基础写作4--活动安排

基础写作话题4：活动安排,.,篇章结构(1)交待活动的背景、时间、地点、主题和参加者或主办方。(2)介绍活动的过程、步骤或安排(3)活动的注意事项(4)活动的感受或意义,.,1.“目的”的各种表达方式：(inorder)todosth;soastodosth不放句首aimingintendingattemptingtodosth;forwiththepurposeaimintentionofdoingsth;sothatinorderthat(that+句子)designedtodo;designedfor(doing)aimedatsth,2.signupfor;enterfor报名参加3.participateinjoinintakepartinattend出席，参加4.willbeheld(by)将被举行willhold将举行5.willbeorganized(by)将被组织willorganize将组织6.player;runner;contestant;competitor;participant;参赛者，选手，参加者7.areissupposedtodosth应该;理应,8.Sbiswarmlywelcometodosth热烈欢迎9.thanksforyourparticipation谢谢你的参与10.holdanactivityacontestacompetitioncalledconcerningabout.举行一个叫关于的活动比赛11.arousecultivatedevelopraiseonesinterestin激发培养培养提升对的兴趣12.developimproveraiseonesability培养促进提升的能力,.,13.increaseonesknowledgeabout增加对的了解14.promotecarryforwarddevelopspreadcirculatethecampusculture弘扬校园文化15.Sbisareencouragedinspiredtodo被鼓励做17.knowmoredetailsabout了解更多细节18.dontmissthedeadline别错过截止日期19.eyewitnesswitnessthedevelopmentof见证的发展,相关句式1.Itsapitythatyouhavetogobacksoon,soafarewellpartyforyouwillbeheldinRoom302intheSunClubat6:00pmthisSaturdayevening.你很快就要回去,所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部302房举行欢送会。2.Imwritingto(dosth)我写信的目的是,3.Ifyouareinterestedin.,pleasetakepartin.Contest.如果你对感兴趣,请参加比赛4.Inthemorningyoucanfirstvisit.Afterthat,youcangoto.Intheafternoon,Isuggestyouvisit.wherenotonlyyoucanenjoy.butalsoyoucan.上午,你可以先参观然后,你可以去下午,我建议你参观在那里你不但可以欣赏而且你还可以,5.Ouroutdooractivitywilllast3hours,andwellbebackatabout11：00.我们的户外活动将持续3个小时,大约11点返回。6.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursdaysothatwewillmakenecessaryarrangements.如果你有兴趣,请在下周四下午五点前到办公室报名,以便我们作必要的安排。7.Allarewelcome.欢迎大家参加。,1.活动安排的写作一般使用将来时,文章结构以总分为主,第一句往往要清楚说明活动举办的意义和内容。2.活动安排的写作基本都涉及到地点和时间的安排,考生应该注意表达时间和地点的介词使用。3.活动安排的应用文多属于通知类,其给出的中文提示往往隐藏主语,考生可以考虑使用祈使句或者被动语态。,(2009年深圳二模)为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容,例题导写认真审题活动安排属于应用文范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者祈使句。这一类应用文最重要的是把活动的目的、时间、地点、报名方式等信息清楚地传达给大家,并且最后呼吁大家参加活动。,信息重组1.为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行主题为“保护环境,节约能源”英语演讲比赛，目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语。2演讲比赛将在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5：30,教学楼五楼演讲大厅举办。3.参赛者需要在5月25日前在studentcenter上报名。4.比赛将评选出一等奖3名,二等奖6名,三等奖12名。5.希望大家积极参与比赛。,词语翻译翻译或完成下例短语。句子1：(1)增长环保知识：_(2)保护环境：_(3)节约能源：_(4)表示目的的短语：_,protectourenvironment,saveenergy,increaseraisebroadenourenvironmentalknowledge,句2：(5)在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_4:00p.m._5:30p.m.,_FridayJune5th(6)教学楼：_(7)在五楼：_the5thfloor(8)演讲大厅：_句3：(9)参加比赛的人：_,on,from,teaching/classroombuilding,to,on,thelecturehall,theparticipants,thosewhowanttoparticipateinthelecture,(10)在5月25日前：_May25th(11)在studentcenter上：_studentcenter(12)报名：_,signupfor/enterfor,before,at,句4：(13)三个一等奖：_句5：(14)欢迎参加：_,threefirstprizes,长难句翻译句1：(1)为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行主题为“保护环境,节约能源”英语演讲比赛，目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语；(1)IncelebrationoftheWorldEnvironmentDayon5th,June,theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,whosethemeis“Protecttheenvironmentandsaveenergy”toincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish.,IncelebrationoftheWorldEnvironmentDayon5thandtoincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish,theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhich/whosethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”(定语从句),NoticeWithWorldEnvironmentDayapproaching,theStudentsUnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhich/whosethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”toincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish.ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheteachingbuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.ThosewhowanttoparticipateinthecontestaresupposedtosignupatstudentcenterbeforeMay25th.Lotsofprizeswillbedeliveredforthecontest,includingthreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.Dearfellowschoolmates,youarewarmlywelcometobethereandthanksforyourparticipation.ThestudentsUnion,能力提高1.为了提高我们的环保意识,我们将会邀请中山大学的李教授于本周六给我们开展一个关于环境问题的讲座,届时他将会给我们讲述近年来广州的环境污染问题。,Inordertoraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection/Withthepurposeofraisingourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,wewillinviteDr.LifromZhongshanUniversitytogiveusawonderfullectureabouttheenvironmentproblemand/wherehewillalsotellussomethingaboutthepollutionofenvironmentinrecentyearsinGuangzhou.,2.我们很荣幸请来了何教授在本周五下午4:00-5:00给我们讲述关于中西方文化差异的讲座,讲座将会在学校体育馆开展。,2.WehavethegreathonortohaveinvitedProfessorHetogiveusawonderfullectureaboutthedifferencesbetweeneasternandwesternculturesthisFridayafternoon,whichwillbeheldintheschoolstadiumbetween4:00p.m.and5:00p.m.,3.请大家做好笔记,这次讲座将会帮助我们为下周的演讲比赛做好充分的准备。,Everyoneshouldmakefullnotes,becausethislecturecanhelpusmakegoodpreparationsforthecomingspeechcompetitionnextweek./Everyoneshouldmakefullnotesinthislecture,whichcanfullyprepareusforthecomingspeechcompetitionnextweek./Everyoneshouldmakefullnotesinthislecturesothathecanbefullypreparedforthecomingspeechcompetitionnextweek.,4.所有的学生将要在本周六早上8：30在学校门口集合。,4.Allthestudentsshouldgatheratthegateofourschoolat8:30a.m.,.,.,你们学校将要组织所有高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游活动。假设你是这个活动的组织者,请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知。,.,参考词汇：黄埔古港AncientportWhampoa黄埔军校WhampoaMilitaryAcademy作文点评：体裁：应用文时态：一般将来时人称：第一人称关键短语：放松心情relax(oneselfonesmood);forrelaxation;getrelaxed;relieveonespressure;relievefreesbofpressure;,.,了解:knowlearnsthabout;getmoreknowledgeabout;haveabetterunderstandingof参观、观光:payavisittosbsp;visitsbsp;showsbaroundsp;tour(around)sp;gosightseeinginsp;goonatriptosp（短途）traveltosp（泛指）goforanoutingto感受、体验、见证feelexperiencewitnesseyewitness以防万一incase(ofthat),.,存在问题：1Aimingtorelaxingandknowingmoreabout,ourschoolwillorganizeanactivity.2wewillconcentrateat3bybuses4havingfinished,wewill5Whatshouldbepaidattentionis,AimingtomakehelptheSsrelaxedandknow,concentrate专注,(注意力)集中meetgettogether碰头,会面,bybus(方式状语)；takeabustakebuses(谓语),having(been)donesth用于过去式,Whatshouldbepaidattentiontoisthat,.,6theweatherforecastsaidpredicted7表“将来”的各种方式8活动的流程顺序,Accordingtotheweatherforecastreport,Itisreportedthat,willdosth;begoingtodosth;betodosth;主、被动语态的转换,这篇通知的重点在于把活动的流程讲述清楚,所以考生在写作过程中注意时间的用法,以及时间过渡的一些连词,如first,andthen.,next,later.,afterlunch,afterthat,.等。,.,注意事项,考生在翻译的过程中,要避免完全按照字面翻译,如表达“放松心情”时,考生若按照字面翻译为relaxourmood就是中式英语,因此可以用getrelaxed来表达。还有“集中”，翻译做“concentrate”。以及把“天气预报说”直译过来，犯了中式英语的错误等。,.,另外“感受广州的变迁”也比较难翻译,考生可以采取迂回方法，把这个意思改为“