英语人教版八年级下册Writing---- Describe a Person.pptx

人物介绍,Whoisyourfavoritestar?,MyfavoriteactorisHuangXiaoming.Heisbornin1977,Qingdaoprovince.Heisoneofthemostfamousactors.Heisapopularsinger.HeactsinTheEmperorofHanDynasty（大汉天子）in2001.Hisperformancewasperfect.Hebecamefamousforit.Heenjoyedagreatsuccess.Hekeptonworkinghard.HecomesouthisfirstCDin2008.Hebeginstoacthisfirstsoapoperain1998.Heproducedseveralwonderfulmoviesuptonow,suchastheSoundoftheWind（风声）,AmericanDreamsinChina（中国合伙人）.HewontheBestActorformanytimessofar.Hemadegreatachievements.Hegaveawaymorethan10millionyuantohelpthepeopleinneedtillnow.IadmireHuangXiaomingalot.,Apassagefromastudent,Shortcoming1(缺点1):Therearesomemistakesintense(时态错误).,was,MyfavoriteactorisHuangXiaoming.Heisbornin1977,Qingdaoprovince.Heisoneofthemostfamousactors.Heisapopularsinger.HeactsinTheEmperorofHanDynasty大汉天子in2001.Hisperformancewasperfect.Hebecamefamousforit.Heenjoyedagreatsuccess.Hekeptonworkinghard.HecomesouthisfirstCDin2008.Hebeginstoacthisfirstsoapoperain1998.Heproducedseveralwonderfulmoviesuptonow,suchastheSoundoftheWind风声,AmericanDreamsinChina中国合伙人.HewontheBestActorformanytimessofar.Hemadegreatachievements.Hegaveawaymorethan10millionyuantohelppeopleinneedtillnow.IadmireHuangXiaomingalot.,was,acted,came,began,hasproduced,haswon,hasgiven,Shortcoming2(缺点2):Thepassageisnotlogical（有逻辑的).,Correctthemistakesintense.(改正时态错误),_MyfavoriteactorisHuangXiaoming.Hewasbornin1977,Qingdaoprovince.Heisoneofthemostfamousactors.Heisapopularsinger._HeactedinTheEmperorofHanDynasty（大汉天子）in2001.Hisperformancewasperfect.Hebecamefamousforit._Heenjoyedagreatsuccess.Hekeptonworkinghard.HecameouthisfirstCDin2008._Hebegantoacthisfirstsoapoperain1998._Hemadegreatachievements.Hehasgivenawaymorethan10millionyuantohelppeopleinneedtillnow._Hehasproducedseveralwonderfulmoviesuptonow,suchastheSoundoftheWind（风声）,AmericanDreamsinChina（中国合伙人）.HehaswontheBestActorformanytimessofar.,1,2,3,4,5,6,timeline时间轴,Puttheeventsinthecorrectorder.(句子排序),MyfavoriteactorisHuangXiaoming.Hewasbornin1977,Qingdaoprovince.Heisoneofthemostfamousactors.Heisapopularsinger.Hebegantoacthisfirstsoapoperain1998.HeactedinTheEmperorofHanDynasty(大汉天子)in2001.Hisperformancewasperfect.Hebecamefamousforit.Heenjoyedagreatsuccess,hestillkeptonworkinghard.HecameouthisfirstCDin2008.Hehasproducedseveralwonderfulmovies,suchastheSoundoftheWind（风声）,AmericanDreamsinChina（中国合伙人）.HehaswontheBestActorformanytimessofar.Hemadegreatachievements.Hehasgivenawaymorethan10millionyuantohelpthepeopleinneedtillnow.IadmireHuangXiaomingalot.,Shortcoming3(缺点3):1.Sentencesaretooshortandsimple.2.Theyarenotcoherent(连贯的).,MyfavoriteactorisHuangXiaoming.Hewasbornin1977,Qingdaoprovince._isheoneofthemostfamousactors,_heisapopularsinger.Hebegantoacthisfirstsoapoperain1998._heactedinTheEmperorofHanDynasty(大汉天子)in2001.Hisperformancewas_perfect_hebecamefamousforit._heenjoyedagreatsuccess,hestillkeptonworkinghard._hecameouthisfirstCDin2008._hehasproducedseveralwonderfulmovies,suchastheSoundoftheWind（风声）,AmericanDreamsinChina（中国合伙人）sohehaswontheBestActorformanytimessofar._hemadegreatachievements,hehasgivenawaymorethan10millionyuantohelpthepeopleinneedtillnow.IadmireHuangXiaomingalot.,ontheotherhandsothatSincethenontheonehandnotonlybutalsoalthough,Notonly,Then,sothat,Although,Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand,butalso,Usesomeproperconjunctions.(使用恰当的连词),Since,IadmireHuangXiaomingalot.,1.Howdoyoulikehim?Why?,2.Howdoyoulikehismovies/songs?,3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?,Ifyourepoor,workhardtomakeyourselfbetter.Ifyourerich,helpothersaspossibleasyoucan.,Maketheendingbetter.(写好结尾),Whathaveyoulearnedtoday?,Writeapassageonthephone.,Introduceyourfavoritestar.介绍你最喜欢的明星。,Whichgroupisthebest?,Homework,Finishwritingandmakeitperfect.完成写作并完善它。,Thankyou!,Step1,Correctthemistakesintense.(改正时态错误),Step1,Step2,Correctthemistakesintense.(改正时态错误),Puttheeventsinthecorrectorder.(句子排序),Step1,Step2,Correctthemistakesintense.(改正时态错误),Puttheeventsinthecorrectorder.(句子排序),Usesomeproperconjunctions.(使用恰当的连词),Step3,Step1,Step2,Correctthemistakesintense.(改正时态错误),Puttheeventsinthecorrectorder.(句子排序),Usesomeproperconjunctions.(使用恰当的连词),Step3,Maketheendingbetter.(写好结尾),Step4,Shareanexcellentpassage.,Shareinclass.全班分享。,WangSulongisafantasticsingerwhocomesfromShenyang.Hewasbornin1989.HisEnglishnameisSilence.W.HefellinlovewithsingingwhenhewasachildandhisfavoritesingerisZhouJielun.SohehopedthathecantobeapopsingerlikeZhouJielunoneday.Nowhehasachievedhisdreamthroughhishardworking.HecameouthisfirstCDwhenhewasonly21yearsold.Fromthenon,hehasbeenfamousandpopular.Lastyear,hewontheBestSinger.Hehascameoutmorethano