九年级英语作文.pptx

MaChiMiddleSchoolByZhangXia,Rulesmakeourlifebetter!,EnglishWriting,Whatsthevideoabout?,Rules,Letswatch,Inthemorning,we_getupearly.Andwe_washourfacefirst.,aresupposedto,should,Letstalk,aresupposedto,should,must,haveto,Inthemorning,we_brushourteethverywell.,haveto,We_washourhandsaftergoingtotherestroom.,must,We_wastetime.,/arenotallowedto,cant,Letssay,should/shouldntbe(not)supposedtobeexpectedtobe(not)allowedto,getourearspierced,stickthechopsticksintothefood,gooutatnight,makeourbedaftergettingup,helpwiththehousework,We_gooutatnight.,Norulesnostandards.(没有规矩,不成方圆）,Everynationhasitsownlawsandeveryfamilyhasitsownrules!(国有国法，家有家规）,MyfamilyruleTeenagersalwayshaveourownfamilyrules.Firstofall,IhavetodomyhomeworkfirsteachtimeassoonasIcomebackfromschool.Secondly,ImnotallowedtowatchTVorplaycomputergamesbeforereadingbecausemyparentsthinkthatstudyingisthemostimportantthing.IknowitsgoodformeandIalwaystrymybesttofollowit.Atthesametime,Imaskedtodochoresasmanyaspossible.Tostartwith,Icouldntunderstandsomeoftherules.Littlebylittle,IhavegotusedtodoingthatandIthinktheymakeourlifebetter.,Letsenjoy,Discussion,mainidea,分析题目，确立主题,clearstructure,wonderfulsentences,tense时态/grammar/spelling,Beautifulhandwriting,（正确使用短语，连接词，句式多样）,check,Letssummarize(总结）,Middle,Ending,concludingsentence（总结，个人观点）,supportingsentence（支持句，如：例子、实事、数据或引文）,topicsentence（主题句）,Beginning,Writing,Tips:aspects(要点全面)writing(书写工整)extension(适当拓展)structure(结构清晰)logicality(逻辑合理)grammar(语言准确)fluency(行文流畅）=perfect（完美）,Letsthink,Whatisthevideoabout?,Howtobeagoodstudent,Letsshow,Letswrite,俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规，校有校纪”为了使学生在学校顺利成长，使校园更加的美好和谐，每个学校都会有这样或那样的规矩。比如：不准迟到，不准打电子游戏，不准使用手机，不能在走廊上跑等。请你结合学校的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“MySchoolRules”为题，写一篇短文。提示：1、学校有哪些校规；2、对校规的感受；3、对学校的建议。（wearschooluniform,eatinthedininghall,nosmoking)要求：1、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；2、词数：不少于80词；3、文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。,Letsdopeerassesment,（同伴互评）,（1）采用总体印象评分法。评分时，先确定所属档次，然后以该档次的要求微调，最后给分。内容完整，语言流畅，构思新颖，表达准确的进第一档。要点基本表达清楚、叙述完整的进第二档（12分上下浮动）（2）按照题目要求表达信息。未致歉、未说明迟到原因、未介绍打算的各扣3分。单词拼写和标点错误，每两处扣0.5分。（3）书写整洁1分。少于或多于规定词数30%的酌情扣1至3分。,Wonderfularticles,Wonderfularticles,(美文欣赏）,Presentsome