2012年高考英语考点预测冲刺★书面表达

2012年高考英语考点预测冲刺书面表达最新热点预测对比议论型高考英语书面表达最新热点预测一【无车日与环保】9月22日你所在的城市和另外107个城市开展了“无车日“活动，倡议人们选用公共汽车、自行车或步行等绿色交通方式来代替开私家车。该活动得到了全国人民的支持，提高了人们节约能源与保护环境的意识，活动很成功。下面请你用英语写一篇短文介绍该活动，并谈谈开展该活动的必要性，号召更多的城市和居民参与到该活动中来。注意1不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2词数100左右。3参考词汇无车日CARFREEDAY；开展LAUNCH【参考范文】ONEPOSSIBLEVERSIONCARFREEDAYWASLAUNCHEDINOURCITYAND107OTHERCITIESONSEPTEMBER22，TOENCOURAGEPEOPLETOTAKEPUBLICTRANSPORT，RIDEBICYCLESORWALKINSTEADOFDRIVINGPRIVATECARSTHECAMPAIGNHASGAINEDMUCHSUPPORTALLOVERTHECOUNTRYANDHASRAISEDAWARENESSAMONGALLPEOPLEOFENERGYSAVINGANDENVIRONMENTALPROTECTIONITSAREALSUCCESSWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFTHEECONOMY,MOREANDMOREFAMILIESHAVEBOUGHTPRIVATECARS,THUSLEADINGTOMUCHHEAVIERTRAFFICPROBLEMSANDMORESERIOUSAIRPOLLUTIONTHEREFORE,ITHINKITSNECESSARYTOLAUNCHSUCHCAMPAIGNSANDIHOPEMOREANDMORECITIESANDTHEIRRESIDENTSWILLTAKEPARTINTHISTYPEOFACTIVITY高考英语书面表达最新热点预测二【网上交友】假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生DAVID登的一则启事希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给DAVID发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括1你怎样得知DAVID的愿望2你愿意成为他的朋友3你打算如何帮助他4你盼望他的回复。注意1电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数2词数100左右。【猜题理由】交友话题为学生熟知，也符合当前对学生的情感教育方向。利用此话题加强学生英语交际能力的培养，较好地体现了“语境生活化、任务真实性、行为个性化“的设计特点。【构思点拨】该命题属于应用文，需符合电子邮件的格式要求。在写作过程中要抓住要点提示，做到不遗漏、不重复，并注意保持书信语言的简洁性和精炼性。【参考范文】DEARDAVID,IVELEARNEDITFROMTHEINTERNETTHATYOUWANTTOMAKEACHINESEFRIENDSOASTOLEARNTHECHINESELANGUAGEANDCULTUREIMGLADTHATYOUSHOWSUCHGREATINTERESTINCHINAANDIWORLDLIKETOBEYOURFRIENDIWILLTRYMYBESTTOWRITETOYOUASOFTENASPOSSIBLETOINTRODUCEYOUTHECHINESECULTUREWHENYOUHAVEANOPPORTUNITYTOCOMETOCHINA,ILLTEACHYOUHOWTOSPEAKCHINESEANDSHOWYOUAROUNDSOMEFAMOUSHISTORICALPLACESOFINTERESTANYWAY,IAMGOINGTOHELPYOUASMUCHASICANHOWDOYOUTHINKIMLOOKINGFORWARDTOYOURREPLYYOURSSINCERELY,LIHUA高考英语书面表达最新热点预测三【对高三生活的看法】假如你是武汉大学附中高三1的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。1对获得的帮助表示感谢2消除与同学之间的误会3努力学习，实现人生梦想4对学弟、学妹的建议。注意1可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯2词数100左右开头已给出，不计入总词数。【猜题理由】本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际，话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观，具有考查的现实意义和指导意义在语言表达上，能够让学生充分运用所学知识，毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想此外，在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激发学生个性观点的创建。【构思点拨】本篇书面表达是常见的提纲类型的写作，要点明确清楚，便于学生组织文章，理清脉络。行文时要注意处理好语言表达的控制性和伸展性之间的关系。【参考范文】HIGHSCHOOLISREGARDEDASTHEBESTTIMEINAPERSONSLIFEASASENIORTHREESTUDENT,ITWONTTAKELONGBEFOREIGRADUATENOW,IHAVEMUCHTOSHAREWITHMYFELLOWSTUDENTSFIRSTLY,IWOULDLIKETOSHOWMYAPPRECIATIONTO感激THOSESTANDINGBYMEALLTHEWAY,TEACHERS,PARENTSANDFRIENDSINCLUDEDWITHOUTTHEIRHELPANDADVICE,MYLIFEWOULDBEDIFFERENTSECONDLY,ITSHIGHTIMETOSAYSORRYTOCLASSMATESWHOMIHURTORMISUNDERSTOODCOMMUNICATIONANDSMILESACTASBRIDGESTOFRIENDSHIPABOVEALL,IVEMADEUPMYMINDTOMAKEEVERYEFFORTTOSTUDY,FORIBELIEVEHARDWORKISTHEKEYTOSUCCESSJUSTASTHEOLDSAYINGGOES,“NOPAINS,NOGAINS“FINALLYIHOPETHATALLTHEYOUNGERFELLOWSCANMAKEFULLUSEOFTIME,BECAUSETIMEANDTIDEWAITFORNOMEN高考英语书面表达最新热点预测四开通微博很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的微博。一方面，微博可以作为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师认为管理个人微博要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。请对此现象进行介绍，并发表自己的看法。NOWADAYS,ITISACOMMONPHENOMENONTHATMOREANDMOREHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSOPENTHEIROWNMICROBLOGSONTHEINTERNETTHEREAREADVANTAGESANDDISADVANTAGESABOUTTHISMATTERFORONETHING,ITPROVIDESTHEMACOLORFULWINDOWTOSHOWTHEIRIDEASANDALSOAWAYFORTHEMTORELAX,WHICHMAKESITMOREPOPULARAMONGHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSBUTMANYPARENTSANDTEACHERSAREWORRIEDABOUTITTHEYFEARTHATMANAGINGAMICROBLOGWILLTAKEALOTOFTIMEANDENERGY,WHICHWILLHAVEABADEFFECTONTHEIRLESSONSINMYOPINION,IDOPREFERTHISACTIVITYBECAUSETHEINTERNETISPLAYINGAMOREIMPORTANTANDNECESSARYPARTINOURLIFEINANAGEOFINFORMATION,WEHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSHAVETOLEARNANDMAKETHEMOSTOFTHISUSEFULTOOLTOCOMMUNICATEANDSHOWOURSELVES【议论评价题型】议论题型的解决方法要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径问题现状怎样解决解决方案的优缺点模式AINRECENTDAYS,WEHAVETOFACETHEPROBLEMA,WHICHISBECOMINGMOREANDMORESERIOUSFIRST,说明的现状SECOND,举例进一步说明现状FACEDWITHA,WESHOULDTAKEASERIESOFEFFECTIVEMEASURESTOCOPEWITHTHESITUATIONFORONETHING,解决方法一FORANOTHER解决方法二FINALLY,解决方法三PERSONALLY,IBELIEVETHAT我的解决方法CONSEQUENTLY,IMCONFIDENTTHATABRIGHTFUTUREISAWAITINGUSBECAUSE带来的好处模式BWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFMODERNINDUSTRY,MOREANDMOREPEOPLEARECONCERNEDABOUTTHEPROBLEM点题ITISBECAUSEFIRSTLY,SECONDLYTHIRDLY原因或现象123PERSONALLY,IBELIEVETHAT（结论，前景，解决方式）MANISNOWFACINGWITHABIGPROBLEMOF,WHICHISBECOMINGMOREANDMORESERIOUS点题，重要性或严重性THEREASONSFORTHISARELISTEDASFOLLOWSFIRSTLY,SECONDLYTHIRDLY原因或理由123INBRIEF,结论或措施VERYOFTENYOUCOMEACROSSANEMPTYCLASSROOMWITHTHELIGHTONITSNOTDIFFICULTTOFINDEVIDENCEOFWASTINGWATER,AVERYSERIOUSPROBLEMADDITIONALLY,STUDENTSDONOTRECYCLEENOUGH,THROWINGAWAYTHESOFTDRINKBOTTLES,USEDEXERCISEPAPERSANDBOOKSWORSESTILL,MANYSTUDENTSSTILLUSETHENONENVIRONMENTALLYFRIENDLYLUNCHBOXES,CAUSINGTHEWHITEPOLLUTIONTHESETHINGSSHOWTHATMANYSTUDENTSLACKTHESENSEOFENVIRONMENTALAWARENESSITSIMPORTANTTOEDUCATESTUDENTSTOBEMOREENVIRONMENTALLYFRIENDLYATTHESAMETIME,STUDENTSCANDOSMALLTHINGS,SUCHASCOLLECTINGUSEDITEMFORRECYCLING,TURNINGOFFTHELIGHTSANDSAVINGWATERALWAYSREMEMBERTHATITSEVERYONESRESPONSIBILITYTOPROTECTTHEENVIRONMENT生活情境热点预测高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测一描述公共汽车上让座的情形。写作思路1体裁故事2时态一般过去时态为主。3写作要点（1）一位老年人上车（2）老人驼背，拄着拐杖（3）让座给奶奶（4）小孩子让座（5）大家表扬这个可爱的孩子。4单词、短语和句型的选择OFFERASEATWASFULLOF/WASCROWDEDTAKEASEATLEDSBTOPRAISEDSBFORSTH5注意事项（1）可能有图片，图片内容阐述要详略得当（2）描写要形象生动、得体运用词汇【参考范文】OFFERINGSEATSONEDAY,AGRANNYWITHGREYHAIRGOTONTHEBUSATABUSSTOPSHEWASINHERSEVENTIESWITHAWALKINGSTICKINHERRIGHTHANDTHEBUSWASFULLOFPASSENGERSANDTHEREWASNOEMPTYSEATSUDDENLYINTHEFRONTOFTHEBUS,AVOICECAMEFORMALITTLEBOYHESAID“GRANNY,TAKEMYSEAT”FOLLOWINGTHEVOICE,PEOPLESAWALOVELYBOYOFABOUT4YEARSOLDHECAMEANDLEDTHEOLDWOMANTOHISSEATANDASKEDHERTOSITDOWNBESIDETHEBOYWASHISMOTHERSHESMILEDATHERCHILDANDALLTHEPASSENGERSWEREHAPPYANDPRAISEDTHEBOYFORHISGOODMANNERSWHATAGOODBOYHEIS高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测二野餐等聚会活动地点描述。范文背诵（一封短信或便条）JUNELST,2005DEARPETER,WERESOGLADYOURECOMINGTOJOINUSONSUNDAYHEREISHOWYOUCANFINDUSWELLHAVEOURPICNICINTHEPEOPLESPARKYOUKNOWWHERETHATIS,DONTYOUAFTERYOUENTERTHEPARKBYTHEMAINGATE,WALKSTRAIGHTONTILLYOUCOMETOASTREAMCROSSTHESTREAMANDTURNRIGHTAFTERWALKINGFORAWHILEYOULLCOMETOAHILLWALKAROUNDTOTHEOTHERSIDEOFTHEHILLTHEREYOULLSEEALAKEWELLHAVEOURPICNICTHEREINTHESMALLWOODSBYTHELAKEIMSUREYOULLHAVENOTROUBLEFINDINGUSDOCOMEYOURSLIHUA高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测三创新预测应用文提纲式/安排好友来访假设你是李华，是成都育才中学的高三学生。你的英国网友JIM发来电子邮件，告诉你他将于今年暑假来中国旅游，并决定来成都和你呆一周。但他有些情况不清楚。请你给他回一封电子邮件。注意1、词数60左右；2、文中应包括方框内所有的提示内容，可以适当发挥。SUBJECTVISITTOCHINAFROMJIMDEARLIHUA,IFEELVERYEXCITEDABOUTMYVISITTOCHINAANDMEETINGYOUFORTHEFIRSTTIMEBUTIMSTILLNOTSUREABOUTTHEFOLLOWING1WHENWILLYOUBEFREE2HOWCANIGETTOYOURPLACE3WHATSTHEWEATHERLIKETHERE4WHATSHALLWEDOTOGETHERPLEASELETMEKNOWYOURFRIEND,JIMDEARJIM,IAMSOEXCITEDTHATYOULLCOMETOCHINAANDSTAYWITHMEFORAWEEKDURINGTHESUMMERVACATION从6月18日你就有时间陪他了。乘飞机到成都，到成都机场去接他。然后一块乘汽车来学校。成都夏天气温高，不用带太多衣服。参观当地著名风景名胜并一起游泳。ILLBEFREESINCEJUNE18THANDWILLHAVEPLENTYOFTIMETOBEWITHYOUWHENYOUCOME,PLEASETAKEAPLANETOCHENGDUILLMEETYOUATCHENGDUAIRPORTANDTHENWELLCATCHABUSTOOURSCHOOLTHEWEATHERHEREINSUMMERISVERYHOT,SOYOUNEEDNTTAKEMANYCLOTHESDURINGYOURSTAYHERE,ILLTAKEYOUTOSOMEPLACESOFINTERESTWEAREGOINGTOSWIMTHEREIMSUREWELLHAVEAVERYGOODTIMETOGETHERLOOKINGFORWARDTOMEETINGYOUSOONYOURS,LIHUA高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测四创新预测应用文提纲式/留言条假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他没有在家，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下（1）930在学校门口集合；（2）带劳动工具（洗衣粉、理发工具、除草（WEEDING）工具等）；（3）自带午饭，骑自行车前往。注意（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性，2011年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活化的原则。应注意下面几点（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明（第二人称）写便条（2）注意时态的正确使用从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时；（3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开门见山。【参考范文】DEARLIMING,THISSUNDAYWELLGOTOTHENURSINGHOMEANDDOSOMEVOLUNTARYLABORYOUWEREOUT,WHENIDROPPEDINONYOUTHEREFORE,IHADTOLEAVEAMESSAGETOYOUACCORDINGTOWHATMONITORSAID,WELLMEETATTHEGATEOFOURSCHOOLAT930TOMORROWMORNINGANDSTARTOUTTOGETHERBYBIKESOYOUSHOULDTAKEYOURBIKEANDDONTFORGETTOTAKESOMEWASHINGPOWDER,BARBERTOOLSANDWEEDINGTOOLSSOTHATWECANHELPTHEMWITHWASHINGCLOTHES,CUTTINGTHEIRHAIRANDGETRIDOFSOMEWEEDINTHEGARDENATLAST,YOUSHOULDREMEMBERTOTAKESOMEFOODFORLUNCHBECAUSEWELLSTAYTHEREFORCHATTINGWITHTHEMATNOONIFYOUCOMEBACK,YOULLPHONEMEATONCELIHUA数字、方位说明热点预测高考英语书面表达数字、方位说明热点预测一应用文便条路线图你叫李明，你住友谊宾馆的英国朋友MIKE明天想到你校（第一中学）参观。你提前到其住处告诉行走路线，但他不在，你便随手在一张纸上画上路线图，并在图下简短附言提示。请按图写一便条。友谊宾馆十字路口红绿灯公园银行大约100米第一中学MAY11,2003DEARMIKE,WELCOMETOMYSCHOOLIVECOMEHEREINPERSONTOTELLYOUHOWTOGOTOMYSCHOOL,BUTYOUAREOUTSOIHAVETOLEAVETHISDIAGRAPHTOREMINDYOUOFTHECOURSEYOUSHOULDTURNLEFTWHENYOUGETOUTOFTHERAILWAYSTATIONGODOWNTHEROADANDYOUWILLSEETHEFIRSTCROSSINGGOSTRAIGHTAHEADTILLYOUSEETHETRAFFICLIGHTSNEXT,YOUSHOULDTURNRIGHTATTHETRAFFICLIGHTSTHENYOULLPASSBYAPARKWHICHISONYOURLEFTGOSTRAIGHTAHEADTILLYOUGETTOABANK,ANDYOULLFINDTHATTHEREISASTREETOPPOSITETHEBANKNOWWALKDOWNTHESTREETABOUT100METERS,ANDYOUWILLSEENO1MIDDLESCHOOLONYOURLEFTYOUCANTMISSITILOOKFORWARDTOSEEINGYOUSOONLIMING高考英语书面表达数字、方位说明热点预测二参观学校解说词。LADIESANDGENTLEMEN,WELCOMETOOURSCHOOLIMVERYGLADTOSAYTHATSOMETHINGABOUTOURSCHOOLTOYOUOURSCHOOLWASFOUNDEDIN1959NOWTHEREARE2,300STUDENTSIN44CLASSESTHEREARETWOHUNDREDANDNINETYTEACHERSANDSTAFFTHESCHOOLHASFOURSCIENCELABORATORIES/LABS,ONELANGUAGELABORATORY,ONECOMPUTERROOMANDABIGLIBRARYITSAKEYSCHOOLHEREANDVERYBEAUTIFULITALSOHASANEWLIBRARYANDALARGEPLAYGROUNDBESIDES,ANEWARTSBUILDINGISUNDERCONSTRUCTIONHOPEYOUWILLENJOYTHEMANDHAVEAGOODTIME身边生活热点预测高考英语书面表达网络热点预测一随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡，请根据提示阐述电子贺卡的优越性。1）可播放动画和声音。2）传播速度快。3）形式多样。4）有利于环境保护，节省资源。文章包括以上要点，可适当发挥，不要逐条翻译。提示词电子贺卡ELECTRONICCARD动画ANIMATIONWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFINTERNET,MOREANDMOREPEOPLETENDTOSENDELECTRONICCARDSINSTEADOFPAPERONESATNEWYEARSTIMECOMPAREDWITHTHETRADITIONALCARDS,ELECTRONICCARDSAREMOREINTERESTINGANDLIVELY,FORYOUCANGETNOTONLYPICTURESBUTALSOSOUNDANDEVENANIMATIONSINADDITION,ITSFASTERTOSENDANELECTRONICCARDONINTERNET,WHEREDIFFERENTVARIETIESOFCARDSAREAVAILABLEMOREOVER,YOUCANDESIGNCARDSOFUNIQUESTYLEUSINGFLASHOROTHERSOFTWAREIFYOUARENTINTERESTEDINANYOFTHEGIVENONESMOREIMPORTANTLY,WITHTHEPOPULARITYOFELECTRONICCARDS,LESSPAPERISUSEDFORMAKINGCARDS,WHICHCONTRIBUTESTOTHEENVIRONMENTPROTECTION高考英语书面表达网络热点预测二近年来尽管政府在改善居住上花了大量资金，但是住房问题仍然是中国许多大城市所面临的最严重问题之一。对此话题你班举行了热烈的讨论。一部分人建议多造高层建筑HIGHRISEAPARTMENTS，一部分人认为向地下发展。而你赞成前一种观点。你的理由1建筑费用便宜；2久住地下对身体不利；3地上阳光充足，地下只有人造光源你的结论提示人造光源（ARTIFICIALLIGHTING）现请你以HOWTOSOLVETHEHOUSINGPROBLEMINBIGCITIES为题写120字以上的短文。HOWTOSOLVETHEHOUSINGPROBLEMINBIGCITIESINRECENTYEARSTHEGOVERNMENTHASSPENTALARGESUMOFMONEYINIMPROVINGHOUSINGBUTTHESHORTAGEOFHOUSINGISONEOFTHEMOSTSERIOUSPROBLEMSFACINGMANYBIGCITIESINCHINAWEVEDISCUSSEDHEATEDLYTHETOPIC“HOWTOSOLVETHEHOUSINGPROBLEMINBIGCITIES”SOMEOFUSSUGGESTBUILDINGMOREHIGHRISEAPARTMENTSWHILEOTHERSBELIEVETODEVELOPUNDERGROUNDHOUSINGAREASIAMINFAVOROFTHEFORMEROPINIONFORONETHING,ITISCHEAPERTOBUILDABOVEGROUNDTHANBELOWFORANOTHER,LIVINGUNDERGROUNDFORALONGTIMEWILLDOHARMTOPEOPLESHEALTHABOVEALL,PEOPLEAREUNWILLINGTOLIVEUNDERGROUNDWITHARTIFICIALLIGHTINGANDTHEYPREFERTOLIVEABOVEGROUNDTOENJOYTHESUNSHINEALTHOUGHTHEREMAYBESOMEOTHERWAYSTOSOLVETHEHOUSINGSHORTAGEPROBLEM,IBELIEVETOBUILDMOREHIGHRISEAPARTMENTSISONEOFTHEPROMISINGSOLUTIONSTOTHEHOUSINGPROBLEM高考英语书面表达网络热点预测三请根据对某校这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论。【学生习作】WITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFTHEINTERNET,NOWADAYSMANYSTUDENTSOWNQQSACCORDINGTOTHECHART,IN2004,ONLY20OFTHESTUDENTSHADQQS,BUTIN2005,40HADQQSIN2006,ABOUT50OFTHEMOWNEDQQS,ANDIN2007,60OFTHEMHADQQSSOTHEREISNODOUBTTHATQQHASBEENVERYPOPULARAMONGMIDDLESCHOOLSTUDENTSTHEREAREMANYREASONSFORTHATFIRST,（2分）THEYAREVERYCONVENIENTTOCOMMUNICATEWITHEACHOTHERSECOND,THEYCANENTERTAIN（1分）THEMTHROUGHQQ,（2分）SUCHASTHEYCANPLAYGAMES,ENJOYMUSICANDEVENWATCHTVQQSFUNCTIONSAREBECOMINGMOREANDMOREASARESULT,ITHASEVENPROVIDEDTHELATESTNEWSESPECIALLYENTERTAINMENT,SOTHEYNEEDNTREADNEWSPAPERSPERSONALLY,STUDENTSSHOULDMAKEPROPERUSEOFANDNOTBEADDICTEDTOQQ,ANDTHENITCANSERVEITSPURPOSEBEAUTIFULLY（得分档次第四档，18分）【习作评析】1总体评价本文是一篇叙议结合的短文，要点基本齐全。作者首先简要描述了变化，并在第二段就QQ流行的原因做了说明，最后提出建议。此外，本文作者合理使用了一些关联词和过度词语，使文章前后连贯，内容紧凑，过渡自然，提高了文章的得分档次。但是由于第一段过于单调，减去2分，加上出现一些明显的词语用法错误，使得文章失分不少。2误点点拨改为ITSCONVENIENTFORTHEM,CONVENIENT的主语不可为人。THEM改为THEMSELVES。改为FOREXAMPLE。注意后面应加上逗号，SUCHAS后面不能接句子。画龙点睛文章的第一段由于数据的堆砌使得句式单调，如40HAVEQQS可改为THERATEDOUBLED。可将IN2006,ABOUT50OFTHEMOWNEDQQS,ANDIN2007,60OFTHEMHADQQS整合为一句，LIKEWISE,ITROSEFROMABOUT50IN2006TO60IN2007这样修改使句子更加简洁，避免了重复。【范文】ASISSHOWNINTHECHART,THERATEOFSTUDENTSWHOOWNEDQQSINCREASEDINTHEPASTFOURYEARSFROM2004TO2007BACKIN2004,ONLY20OFTHEMHAVEQQSONEYEARLATER,THERATEBECOMESTWICELARGERCOMPAREDWITHABOUT50IN2006,THERATEIN2007ROSETO60CLEARLY,ITISTENDINGTOINCREASEINMYOPINION,THEINCREASECANBEACCOUNTEDFORTWOFACTORSFORONETHING,THEWIDESPREADUSEOFTHEINTERNETMAKESITCONVENIENTFORSTUDENTSTOCOMMUNICATEWITHEACHOTHERFORANOTHER,QQPROVIDESALLKINDSOFENTERTAINMENTS,SUCHASPLAYINGGAMESANDENJOYINGMUSICWHATSMORE,QQHASGRADUALLYBECOMETHEMAINMEANSFORTHEPUBLICTOKNOWTHELATESTNEWSPERSONALLY,STUDENTSSHOULDMAKEPROPERUSEOFANDNOTBEADDICTEDTOQQ,ANDONLYSOCANITSERVEITSPURPOSEBEAUTIFULLY【通知】热点预测高考英语书面表达模板1口头通知1口头通知通常是口头传达的消息，表达时要尽可能地口语化，做到言简意赅。口头通知一般不用写出通知的时间或发出通知的单位。2口头通知的开头常要有称呼语，具体应根据通知的对象而定。常用的称呼语有BOYSANDGIRLS,LADIESANDGENTLEMEN,COMRADESANDFRIENDS,TEACHERSANDFELLOWSTUDENTS等。注意写称呼语时，首行应顶格写。3口头通知常用的开头有MAYIHAVEYOURATTENTION,PLEASE/ATTENTION,PLEASE/PLEASEBEQUIET/LISTEN,PLEASE等结束语常THATSALLTHANKYOUFORLISTENING等，以示礼貌。2书面通知写书面通知时，应明确写出发出通知的单位和日期。一般情况下，书面通知的首行中央写上NOTICE或ANANNOUNCEMENT等。通知的发布单位常写在正文结束的右下角，也可以写在NOTICE的上方或前面，发布通知的日期一般写在正文的左下角在落款的下一行或写在通知正文的右上角在NOTICE的下一行。口头通知和书面通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时，一般用祈使句来强调。通知的语言要简洁明了,条理清晰,准确无误,特别是时间概念很重要，必须写得十分明确，不容丝毫含糊。除了上面提到的称呼和开头语外，主题内容可参照以下模板INORDERTO_,_ISTOBEHELDON_DAY,_DATE,AT_TIMEIN_PLACEWHOEVERISINTERESTEDINITISWELCOMETOATTEND_THOSEWHOWANTTOTAKEPARTIN_PLEASESIGNUPATTHESTUDENTSUNIONPLEASEREMEMBER_书面表达之步步为赢策略一、变换句型结构（简单句、并列句和复合句）1使用各种从句WHATSURPRISEDUSMOSTISASEVERYONEKNOWS,2使用省略结构YOUCANTURNTOYOURTEACHERIFNECESSARY3使用祈使句结构STARTATONCE,ORYOULLCATCHTHEBUS4使用虚拟语气ITISTIMETHATMEASURESWERETAKENTOPREVENTSUCHATHINGFROMHAPPENINGAGAIN5使用感叹句WHATAWONDERFULANDUNFORGETTABLEEXPERIENCEHOWIMPORTANTITISTOFORMAGOODHABIT6使用THEREBE结构THEREISNONEEDFORSBTODOSTHTHEREISNODOUBTTHAT二、变换句式结构（用不同的语法结构）1UNABLETOGETTHEWORKDONEBEFOREDARK,THEYDECIDETODOITTOMORROW（形容词或形容词短语开头）2NOTONLYDOESHEENJOYPLAYINGFOOTBALL,BUTALSOHELIKESPLAYINGBASKETBALL（倒装句）3JUDGINGFROMHISEXPRESSION,HEHASNOTFINISHEDHISHOMEWORK（分词作状语）4ANIDEAOCCURREDTOME（以物做主语）三、善用、巧用过渡词或短语递进型BESIDES,ALSO,WHATSMORE/WORSE解释型INOTHER