专升本写作句型练习ppt课件

1、第一章 句式优化,不同的思想内容当然应该用不同的句式来表达而同一思想内容也可以用不同句式来表达句式不同，表达的效果就不同一篇文章中如果反复使用同一句式，就会显得单调乏味，毫无生气，写作时一定要注意句式的变换，避免单一重复,1.长句和短句变换,长句使文章富有气势，却容易产生语法错误或造成理解障碍；短句不容易出错，但是短句的堆砌容易让人感觉语言技巧不成熟，不老练在实际写作中，一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的，要注意长短句的交错使用 通常简单而又实用的长短句交错方法是：以简单句为基础，配以适当的并列句和复合句简单句可长可短，一般要加些附属成分，如分词短语，不定式短语，介词短语，副词短语等,庙纲鳞净奏

2、案淬父痪渡衙盐枕园剩览铜箍祥瘩蓄垮营醋显家甜片宙售坛塞专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,1. 短句变长句,原文 Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them,优化 Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them,受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的意思议程英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写

3、出来的句子无法体现英语作为“形合语言”的特点因此，在平时写作时，考生要注意前后句之间的联系，用恰当的连接词将简单句连接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句增加文章的气势,一长句和短句变换,财办妒缉文蝶辕翘赴诅措垮郴脉之那邱贼绽戌诵怎栽篷宙芋址裙凹腆着促专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,原文 Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes th

4、ey feel a little guilty,优化 Pressured by school work. and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes,原文 Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation,优化 Usually, a fact is defined as a tru

5、th, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation,义睛光鹏礁促油杏钨值很谅恨肄腮渭考背吠雀浮佩叠驹帽磁刘径虎胸洋黄专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,4原文 When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbikes. The car was yellow. The motorbi

6、ke fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons injuries. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. the traffic police arrived in a short time,4优化 When I turned right on the corner, a red motor

7、bike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two persons injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time, the traffic pol

8、ice arrived,贿柠悯醚妇叁肢丘丝精挑婶偏兢聪帝干炼钳歹搽寂棺娥奠张研呵避缆攀裤专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,一长句和短句变换,2.长句变短句,原文 His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight,优化 His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight,长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面最求复杂句式，反而会显得华而不实，累赘 写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定，有话则长，无话则短短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部

9、结构精练，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的忌,服嫌寺河雇摈聘数盅泳歧香发幅玩拒口付馅峨牌堵驴谊秩浚浓渡俯具毒衔专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,2.长句变短句,原文 He didnt have enough experience, which is the reason why he didnt do the work well,优化 He didnt do the work well for lack of experience,原文 Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly,优化 Th

10、ey distrusted our judgment,雌您鄙仿惊伟巧柜度挚嚼尘玛扳合啥揉恭絮陀攻适件殃严逆教店即霉老绸专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,4原文 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage, perhaps because they are still establishing themselves in their careers and havent had enough time to get to know themselves an

11、d many members of the opposite sex, but family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married, and so they marry in haste without knowing each other well,4优化 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage. As they are still est

12、ablishing themselves in their careers, they havent had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex. However, family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married. So they marry in haste without knowing each other well,掠碰繁惫松辰瘦姿辗诣尊

13、盈盘钨劳靛猪祖流青练馋撅催涪及衫抑势垮浪汛专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,与汉语相比，英语更注重动作本身，而不是动作的执行者，因此在英语中被动语态的使用相对多一些，但这并不表明要以为地追求被动语态的使用事实上，什么时候用主动，什么时候用被动，主要是由陈述对象而定英语写作特别强调陈述对象的一致性，因此在选择主动和被动时一定要慎重,1.主动变被动,原文 We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country,优化 More attent

14、ion should be paid to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country,二主动句和被动句变换,济金实雹杀艰腰镶僵壳蝶驰智搐朋湖狂叁煤坐准磐矮歪柔靠彩擦诲庸楚麻专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,2.长句变短句,原文 When the prime minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately,优化 When the prime minister arrived at the

15、airport, he was immediately surrounded by hundreds of reporters,原文 The employees elected Mr. li chairman of the committee last week,优化 Mr. li was elected chairman of the committee by the employees last week,跃君倦甫称琉邻丘适硫螟怔虾惕挎育宴沏顽碱每惯暗脏单寝瀑积壳珐乘寺专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,原文 Not how much you read but what

16、 you read really matters,优化 It is not how much you read but what you read that really matters,三强调句和倒装句变换,2原文 By making good use of internet we can make a difference in our life,2优化 Only by making good use of internet can we make a difference in our life,适当运用强调句和倒装句可以起到突出，强调的作用，达到较强的修饰效果，给读者留下深刻印象,纳搬

17、搀戴促刊坦兆兢瓤抖蓝伦嚼贫危沈蹲付裙诌披腑含纶踏崖富伴竿崎爵专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,3原文 We have grown so old because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate,3优化 It is because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than el

18、sewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate, that we have grown so old,衙娘疵井缆肯怂袄即寅匿芳鼠扑爱滩嫁瘩壬矮棺韧奏钦腕读云经兜抖霄岛专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,原文 When I look into the future, I will try my best to serve my fellow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union,优化 Looking into the fu

19、ture, I will try my best to serve my fellow students if I am lucky to be president of the student union,四非谓语句和从句变换,非谓语动词包括不定式动名词现在分词和过去分词使用非谓语动词可以在有限的空间内表达更多的信息，使句子结构紧凑，逻辑严密,沙筏桨舔风跳充贱弧谁琢忽积似宏祭铝嘘旁缸导动耸笔缘针羹患院瘟美惹专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,2原文 The law can punish those who produce or sell fake commodities,

20、2优化 The law can punish those producing or selling fake commodities,3原文 Because one of my parents is laid off, my family wont possibly afford all my expenses at college,3优化 With one of my parents being laid off, my family wont possibly afford all my expenses at college,撩妈右犁汐纵斧革址盲蜒刺庇腋向错随炭趾颇喜蔼摆踌缠糠阎器孩搪时

21、嘱专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,原文 Some students dont like having roommates. Because every person has his or her own way, they think several people living together causes some unpleasantness. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship,优化 Some students dont like having roommates. they think se

22、veral people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to adjust the subtle relationship,五松散句和掉尾变换,松散句主要用来陈述观点和罗列事实，因此文中绝大多数句子都是松散句，正是由于这个缘故，偶尔使用掉尾句会起到突出的效果，但如果频繁的使用掉尾句，则会使文章的意思表达不够直接名了，给读者做作的感觉,鞍资眶亦双罐蘑率娄否买撰冯阐瞥疼供筹融腊蹭棋仅婪坪于转廉敷毁絮聪专升本写作句型练

23、习专升本写作句型练习,1. 短句变长句,2原文 A new pattern of urban living has emerged in most big cities, as many of urban dwellers have moved to the suburban rings in search of cleaner air, greater privacy and a higher quality of life,2优化 As many of urban dwellers have moved to the suburban rings in search of cleaner

24、air, greater privacy and a higher quality of life, a new pattern of urban living has emerged in most big cities,口辽咱佯盛翔几虾匡澜华涩竖慑检桨圈戒谬鉴隶蛀坚样储羹捻讣准消砖酿专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,just as, so (正如，也一样) e.g. just as food is necessary to life, so are books to our spirit,六比较句变换,表示相似性,2）share / have in common (在

25、方面有共同点) e.g. china and the u.s. have some interests in common in foreign trade area.,3）bear similarities/ resemblances to (和具有相似之处) e.g. lots of ancient constructions bear striking resemblance to that in other parts of the world, which discloses the similarity in human civilization,售倒驭锨奶曳掂消粹删锹熟窑捅嘎至墨

26、烩抛饱疙盲整督捻鸦碌嚎至荔价腐专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,六比较句变换,5）vice versa/ the verse is true (反之亦然) e.g. if you are friendly to others, they will hold hospitable attitude towards you and vice versa,6）no less () than / no more () than (不比多强) e.g. the father is an ambitious man, the sons ambition is no less than

27、 the father,4）the same is true of / with (也是如此) e.g. people who are financially dependent will be bullied by the rich ones. And the same is true with countries,7）as as (和一样) e.g. some of the doctors are paid almost twice as much as the nurses,难踏咯劣首抽臆音邮势泥泳腰筒动唾壤攀宫匀拷若敌驴醚最朱娠汕非痉狙专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式

28、优化,the opposite of (与恰恰相反) e.g. he hopes that his wife can give birth to a male inheritor to such a large fortune; whereas his wifes wish is just the opposite of his,六比较句变换,2表示差异性,2）it is just the other way round, (，相反，) e.g. he is not your friend. It is just the other way round. He is your rival,椅队

29、辞疏姆按猖防那诉恶身蒜酗匝伯摘陛仅龚曳惧仙诬柜御陪尽蚜哑软选专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,六比较句变换,4）less () than (比少差） more () than (比多强) e.g. more and more people are buying new cars than ever before,3） different / differ from in that (和的不同之处在于) e.g. his character is different from his brother in that he is introvert,2表示差异性,扼蝴钟字汾婿

30、明肮毡颧拳嵌停小差盲柯砌鹅梳一硒铀镊甲律搁郡氦郭妄怕专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,表转折 but, however, nevertheless, instead, on the other hand,七松散到紧凑变换,如果遗篇文章只具有意义上的连贯，而形式上比较松散，就很难突出主题，较好的表达作者的意图为了能使文章主题明确，线索明了，而句式富有变化，句与句之间，段与段之间需要一定的连接手段，写作中常用的连接手段有,2）表让步 although, though, despite, even so, even if /though, regardless of, in s

31、pite of,使用过度性词语,佃沫精船啮防苦交捏讼睛眼紫涩清拄推檄彰频寐约扦寿贴鲤互皑挣讹慢抨专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,六比较句变换,4）表举例或列举 For example, for instance, as an illustration, such as,3）表层进 first, to begin with, furthermore, besides, moreover, in addition, whats more, also and then, and equally important, last but not the least,表总结 in

32、summary, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, to conclude, in short, on the whole,纸屈页蒋纪剥狄冰窑儡极倾夸袱告拖协胶箩托枪蓬薄掌业稚器吗挑钳准罩专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,六比较句变换,表比较和对比 While, whereas, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison with, compared with, on the contrary, in the contrast, by contrast,表强调 Indeed, of cou

33、rse, in particular, above all, most important, in fact,鸵贰烽帽荐饱畦逝响服尉泽市普匙幕禁葱续俯碗颠尤蝴复砍爹腥染结各冲专升本写作句型练习专升本写作句型练习,第一章 句式优化,六比较句变换,例：Walters goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies in particular, biol

34、ogy, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects. Walter become proficient in them; however, Walter forget that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6