漫画作文10.29.ppt

书面表达专题写作指导,Writingbasedonacartoon,湖南省地质中学钟亚平Oct29th,2015,Acartoon(周练15),StepI.观察漫画-Observethepicture,Howtowriteanessaybasedonacartoon?,StepII.解析意图-Extractthetheme,StepIII.布局谋篇-Designthestructure,Environmentalproblems,StepI.Observethepicture-Topicsofcartoons,Socialphenomenon,Attitudestowardslife,Whatarethecommontopicsofcartoons?,Environmentalproblems,Socialphenomenon,Attitudestowardslife,Title,StepII.Extractthetheme-Tothepoint,Languageclues,Whatshouldwepayspecialattentiontowhilejudgingthethemeofacartoon?,Example下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象,请你根据对这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。,ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.,Education?,EducationInequality!,Comparison!,Letshaveacompetitionjudgingthethemesofsomecartoons!,Peoplelackcommunication.,Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.,Peoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.,Moneycantbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.,下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？,Ifunexpectedcantforesee,protectourselvesandbuyinsurance,Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected“ifs”inourlife,butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly.Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly“if”.,StepIII.布局谋篇-Designthestructure,Howmanypartsshouldbeincludedinourwriting?Andwhatarethey?,PartI.Descriptionofthepicture,StepIII.布局谋篇-Threeparts,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Letspractice!,Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。假设你是一名人大代表，请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇不少于120词的短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的建议。,Makeanoutlineofthewriting:简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的建议。,体裁(genre):_人称(person):_时态(tense):_PartI:_PartII:_PartIII:_,argumentation,thirdperson&firstperson,simplepast&presenttense,descriptionofthecartoon,phenomenon&itsconsequences,yoursuggestions,PartI:Combinethekeypointsandformthedescriptionparagraph.,Keypoints:anoldman,heartattack,inhospital,medicalfeebillwith$50,000,anotherheartattack,fellontothefloor,PartI.Descriptionofthepicture,FromthepicturewecanseethatAscanbeseeninthepicture,Asisvividlyportrayedinthepicture,Letslookatthepictureabovefirst.ItsapictureaboutThisisafunnyandinstructivepicture,fromwhichwecanseethat,Brieflyandproperly,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,wecanseethatanoldmanwasinformedofpayinghismedicalfeeforhisheartattack.Themomenthesawthebillwith$50,000,soshockedwashethathenearlyfellontothefloor.Itwasnodoubtanotherheartattacktohim.,Myversion,Brieflyandproperly,Phenomenon,Consequences,-Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.,Society:Itwontbebeneficialtothebuildingofourharmonioussociety.,People:Peoplecantaffordtheheavymedicalfeesandhavetobearthepainofillness.,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,Whatthecartoonreflects/illustrates/showssetmethinkingalot.Inreality,itsquitecommonthatAfterseeingthepicture,IwasgreatlyshockedbythephenomenonthatThereasonsforthephenomenonareasfollows.Firstofall,Andthenthesecondreasonisthat.Thelast,Ithink,isItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Andtheremay/mightbesomeconsequencesresultedbythisphenomenon.,Facts/Reasons/Consequences,PartII:Fillintheblanksandformtheparagraphofanalysis.,_.Inreality,itscommonthat_,somemaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcareorhavetobearthepainofdiseases._,somemayhavetowaithelplesslyforthelastdayoftheirlife.If_,itwillsurelycausetheinstabilityofoursocietyandeventuallyinterferewiththedevelopmentofourcountry.,manypeoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Becauseofthis,Worsestill,thissituationcontinues,Whatthecartoonreflectssetmethinkingalot,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Measures,Hospital:,Government:,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Inmyopinion,weshouldraisepeoplesawarenessoffirstly.Andthenitishightimewetooksomemeasures.Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand,AsfarasImconcerned,somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentoputanendtothisissue.Firstandforemost,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoMeanwhile,themediacanappealforLastbutnottheleast,allpeopleinthecommunityshouldOnlyinthesewayscanwe,awarenessactiongovernmentcommunityindividual,AsfarasImconcerned,somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentoputanendtothisissue.Ontheonehand,thegovernmentshouldbuildupafavorable,medicalsystem.Ontheotherhand,thehospitalshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplaceandreduceth