读后续写专项讲解Nicholas

读后续写,读后续写（2017.9.28）OneSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingatSugarloafMountaininMaine.Intheearlyafternoon,whenhewasplanningtogohome,afiercesnowstormsweptintothearea.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoffthepath.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslost,allalone!Hedidnthavefood,water,aphone,orothersupplies.Hewasgettingcolderbytheminute.Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutallofthesurvivalshowshehadwatchedonTV.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.Hedecidedtostopskiing.Therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastofindshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Ifhedidnt,hisbodytemperaturewouldgetverylow,whichcouldquicklykillhim.Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecouldBythatevening,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesnowanddrankwaterfromanearbystreamsothathisbodywouldntlosetoomuchwater.Notknowinghowmuchlongerhecouldlast,Nicholasdidtheonlythinghecouldhehuddled(蜷缩)inhiscaveandslept.Paragraph1:Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Paragraph2:OnTuesday,Nicholaswentoutagaintofindhelp.,读后续写,NicholaswaslostandtrappedHowcouldhesavehimself?,Para1:Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Sohungrywashethathewalkedwithgreatdifficulty.Unfortunately,Hecouldntfindanyoneasifthewholeworldhadnothingbutsnow.FearfulasHewas,hewasfirmlyconvincedthathecouldntkeephisbodytemperaturelowsohemustmakeeveryefforttofindhelp.Suddenly,ithithimthathecouldcollectsomestonestoorderabigword“SOS”inthesnow.Afterthat,hefollowedhistracksandmadehiswaytoreturntothesnowcave,becausewithoutshelter,hecouldntlivethroughthatevening.,Para2:OnTuesday,Nicholaswentoutagaintofindhelp.Hedecidedtogobacktowherehewentyesterday.Tohissurprise,whenhegotthere,hecouldntfindthestones.Hethoughtthestonemusthavebeencoveredbysnow,butitdidnt,whichmadehimamazedandrelieved,forhewasfirmlysurethatsomeonemustbehere.Hewassohappythathedecidedtowaitpatiently.Consequently,tenminuteslater,hewasluckytobefoundbyavolunteersearcher.ItisnothowmuchluckNicholashad,buthowmanyeffortshemadethatmatteredinsavinghislife.,Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Sohungrywashethathewalkedwithgreatdifficulty.Unfortunately,Hecouldntfindanyoneasifthewholeworldhadnothingbutsnow.FearfulasHewas,hewasfirmlyconvincedthathecouldntkeephisbodytemperaturelowsohemustmakeeveryeffortstofindhelp.Suddenly,ithithimthathecouldcollectsomestonestoorderabigword“SOS”inthesnow.Afterthat,hefollowedhistracksandmadehiswaytoreturntothesnowcave,becausewithoutshelter,hecouldntlivethroughthatevening.OnTuesday,Nicholaswentoutagaintofindhelp.Hedecidedtogobacktowherehewentyesterday.Tohissurprise,whenhegotthere,hecouldntfindthestones.Hethoughtthestonemusthavebeencoveredbysnow,butitdidnt,whichmadehimamazedandrelieved,forhewasfirmlysurethatsomeonemustbehere.Hewassohappythathedecidedtowaitpatiently.Consequently,tenminuteslater,hewasluckytobefoundbyavolunteersearcher.ItisnothowmuchluckNicholashad,buthowmanyeffortshemadethatmatteredinsavinghislife.,Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Ashegotoutofthesnowcave,afiercesnowstormsweptintothearea,makinghimhuddledbacktotheshelter.Strugglinginthemindforawhile,Nicholasfinallydecidedtorushintothesnow.Exhaustedandhungry,hesearchedforthesupplies,whichcouldavoidhimfromstarvingtodeathbeforebeingfound.Unfortunately,badweatherdidnthaveanysympathyforthatpoorboy,andjustlikeyesterday,hefellasleepunconsciously.OnTuesday,Nicholaswentoutagaintofindhelp.Thelongerhestayedinthefrozenarea,thecolderhewasinbothphysicalandmentalcondition.Itwasonlyacoatthathewasdressedin,whichseemedtoothintokeephimwarm.Allofasudden,heheardsomeoneshoutinghisname.Soamazedwashethathescreamedbackwithallhisenergy.Thankstothedeterminedpartner,Nicholaswasfinallyrescued.（310班吴康哲）,Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Withtheextremecold,Nicholasmanagedtomakehiswayhome.Buttherewasnosuccessonaccountoffiercesnow.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime.Nicholasdecidedtoreturntothesnowcavetokeephisbodytemperaturenormal.Sadnessovertakinghimthatevening,hedoubtedwhetherhewouldmeethisfamilyagainintheend.Butsweetmemoriescamecrowdinginonhim,whichmadehimpickupspirits.OnTuesday,Nicholaswentoutagaintofindhelp.Hedrankthewaterfromthestream,whichmadehimalittlerefreshed.ThenNicholasstruggledtowalkandheadedforthenearestvillagetoaskforhelp.Afewhourslater,hecaughtsightofashelter.Fortunately,arescueteamsavedhim.TheygaveNicholasthewarmesthughehadeverreceived.Ontheirwaytohishome,Nicholaskeptshowinghisgratitudetotherescueteamforsavinghislife.（312班林朵）,读后续写,Alltheguestpraisedtheyoungerchild,butdidntpraisetheolderone.Iranupstairsandfoundherinthebedroom,crying.Howdidthemothercomforttheolderchild.,Par1:Isaid,“whatareyoudoing,mydear?”Kristenturnedtome,depressed,withtearsinhereyes.Shesaid,“Mum,whydidpeoplealwaysmakeaparticularfussovermysister,butoutshinedme?IsitbecauseImnotasprettyasmyyoungersister”Hearingthewords,Iwassurprisedandfeltalittleworried.,Par1:Kristen如何诉苦,Par2:Imadeeveryeffortstocomfort,kissingandhugginghertomakeherfeelbetter.Isaid,“No,mydear.Youandyoursisteraretheprettiestgirlsinthewholeworld!Youdontknowhowproudweweretohavesuchgodkidslikeyoutwo.Inmyeyes,youarejustasgoodasyoursister,youaresucharemarkablegirl.ButYouknow,Kellyisthreeyearsyoungerthanyou,theyoungeroneseemsmoreeasilyhurt,sotheguestwantedtoprotecther,whichmadehermorelikelytobeadmired.Dear,neverwillIandyourDadignoreyou.Wepromisewewillforeverputyouinourhearts”.HavingheardwhatIsaid,Kristennodded,woreasweetsmileandhuggedmetightly.,Par2:Mother(作者）如何安慰Kristen,Isaid,“whatareyoudoing,mydear?”Kristenturnedtome,depressed,withtearsinhereyes.Shesaid,“Mum,whydidpeoplealwaysmakeaparticularfussovermysister,butoutshinedme?Is