英语网考(B)考前辅导讲座(英语写作ppt课件

1、英语网考（B）,英语写作 解题指导,英语写作考核要点,紧扣主题：这是写作最主要考核点。一般写作考试都是命题作文，一定要围绕主题展开细节。要特别注意出题时的具体要求，要依据这些要求展开内容（但不要把这些要求的句子翻译后写到自己文章里） 言之有物：写作忌讳空洞无物，不要空话连篇，尽可能举出自己身边有说服力或吸引力的实例，来充实文中的观点或论点。 逻辑分明，层次清晰：切忌把不相关的句子拼凑到一起，没有情节或论说的连贯性。 避免汉语式英语：有些固定说法、习惯用语、习语成语等，要尽可能用英语固有的内容。句型结构要按英语语法和语言习惯要求来构筑。 以上这几个部分是阅卷评分时主要考核点。,写作时的一些注意事

2、项,1、体裁 英语写作体裁常见的有： 应用文：如信函、邮件、便条、明信片、通知、邀请 函等。 写作应用文应注意的有： （1）格式。应用文考核点着重于格式是否正确，要注意观察和掌握不同文体的格式要求。 （2）用词。英语单词有书面语和口语之分，在公函中要尽可能避免口语表达式，以免显得不庄重严肃；私人信函分生人公务和熟人联络两种类型。生人公务同样要注意避免口语化，熟人信函则要避免使用严肃的书面语，以免显得疏远生硬。此外，词汇也分高雅和低俗，要避免使用低俗或俚语化的词汇。 （3）年月日书写格式。分英式、美式和中式三种，尽可能不用简单的数字表达，以避免产生误解。,叙述文：如故事、小说、剧本等。 写作叙述

3、文时应注意的有： （1）时空。从时间角度看，情节可以正叙、倒叙、插叙，但要注意衔接和跳转的逻辑性和顺畅性，避免混乱。从空间角度看，要站在读者角度向外瞻望，由近及远，由点及面，方位方向有序，避免立足点随意跳跃。 （2）主次分明。在叙述细节时，重点讲述和主题有关的情节，淡化或省略与主题无关的内容，突出重点。关键的要素如时间、地点、人物等内容不可缺少。 （3）段落。要按情节发展自然分段。要避免从头到尾只有一段，也要避免分段凌乱无层次。 （4）手法。可适当使用比喻、对比、比较、拟人等各种手法。,说明文：如图表分析与解释、产品使用说明、研究结果介绍等。 写作说明文应注意的有： （1）概括。说明文通常要在

4、开始处做出总括性的介绍，要抓住核心，开门见山，言简意赅，直奔主题，避免花哨无用的铺陈。 （2）方法。说明文要运用好各种阐述方法，如分类、定义、对比、对照、比较、因果分析，以及举例说明。 （3）结构与层次。可以适当运用序数词使阐述的层次清晰，如使用first，second，next，finally等词汇分层叙述。 （4）趋势。在写图表分析与解释，或介绍研究结果类的说明文时，除了要把图表或结果介绍中需阐释的内容解释清楚之外，还需要对其涉及的事物的未来发展趋势做出适当的推测和阐述。,议论文：如论文、方案、总结等。 写作议论文应注意的有： （1）主题。议论文最核心的内容就是要论及的主题，或我们常说的“

5、论点”，一般要开门见山，直陈主题。 （2）论述层次。议论文通常要求层次清晰，习惯上按三大段的方式展开。在开篇句之后的第一大段，可以先集中阐述和论点相关的正方（或反方）的意见和态度，第二大段集中阐述反方（或正方）的意见和态度，第三大段陈述自己的看法和意见，并提出解决问题的建议和方法。最后，用精炼的一句或几句话对未来趋势或结果做出概括，即所谓的“论证”。 （3）举例。议论文必须有较为充分和贴切的例子来支持论点，即所谓的“论据”。在举例是要特别注意，把说服力小的例子放在前，最有说服力或最重要的例子放在最后，是论述的力量逐渐递增，以防虎头蛇尾，失去力度。 （4）个人观点。在阐述正反两方观点立场时，一定

6、不要掺杂自己的观点和立场。自己的意见要在第三层次中详述。,写作时应避免的最常见错误,1、纠缠生词 写作时经常会遇到某个词想不起来的情况，此时要记得，任何事物都不是只有一个词汇才能表达的，要学会利用解释的方法（如词典的释文）把要表达的意思说出来，绕过生词。如: 想不起来的词： participate in （参加） 绕弯写法：He asked them to allowed him to the meeting together with them. 2、无主语 英语和汉语十分明显的差别之一是，英语句型始终要求有主语成分，而汉语可以省略。因此要避免把英语写成无主语的结构。例如： 打好行囊，唤上好

7、友，踏着朝霞映照下的晨露，走进深山，深吸一口湿润的空气，无限感概涌上心头：大自然太美了。 如果把这段内容直接译成英语，就会出现无主语的错误，解决的方法是在英语适当的位置加上主语）,打好行囊，唤上好友，踏着朝霞映照下的晨露，走进深山，深吸一口湿润的空气，无限感概涌上心头：大自然太美了。 Having packed what I need, I invited my friends to start off with me. We stepped on the morning dews under the sunglow, and then went into the remote mountai

8、n area where we enjoyed a deep breath of humid fresh air. Suddenly an endless emotion burst into our mind: How beautiful the nature is! 3、主语失配 误：Sank into the sea, we set off at once to save those people struggling in the cold water. 正：On hearing the sinking of the ship into the sea, we set off at o

9、nce to save those people struggling in the cold water.,4、词汇冲突或不一致 误：This is the my book. 正：This is the book of my. 误：We study English by listening, to speak, to write and read. 正：We study English by listening, speaking, writing and reading. 误： First, secondly, thirdly 正： First, second, third 5、错用词形

10、误： I will tell you detailly. 正： I will tell you in detail.,6、人称混乱 Everyone knows that exercises are good for health. You should get up early in the morning to jog in a park nearby. In this way, we may get stronger and stronger along the time goes by. 7、汉语式英语 请勿向车窗外抛掷杂物 Please not towards train windo

11、ws out to throw to throw mixed thing. 乘梯须知 Multiply by step beard know 给你点颜色看看 Give you some color to see see （正: Ill teach you a lesson）,注意事项,篇幅长度：网考B要求写作的词汇数量为80词左右，因此不要少于该要求，通常10句话基本就能达到数量要求。但也不要超过该限量过多，否则也会减分。 文章格式和标点：无论起笔时用的是齐头式还是缩头式，都一定要保持各段落风格一致。切不要把汉语的标点符号用到英文中，如书名号，顿号、及汉语省略号。 尽可能打腹稿：在心里构思好，

12、然后在电脑上直接输入。如先打草稿，再去输入，往往时间会很紧张或最后来不及做完。,范文参考,1、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 Sports 1、你喜欢什么运动 2、你如何喜欢上这种运动 3、运动对你有什么益处（工作、学习和生活）,例文： Sports Just like lots of teenagers take to pop music, I love basketball. Its part of my life. I began to play basketball in my childhood. I still remember th

13、e good old days when I played with my classmates after school. Later on, as I grew up, almost everything changed, but this sport playing basketball remained and my love of it grew even stronger. I love this sport because it brings joys and health to my life. When I got tired from office work, I went

14、 to the sports ground and felt refreshed. If there were worries and cares from daily life, I went to the sports ground. There everything went away except basketball. It is basketball that keeps me in good shape and mood.,2、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 Water and life 1、随着工业化的推进（industriali

15、zation），地区上的淡水（fresh water）越来越少。 2、生命没水就要消亡（disappear），因此人类要珍惜（treasure）淡水。 3、我们如何节约用水,例文： Water and life While we are enjoying the rich fruit of modern industrialization, we are losing something precious on this planet. Fresh water, among others, is dwindling down （缩小）day by day, owing to the large

16、-scale industrialization everywhere in the world. Just as sunshine is a necessity to life, so is fresh water. Without fresh water, our human society would come to a stop. As fresh water is such an important resource to the human society, we need to treasure it as we treasure our life, but how? First

17、, our government should have a good plan for the use of fresh water and develop industries that consume less water. Second, waste water must be recycled. Finally everyone of us should do his bit to save water.,3、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 A Get-together on May 1st 1、了解对方近日的情况 2、你的近况并通知他

18、（她）：五一长假有个同学聚会 3、邀请对方参加,Dear Wang Hong, How is everything getting on along with you? It is almost one year since we graduated from university. I miss you very much. What have you been doing all these days? I have been a middle school teacher in my hometown since graduation. Teaching always keeps me

19、busy, but I like my students and I love teaching, you know. So everything is fine here. There will b a former classmates getting together during this May Day holiday at my school. You are my best friend. I never forget those happy days we spent together. I hope you can come to my school when the tim

20、e is due and you are free. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours truly Li Hua,4、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 Help Me to Buy A Spoken English Book 1、介绍你的近况 2、请他帮你买英语口语书 3、欢迎他方便时来访,Dear Li Hua, Its long time we havent seen each other. I miss you very much. Hows everything going on with yo

21、u? I am busy preparing for PETS 4. I would appreciate if you could help me buy PETS 4 English oral textbook which was issued by the Beijing Press, because the books were sold out here. Drop in when you are free. I often think of those happy days we spent together when we were at university. Please l

22、et me know as soon as possible once you get the book. My best wishes. Yours truly Wang Lei,5、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 Bad Manners in Public 1、列举人们在公共场所的不良现象 2、对其中某一种现象陈述你的看法，并简单说明理由,Bad Manners in Public Although we consider ourselves as highly advanced beings living in a civilized so

23、ciety, bad manners can still be found here and there. For example, some cyclists run the red traffic lights, many passengers litter waste papers and plastic bags in public places, and some tourists scrabble in tourist attractions, let alone spit on the street. In the cinema, some audience talk loudl

24、y on cell phones in front of others. Im strongly against talking loudly in the cinema, for this behavior shows no respect at all to others; whats worse, it upset the audience who are in the mood of having fun.,6、 要求在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和中文提纲用英语写出不少于80词的短文。 My Opinion on Cell Phones 1、使用手机的好处 2、使用手机的弊端 3、

25、我的看法,My Opinion on Cell Phones Cell phones do play an important role in peoples daily life, but every coin has its two sides. To start with, as a wireless mobile phone, its convenient for the user at any time to contact others. Secondly, its a helpful companion. With a multifunctional cell phone in

26、hand, one can easily surf the net, downloading what he needs. However, the cell phone has many disadvantages. For one thing, the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly, not to mention its global service. For another, the radiation from the mobile phones might do harm t

27、o the users health. In my opinion, with its expenses being reduced sharply after Chinas entry into the WTO, its development will have a brighter future. Therefore its advantages will far outweigh its disadvantages.,其他供练习的参考题目,题目一： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “My Att

28、itude Towards Advertising”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、广告在目前到处都是 2、广告的正面和负面作用 3、我的观点,题目二： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “My Ideal Job”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、人们对职业有各种不同的

29、理想 2、我理想的职业是什么 3、我怎样为我理想的职业做准备,题目三： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “How to Succeed in Job Interview”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、面试在求职过程中的作用 2、取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止、谈吐、能力、自信、专业知识、实事求是等。,题目四： Directions: You are to write in 100-1

30、20 words about the title “Do Lucy Number Really Bring Good Number?”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、有人认为某些数字会带来好运 2、我认为数字与运气无关,题目五： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Reading Selectively or Extensively” . You should base your com

31、position on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、有人认为读书要有选择 2、有人认为应该博览群书 3、我的看法,题目六： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Is Failure a Bad Thing”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、失败是常有的事情 2、人们对失败又各种不同的态度 3、我对失败的态度,题目七： Directions:

32、You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Hobbies”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、爱好是一个人参加娱乐的各项活动 2、有些人的爱好是听音乐、收集邮票或硬币、画油画、做各项运动等 3、我的爱好,题目八： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Owning a Car in Big City”. You should base

33、 your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、随着生活水平的提高，在大城市里有越来越多的人开始拥有汽车 2、拥有汽车的好处 3、拥有汽车可能带来的问题,题目九： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Environmental Protection”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、现在环境保护的问题越来越重要 2、人类

34、在环保方面已经取得了很大的进步 3、将来仍然要采取更多的措施来解决环保问题,题目十： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “The Long Holiday and Our Tourist Industry”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、几年前，七天长假的概念逐渐被中国人接受 2、然而，旅游的狂热一方面带旺了旅游业，另一方面也带来一些不可避免的问题 3、我的观点：人们可以选择不同的方式度

35、过七天长假,题目十一： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “The Importance of Self-confidence”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、凡是均应有信心 2、没有信心的原因 3、有了正确的态度，建立信心是有可能的,题目十二： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “The Adva

36、ntages and disadvantages of Mobile Phones”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、手机越来越受欢迎 2、手机的好处 3、手机的坏处 4、我的看法,题目十三： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Computer and the Internet Bring People Closer”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1、电脑和网络造成社会孤独 2、电脑和网络改变了世界 3、电脑和网络拉近了人们的距离,题目十四： Directions: You are to write in 100-120 words about the title “Why Shall We Work”. You should base your composition on the outline gi