8书面表达advice.ppt

Howtowritealetterforadvice,Unit3Book6,信宜三中英语集备组俞小燕,DearWangMei,ImverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucanafterclass.Second,italsohelpstocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.InthiswayyoucanimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Finally,itshouldbeagoodideatodevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,whichhelpsyoutoimproveyourwrittenEnglish.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeuseful.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews!Yours,LiHua,文章审题?,1.写作题材？2.人称？3.三段式4.时态？5.过渡词？,开头？中间？结尾？,Discussion(2mins),DearWangMei,ImverygladtoreceivedyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucanafterclass.Second,italsohelpstocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.InthiswayyoucanimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Finally,itshouldbeagoodideatodevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,whichhelpsyoutoimproveyourwrittenEnglish.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeuseful.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews!,1.提出问题,2.提出建议及理由,3.祝愿,someusefulexpressions,1.Imverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto.2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto,4.First,second,third.Finally，besides,5.Ihopethat.6.Iamlookingforwardto.,1.提出问题,2.提出建议及理由,3.祝愿,3.Itisimportantto/Itshouldbeagoodideato/Italsohelpto,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading开头；引出问题2.Body中间：提出建议；层次分明3.Ending结尾：愿望,模板：Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_.Hereareafewsuggestions/Hereissomeadvicethat/on_.First,itisimportantto_.Then/Second/Also,_.Besides/Inaddition/Furthermore,itshouldbeagoodideato_.Iamsurethat/Ihopethat_.Thanksforyourconsideration.Imlookingforwardto/Lookforwardto_.Yours_,第二人称,Note:人称_时态_,(引出主题),（建议及理由）,（祝愿）,第二人称,一般现在时，一般将来时,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy来信向你咨询如何才能保护好环境。请你根据下列内容写回信。1.减少私家车2.多种植树木3.大家保护水源4.认识环境的重要性注意：字数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,小试身手,1慎审题：建议信，第二人称，一般现在时,将来时2.谋布局（模板）：开头：问候及引出问题，中间：建议及理由，结尾：祝愿3.看要点4.添润色(notonlybutalso;倒装句；定语从句5.细检查,请按刚才的思路审题2mins,互评作文(2mins),任务：1.看看你觉得疑难的地方，别人怎么表达2.内容是否完整3.打分,第一档:2125分（很好）内容要点齐全，少错误第二档:1620分（好）因使用复杂句有错误第三档:1115分（适当）有错误，但不影响理解第四档:610分（较差）词汇、句子较多错误第五档:15分（差）明显漏掉主要内容,评判标准（80-120字）1.卷面是否整洁？2.内容是否完整？3.句子是否基本通顺？4.是否有好词句？,GroupDiscussion（5mins),任务：1.相互学习文章的优点2.相互解决文章有疑问的地方3.推选出优秀范文一篇,评判标准（80-120字）1.卷面是否整洁？2.内容是否完整？3.句子是否基本通顺？4.是否有好词好句？,第一档:2125分（很好）内容要点齐全，少错误第二档:1620分（好）因使用复杂句有错误第三档:1115分（适当）有错误，但不影响理解第四档:610分（较差）词汇、句子较多错误第五档:15分（差）明显漏掉主要内容,评判标准（80-120字）1.卷面是否整洁？2.内容是否完整？3.句子是否基本通顺？4.是否有好词好句？,学生作文点评,存在的问题？,学生作品,DearLucy,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtoprotecttheenvironment.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttoreduseourpersonalcars.Wecangotoschoolorworkonfootorbybus.Notonlycanitprotecttheenvironment,butalsoitisgoodforourhealth.Secondly,itshouldbeagoodideathatallofustakeactionstoprotectthewater.Onlybydoingthiscanwesaveourcleanwater。Besides,italsohelpstoplantmoretrees,whichwillnotonlycleantheair,butalsocanmakeourcitymorebeautiful.Inaddition,wecantellmorepeopleabouttheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Imlookingforwardtoyourletternexttime.Yours,LiHua,Summary,Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.Imsure_.Imlookingforwardto.yours,LiHua,1.提出问题,1.Imverygladtorec