任读后续写公开课定稿

1、新题型探究-读后续写,Continuation Writing,The parents with their three-year-old son went to see a film. When they walked into the cinema, the attendant said to them: “ Youll have to go out if your son cries. But well refund(退款) you the tickets.” About half an hour later, the husband asked his wife, “ What do

2、you think of the film?” “Ive never seen such a boring film.” His wife answered, “Its not worth seeing.” “I dont think much of it, either.” The husband said, “Wake the child up and_.,Share funny jokes,let him cry,What do you think is a good ending,Requirements,评分细则,与原文剧情融洽，逻辑合理,续写内容丰富有看点，用了关键词,语法结构和词

3、汇多样准确,语句间衔接自然，结构紧凑,Logical reasonable consistent,第五档： 21-25,与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑,记叙文阅读理解能力,记叙文书面表达能力,读后续写过程中存在的问题,续写内容与所给短文在叙述意图上不一致 续写内容与所给短文在相关细节上相矛盾 续写内容与所给短文在语篇结构上不连贯,use different structures（结构） * use tra

4、nsitional words （过渡） * add some details （细节,Predict all the possbile plot * with the help of “PRS”strategy,given two sentences（段首语） * main plots of the passage（故事情节,Step3 polish （润色,Step 2 draft （拟稿,Step 1 read (阅读,解题思路 3 steps,PRS” Strategy Problem-Result-Solution,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It

5、was Christmas Day. Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the backroom when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door. The bell, which produced a uniquely pleasant sound, had been in Pappys family for over a hundred years. He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all w

6、ho came to his shop. Although the bell hung on the inside of the main door, Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not. Hearing the bell, he left the backroom to greet his customer. “And how can I help you, little lady?” Pappys voice was joy

7、ful. “Hello, sir.” The little girl spoke almost in a whisper. She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes, and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special. Shyly she told him, “Id like to buy a present, sir.” “Well, lets see,” Pappy said, “who is this present for?” “My grandpa. Its f

8、or my grandpa. But I dont know what to get.” Pappy began to make suggestions. “How about a pocket watch? Its in good condition.” The little girl didnt answer. She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door. She shook the door gently to ring the bell. Pappys face seemed to glow as h

9、e saw her smiling with excitement. “This is just right,” the little girl said. “Momma says grandpa loves music.” Just then, Pappys expression changed. Fearful of breaking the little girls heart, he told her, “Im sorry, Missy. Thats not for sale. Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio.” The

10、girl looked at the radio, bowed her head, and sadly sighed, “No, I dont think so.” In an effort to help her understand, Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion, for the rest of his family were all gone now, except for his estranged (疏远的) daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a de

11、cade. With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him._ Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing. _,Step 1 Thorough Reading,Pappy,One Christmas Day,In Pappys shop,A little girl,excited sad,joyful embarrassed,a Christmas gift,a bell,valued,Para

12、 2 Problems:Later that evening when pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing. Results: Solutions,Step 2 Drafting-Creative Plotting,Para 1 Problems: With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. Results: Solutions,Underlined words: When: Who: What： How,Tip 1Key Wor

13、ds,Pappy may feel a sense of sympathy and went to comfort the little girl,Pappy had a deal with the girl. The girl got her dreamed bell,Tip 2 consistent logic,Possible results/solution,Christmas Day,pappy, the little girl, grandpa,momma, daughter,present,sigh,special,8,The girl give the bell to Papp

14、y,Pappys estranged (疏远的) daughter came back home. The whole family got tegether again,Step 3 Polishing,Para.1Edition 2)With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. She forced a smile, murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door. There was a dead silence in the shop. Suddenly

15、Pappy thought of his daughter. Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy called out, “How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this, the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars altogether. After thinking for what seems like a few seconds, Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your

16、 lucky day. It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy, the special bell held in her hand,Think about two questions: 1. What details can be added to enrich the outline? 2. Whats improved in the second edition,3.advanced phrases 使平静）the terrified horse and I di

17、d as told. Finally, the horse calmed down,but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road,We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost breaking down when my father said, “Dont worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinn