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1、中 考 专 题 复 习 课,Writing (问题现象类,检查口语,爱好与学业 1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛， 当然也喜爱踢足球； 2. 放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和 同学们一起 踢足球； 3. 他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半 之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持,分析结构,Hobbies and studies Mike is crazy about football! He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often

2、 spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes he could have his parents support,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,Discussio

3、n,How to Write English Compositions,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,Writing skillssix steps,近年来，许多国人有足够的经济条件出国旅游，可是在旅游的过程中常有不 文明的现象发生，是国人在世界各国人们心目中的形象大大受损。请你根据以下 提示写一篇演讲稿，呼吁大家提高素质，树立良好的国人形象。 1. 乘车时要排队 2. 不乱丢垃圾。 3. 公共场所不吸烟。 4. 不带走宾馆的物品。 5. 尊重当地的风俗习惯。 要求： 1. 80字左右，不得出现真实人名和校名。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总字数。 3. 提示词： r

4、espect,第一步:审清题意,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,近年来，许多国人有足够的经济条件出国旅游，可是在旅游的过程中常有不文明的现象发生，是国人在世界各国人们心目中的形象大大受损。请你根据以下 提示写一篇演讲稿，呼吁大家提高素质，树立良好的国人形象。 1. 乘车时要排队 2. 不乱丢垃圾。 3. 公共场所不吸烟。 4. 不带走宾馆的物品。 5. 尊重当地的风俗习惯。 要求： 1. 80字左右，不得出现真实人名和校名。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总字数。 3. 提示词： respect,主题,人称,体裁,字数,结构,时态,以一般

5、现在时为主,信息,第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline,具体做法： 根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,旅游的过程中常有不文明的现象发生 国人在世界各国人们心目中的形象大大受损,1. 乘车时要排队 2. 不乱丢垃圾。 3. 公共场所不吸烟。 4. 不带走宾馆的物品。 5. 尊重当地的风俗习惯,List some keywords about problems. Phrases: bad behaviours make us emba

6、rrassed make people uncomfortable 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrase: wait in line, stop doing, litter around, speak loudly, in public, take away, respect others 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住要点，列关键词,Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences:

7、some of their bad behaviours made us embarrassed. They also made people around the world uncomfortable. 2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: please wait in line and stop littering around. we are not supposed to speak too loudly or smoke in public places. wed better not take

8、 anything away from the hotels. When in Rome, do as the Romans do 3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _,第四步：连词成句,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,In order to be polite Chinese tourists, I hope to give you some suggestions. First, please wait in line and stop littering around. Second, we

9、 are not supposed to speak too loudly or smoke in public places. Third, wed better not take anything away from the hotels. last but not least, always remember the old saying When in Rome, do as the Romans do,注意添加连接词,三点型： 首先：to begin with，to start with 其次：besides, whats more, and then 最后：finally,last

10、 but not least, 两点型： 一方面：on the one hand, 另一方面：on the other hand 总结：Generally speaking, In general,逻辑结构连词大全,Lets enjoy our own compositions,Nowadays, more and more chinese people to travel abroad during the vacation. But some of their bad behaviours made us embarrassed. They also made people around

11、the world uncomfortable,In order to be polite Chinese tourists, I hope to give you some suggestions. First, please wait in line and stop littering around. Second, we are not supposed to speak too loudly or smoke in public places. Third, wed better not take anything away from the hotels. last but not

12、 least, always remember the old saying When in Rome, do as the Romans do It is important for us all to remember where we come from. so, keep in mind that we should show the world that chinese people are polite and friendly. please give up bad behaviors, be nice from now on,The structure of the artic

13、le Introduction Main body Conclusion,Summary,写作： 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息 第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇,写作前,确定人称、时态,写作后,查错改错,常见错误,时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序是否有问题 语言是否符合习惯 固定短语是否恰当,变换句式,并列句,复合句 结果状语从句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their

14、homework on time,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time,关联词,Link,Step 3,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand., not onlybut also. 2.表示选择: or, eitheror. 3.表示转折: but, however, though, after all 4.表示因果: because, so 5.表示条件: if, 6.表示列举: for example, for instance, su