Writing

1、,Warming up : A Story,It was on a cold November night that I was walking home on a isolated(偏僻的) street. Feeling very nervous and frightened,I turned to the music for some relaxtion.Unfortunately,My smart phone had almost run out of electrity when, by the tiny moonlight,I saw a dark shadow approchin

2、g me without any sound.I hold my breath ,thinking to my self “Its only a passerby like me.” But when it drew near,I saw a .,假定你是李华，你在网上看到你校外教peter 正在招聘一名中文家教的广告，你对此很感兴 趣，请用英文写一封信，推荐自己。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2.可适当增添细节，使行文连贯；,Written Task,Do you want her ?,If you were peter,would you employ her/him ? Do you t

3、hink its fair for peter to hire her/him ? Is it enough to apply for a job in this way ?,?,?,?,?,How to write an application letter,unrefusable,common problems,Handwritting grammar vocabulary sentence pattern,.To learn how to write an Application Letter .To learn how to polish language,objectives,Tec

4、hniques,Add flesh to the bones to make enrichthe application letter and make it convincing . language polish to slect words,phrases&sentence patterns for vivid description and enjoyable style,Add flesh to the bones,Three Sub-techniques,Direct description,other peoples recognition,Details,Experiences

5、,Indirect description,Examples,Direct description with details,without details,with details,She is kind and patient. (Book 1 M2 My new teachers),She is kind and patient, and she explains English grammar so clearly that even I can understand it!she avoids making you feel stupid. (Book 1 M2 My new tea

6、chers),Direct description with details,Original,Revised,Im Li Hua Im Li Hua.a student of you. Im Li Hua ,a chinese.,Im Li Hua ,an outgoing, enthusiastic and patient student in your school.(同位语) Being a chinese native speaker ,I have a good command of Chinese,which makes me qualified for this job.(非谓

7、& 定语从句),Direct description with details,The book is popular.,By the 1850s, it was selling one million copies a year, making it one of the most popular school books ever. （结果状语） (B5 M1 The man who made spelling simple),without details,with details,Direct description with details,Yuan Longpings discov

8、eries is sucsessful.,As a result of Yuans discoveries ,Chinese rice production rose by 47.5%in the 1990s. 50,000 squre km of rice fileds were converted to growing other crops.(B4 M4 ),without details,with details,Direct description with details,Original,Revised,I learn Chinese for many years. I won

9、many honors for my shool.,I have learned it for more than 18 years ,which is in my blood . I have a good knowledge of English and have won 3 prizes in English contests,without others recognition,with others recognition,Beethoven is a talented musician.,Beethoven showed musical talent when he was ver

10、y young.Mozart was impressed by him.“He will give something woderful to the world,” he said.(B2 M3 Music),Indirect description with others recognition,Indirect description with others recognition,Original,Revised,I can teach Chinese well.,I once worked as the assistant to help the Chinese teacher de

11、al with the problems. At the end of the term , most of them think highly of efforts and they called me “The star teacher of tomorrow”,An example: story/experiences,Mrs Chen is very strictwe dont dare to say a word unless she asks us to.There are a few students in our class who keeps coming to class

12、late but they are always on time for Mrs Chens lessons. (Book 1 M2 My new teachers),without example,with example,Mrs Chen is very strictwe dont dare to say a word unless she asks us to.(Book 1 M2 My new teachers),An example: a story /experience,So why does he do it? Before he volunteered to direct t

13、he traffic, Timoteo had had lots of jobs .Then one day while he was driving a lorry load of bananas when he came off the road and fell three hundred metres down the moutain .Somehow he survived.Then a few years later,he was called out in the night to help pill people out of a bus which had crashed a

14、t there.This last experience had a profound effect on him ,so he felt that it was his mission in life to help others.(B5 M2 A job worth doing),Example one,Example two,An example:A experience/story,I have much experience. Im good at chinese. Whats more , I once assisted my Chinese teacher in dealing

15、with class affairs , so both the teacher and the classmates think highly of me.,Original,Revised,Effects of add flesh to the bones,Direct description let the reader see you. Indirect description let the reader hear about you. An axample let the reader feel you.,Language polish,Directions: please rea

16、d the paragraph and compare the parts in red with the original ones.,Language polish,So my Chinese is very well.(word) Im a very interesting person.I can make the class very lively. quite/much/really/pretty/fairly/desperately. Im interested in this job.(phrase 23 times) Im more than interestedfond o

17、f /enthusiastic about. the position So please trust me！(sentence pattern) Give me a chance, and Ill give you a surprise,Effects of the three techiniques,Direct description let the reader see you. Indirect description let the reader hear about you. An axample let the reader feel you. Language polish

18、Let the reader enjoy the you.,Beautify your application letter by adopting the three techniques of add flesh to the bones polishing your language Prepare to present your writing in class,Practice,Lets draw a mind-map together.,Summary,（2018年浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： 1.口语能力； 2.相关

19、经验； 3. 应聘目的。 注意：词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Assiament,0-5分,5-10分,10-15分,15-20分,20-25分,Ending,Dear peter, Im Li Hua ,an outgoing, enthusiastic and patient student in your school. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the internet , employing a chinese student as your Chinese tutor and Im interested in this position,so Im writting to apply for it . I firmly believe Im unquestionably the very person you re looking for. Above all ,for me ,Chinese is my native tongu