Outgoingandhelpful,likerunningandswimming,sentencecollection:,HisnameisJimmy.Heis16yearsold.Heisofmediumheightandmediumbuild.Hehasshortblackhair.HewearsshortsandaT-shirt.Heisalwaysoutgoingandhelpful.Helikesrunningandswimming.,Exercise,Writingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友林涛，80个左右的单词。,写作步骤,1)审题2)列纲3)连句4)修饰句子组织文章5)检查纠错,（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）,（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）,（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）,（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）,（用单词、短语列出内容要点）,Letssharesomecompositions.,LinTaoismypenpal.Heis15yearold.Heistallandthin.HehaveblackhairandhelikewearsshortsandT-shirts.Helookingverycute.Heverymuchlikeshamburgersandfriedchicken.,years,has,likes,wearing,looks,Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.,Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenverymuch.,Hisfavoriteclassesisscience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Iverylikehim.,Ilikehimverymuch.,are,helps,LinTaoismypenpal.Heis15yearsold.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.,Whoisthebestdoctor?,PK,Pair-correction:,MyEnglishteacherIhavemetmanyexcellentteachersinschool.OneofthemismyEnglishteacher.HernameisMsLi.Sheis35yearsold.Sheistallandbeautifulwithlongcurlyhair.Inherfreetime,shelikesreading,singinganddancing.Shealsoenjoysplayingsports.Intheschool,whenweaskherquestions,sheisalwaysverypatient.Everytimewehavetrouble,sheisveryfriendlytohelpus.Sheisagoodteacher.Sheislikenotonlyourfriendbutalsoourmother.,Howtodescribeaperson?,name,favoritefood