2021年英语作文的批改与评语

1、英语作文的批改与评语 英语作文的批改范文与评语 The person I love/ admire most 要求 1. No less than 90 points by Pigai. 2. No less than 26o words. 3. Deadline Nov. 3. 作文号:357928 教师:邵春 字数:260500 满分:100 Attitude 要求 For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by menting on the famous saying

2、, “A _n can sueed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusia _ .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words. 作文号:357929 教师:邵春 字数:100500 满分:100 The person I love/ admire most Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who _y be a scientist, a writer, a mu

3、sician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in todays world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played for the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a _in fo

4、r _ of Portugal national team. As for the worlds most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearan _, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is not reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persist

5、en _ of perseveran _. Ronaldo is a tender feelings _n under his tough appearan _,the most important things he teach me is that we should gratitude everyone who ever helped us, When he was 18,of which playing for Manchester united，even though he has unparalleled football talent，he was always neither

6、well with team cooperation, nor handle for his applause and critici _. At this time, the Manchester united coach Sir Alex ferguson give most patient guidan _ to him. Latter, When Ronaldo every time honored, he always expresses his gratitude to Alex ferguson.“He is just like my father and friend!” Mo

7、reover, another point he inspired me is his persisten _ for his persuit. From a youth to the leader of the national football team, Ronaldo is always to spare no effort to devote his time and energy, and as for the life of football. He is always the first came to the training ground, the last to leav

8、e. Now, he is nearly thirty years old, but he still keep the highest level on the field. In sum, it is my general description about Christian Ronaldo above, I learn to be an gratitude person with strong mind from he. no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can e true your dream. These lesso

9、ns exercise a great influen _ on my life. Ronaldo, thank you so much for not only giving interest of football to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. Re _ntly, the New Years golden ball players will reveal, Ronaldo re _ins at the top, all is own to his gratitude mentality and uemitting p

10、ersisten _, and I will continue to give my greatest respect, Hala Madrid! The person I admire most Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who _y be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But, as for me, the most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. My mot

11、her is an ordinary wo _n. She is not very beautiful and a little heavy as well as me. But sometimes, you will think she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesnt have high education, she is very capable. She is ex _llent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, tries t

12、o give us the fortable surroundings to study and live in. She is a sensible person, but she cant stand someone screwing the number of my family over. No one in the world loves you more than your mother. While she gave me life, she takes me as her con _rn. She devotes her whole life to the family. I

13、learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can e true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influen _ on my life.Although my mother is an ordinary person, she is still the person that I admire most.

14、 Mom, thank you so much for not only giving birth to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. No _tter what will be in the future, I will always love you. Altitude It is said “A _n can sueed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusia _!”,we can known how altitude play a important

15、 role to our suess. A person who even though take a extraordinary talent, he will hard to get outstanding achievement without a good altitude to his work or study. These are two causes why a positive altitude is so significant to our career,on the one hand, we can build a strong confiden _ from a go

16、od mental state facing unpredictable challenges,in turn, which will unleash your unlimited enthusia _ to push you to devote time and energy to your work. Beethoven, who is the greatest poser and pianist in the history of music,who also is a blind _n at the same time,even if so, he was optimistic in

17、the facing of life, e over all blocks we can not i _ge with a strong determination ,and finally pose the _ny wonderful music . On the other hand, as the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of suess”, but I think it better to say,”Failure will always around you without a good attitude!”,there is no d

18、oubt that it is be so difficult for us to sueed. When I was third grade in pri _ry school, it was very popular for us learning play the guitar, Before that, I have had some music knowledge due to study for a year, for which , I dont have to go to learn to play guitar with a good altitude, of course,

19、 in the end, those who had not stu _d or without any basis students learn better than me under the positive and careful study. So it is a enthusiastic attitude that _ke their life full of music and _ke goal has been achieved. In sum, which the factors of suess dominated by altitude after all Confide

20、n _, optimistic, courage or all above Perhaps,it is not ne _ssary for us to discuss the answer to it, because someone have adjust a good altitude to facing their life,stress and work ,when you are consider this question. 标题：大学生参加社会实践 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字 满分: 100 要求： For this part，you are allowed 30

21、 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practi _ following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1、 很多大学生缺乏社会实践 2、 大学生应该参加社会实践 3、 我的观点 范文:Aording to a survey, in re _nt years, _ny universities ignored the

22、 phenomenon that college students did not have enough chan _ to take part in social practi _ leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future. When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practi _, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practi

23、 _ can bring _ny benefits to college student. In the first instan _, social practi _ can offer students adequate chan _ to meet various people in society. They can aumulate enough experien _ and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a great

24、 opportunity for them put theory into practi _ and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practi _ is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balan _ between study and work. 标题：Five(Three) Famous Symbols of Chinese Culture 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字 满分

25、: 100 要求： 字数200字左右，须有中心，围绕一个中心选取三至五个具有中国特征的事物描写 As we know, China is one of the countries with the longest history of ancient civilization in the world. Our an _stors _de a contribution to our country even world with a wealth of cultural legacy. One of the famous symbols of Chinese Culture is the Ye

26、llow River. It is the second longest river in China and considered as Mother river of Chinese individual. It is generally recognized that Huang Di was born here and Nu Wa was _de by mud from Yellow River. Chinese knot is also a famous symbol in culture. Our an _stors used it to record things but now

27、 it is _inly used for decoration in the Favorite Spring. It must be emphasized that Chinese knot represents love, harmony and _rry. The last symbol that must be taken into consideration is The Great Wall. The Great Wall was built by ordinary people to avoid other countries attacking ourselves at the

28、 beginning. It is called as world miracle was _de by in _igent individual. The Yellow River, Chinese knot and The Great Wall, represents Chinese outstanding culture and it is just a part of the Chinese ex _llent culture. I hope everyone from the world could learn the acknowledgeable about Chinese cu

29、lture. 标题：扇子 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 扇子是一种用来拨动空气以使人感到凉快的工具。中国扇文化有着深厚的文化底蕴，它与竹文化、佛教文化有着密切关系。自古以来，中国就有“制扇王国”之称。扇子的主要材料包括竹、木、纸等。扇子造型优美，构造精致，经能工巧匠精心制作而成。文人墨客常在上面题诗作画，使其具有很高的艺术价值。在古代，扇子还是权力的象征。中国扇子还流传到其他一些国家，并对那里的文化产生了一定的影响。 参考译文:A fan is an implement used to stir airflow to _ke people feel coo

30、l. Chinese fan culture has deep cultural deposits and it has a close relationship with bamboo culture and Buddhist culture. Sin _ ancient times, China has had the name of “the kingdom of _ fans”. The _in _terials of fans include bamboo, wood, paper, etc. Fans have appealing designs and delicate stru

31、ctures, and are _de elaborately by skilful craft _en. Men of literature and writing often write poems and create paintings on them, _ them have very high art values. In ancient times, the fan was also the symbol of power. Chinese fans have also spread into _ny other countries and exerted a _rtain in

32、fluen _ on the culture there. 标题：儒家和道家 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 反映在艺术和文学中的乡村生活理想是中国文明的重要特征。这在很大程度上归功于道家（Taoist）对自然的感情。传统中国画有两个最受青睐的主题，一是家庭生活的各种幸福场景，画中往往有老人在下棋饮茶，男人在耕耘收割，妇女在织布缝衣，小孩在户外玩耍。另一个则是乡村生活的种种乐趣，画有渔夫在湖上打渔，农夫在山上砍柴采药，或是书生坐在松树下吟诗作画。这两个主题可以分别代表儒家（Confucian）和道家的生活理想。 参考译文:The ideal of rural

33、 life reflected in the art and literature is a key characteristic of Chinese civilization. To a large extent, it is attributed to Taoi _s emotions at nature. There are two most preferred themes in Chinese traditional paintings, one of which is various happy s _nes in family life, often with the elde

34、rly playing chess or drinking tea, men plowing or harvesting, women weaving cloth or sewing clothes, and kids playing outdoors in the paintings. The other is all sorts of pleasure in rural life, with fishermen fishing in the lake, farmers cutting firewood or collecting medical herbs in the mountains

35、, or scholars reciting poems or painting pictures sitting under pine trees in the paintings. The two themes respectively represent life ideals of Confuciani _ and Taoi _. 标题：中国武术 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 中国是东方武术的主要发源地，有着世界上独一无二的“武文化”。中国武术又被称为“功夫”，是中国传统文化的很重要一环，是中国民族体育的主要内容之一，是几千年来中国人民用以锻炼身体

36、和自卫的一种方法。以往，人们只能在一些书中或者表演中 _到中国武术的影响力，现在它的影响力已经体现在一些电影电视中，有了更多的观众群体。中国武术已经传播到国外，吸引了全世界的广泛 _。 参考译文:As one of the _in birth pla _s of Oriental _rtial arts, China has the unique _rtial culture in the world. Chinese _rtial arts, also known as Kung Fu, is an important ponent of Chinese culture, a _jor pa

37、rt of Chinese national sport, as well as a way for Chinese people to build their bo _s and defend themselves over the past thousands of years. In the past, the influen _ of Chinese _rtial arts could be felt only in books or perfor _n _s. Nowadays, the influen _ has found expression in some movies an

38、d television programs, so that it is reaching a much wider au _n _. As a result, Chinese _rtial arts have spread beyond Chinas borders and captured the wide attention of the people around the world. 标题：年轻人旅游 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 越来越多的中国年轻人正在对旅游产生兴趣，这是近年来的新趋势。年轻游客数量的不断增加，可以归因于他们迅速提高的收入和探

39、索外部世界的好奇心。随着旅行多了，年轻人在大城市和著名景点花的时间少了，他们反而更为偏远的地方所吸引。有些人甚至选择长途背包旅行。最近调查显示，很多年轻人想要通过旅行体验不同的文化、丰富知识、扩展视野。 参考译文:More and more Chinese young people are gaining interest in touri _, which is a new trend re _ntly. The rising number of young tourists can be attributed to their rapidly increasing ine and the

40、curiosity of exploring the outside world. With the increase of traveling, young people spend less time in big cities and famous s _nic spots, instead they are more attracted by remote locations. Some even choose long-distan _ backpacking trip. A re _nt survey shows that _ny young people want to expe

41、rien _ different culture, eich knowledge and expand their horizon via traveling. 标题：网购 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 越来越多的中国互联网用户发现了网购的乐趣。中国互联网络信息中心称，上半年有超过8700万的中国人网络购物，这意味着四分之一的中国网民有网络购物的经历。大多数网络购物者为18-30岁的学生和白领，月收入在1000-3000元不等。女性网购多于男性。衣服和家用产品是在网上 _最多的东西。预计网络购物这一趋势在将来只增不减，这反映出中国经济的强劲发展劲头。 参考

42、译文:A growing number of Chinese Inter users have discovered the joy of online shopping. The China Inter Network Infor _tion Center(NIC) announ _d that more than 87 million Chinese _de purchase on the Inter in the first half year, which means one out of four Chinese izens have online shopping experien

43、 _. Most online shoppers are students and white-collar workers aged 18 to 30 with a monthly ine of 1,000 yuan to 3,000 yuan. Women shop online more than men do. Clothing and home-use products are the most popular goods bought online. It is predicted that the trend of online shopping will grow rather

44、 than drop in the future. This reveals the strong development momentum of China s economy. 标题：生命的意义 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 一个人的生命究竟有多大意义这有什么标准可以衡量吗提出一个绝对的标准当然很困难但是大体上看一个人对待生命的态度是否严肃认真看他对待劳动、工作等等的态度如何也就不难对这个人的存在意义做出适当的估计了。古来一切有成就的人都很严肃地对待自己的生命当他活着一天总要尽量多劳动、多工 作、多不肯虚度年华不让时间白白地浪费掉。我国历代的劳动人民及

45、大 _家、大思想家等等都莫不如此。 参考译文:How significant is a persons lifeIs there any standard to measureIt It will be very difficult to put forward an absolute standard but in general the significan _ of ones existen _ can be esti _ted by how he treats his life, by what attitude he takes to work and what ways he ch

46、ooses to live. From ancient times up to now all the aomplished people treat their lives very seriously. They work and learn as much as possible. They hate to spend the best of their lives in vain and they do not want to let their time slip by. All the laboring people, great state _en and thinkers of

47、 our country at all ages treasure their time in this way. 标题：教育与就业 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字 满分: 100 原文： 中国将努力确保到xx年就业者接受过平均13.3年的教育。如果这一目标得以实现，今后大部分进入劳动力市场的人都需获得大学 _。在未来几年，中国将着力增加职业学院的招生人数：除了 _高等教育外，还将寻找新的突破以确保教育更加公平。中国正在努力最佳地利用，这样农村和欠发达地区将获得更多的支持。 _还决定改善欠发达地区学生的营养，并为外来务工人员的子女提供在城市接受教育的同等机会。 参考译文:China

48、 will _ke an effort to ensure that employees re _ive an average of 13.3 years education by xx. If the goal is to be achieved, most people entering the labor _rket must obtain a university diplo _ in future.In the next few years, China will take great pains to increase the eolments of vocational coll

49、eges; apart from paying attention to higher education, China will also look for new breakthroughs to ensure more equality in the education system. China is striving to optimize educational resour _s so that rural and underdeveloped areas will gain more support.The Ministry of Education has also deci

50、ded to improve the nutrition of students in underdeveloped areas and provide equal opportunities for the children of migrant workers to re _ive education in cities. 标题：Bats 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字 满分: 100 要求： Write a sum _ry of about 150 words. Bats by Debbie Dean In the distant past, _ny people thoug

51、ht bats had _gical powers, but times have changed. Today, _ny people believe that bats are rodents, that they cannot see, and that they are more likely than other ani _ls to carry rabies. All of these beliefs are mistaken. Bats are not rodents, are not blind, and are no more likely than dogs and cat

52、s to tran _it rabies. Bats, in fact, are among the least understood and least appreciated of ani _ls. Bats are not rodents with wings, contrary to popular belief. Like all rodents, bats are _m _ls, but they have a skeleton similar to the hu _n skeleton. The bones in bat wings are much like those in

53、arms and the hu _n hand, with a thumb and four fingers. In bats, the bones of the arms and the four fingers of the hands are very long. This bone structure helps support the web of skin that stretches from the body to the ends of the fingers to form wings. 批改学生英语作文的方法 济水一中 许勤萍 英语小短文在中考中占15分，占分比例较高，如

54、何提高学生英语写作能力，教师的批改起着至关重要的作用，作文的批改和讲评是写作教学的最后一个环节，也是不可或缺的、极其重要的一个环节。但是，作为教师，教学任务繁重，每个学生每周作文都改的话，耗时长，反馈慢。在学生大量写作并且班级人数很多的情况下，不一定每次每篇作文都要教师批改，但也决不是说根本不需要批改。通过批改，可以发现学生写作中存在的问题，尤其是对普遍性问题要及时采取措施， _适当练习进行纠正.针对学生写的作文，我会采取以下步骤改： 1 、让学生自己读自己的文章，检查有没有错误并更正。 2 、同学互评，每组中都有一个后进生不会改作文，我让他背书本3a的文章或单词，其他人交换改，优等生改中等生

55、，中等生改后进生，用红笔圈出错误。 教师和学生均为教学的主体，学生之间应加强合作，互教互学。由于学生之间的相互了解更深刻，他们之间的相互交流往往能收到很好的效果。而当学生在意识到教师并不是他她的文章唯一的读者时，他们会更认真地写好作文。因此，让学生相互传阅和修改作文不仅增加了写作时的真实感，更重要的是训练学生既做学生也做老师。在一个小组里先听别人读出他的作文，再由自己读自己的作文时，往往更能发现自己的不足之处。在平时作 文时，文章初稿写出后最好请别人提意见，然后自己再进行修改。古人说：“不识庐山真面目，只缘身在此山中”。对自己文章的瑕疵常常不易很快觉察，而别人则“旁观者清”。自己的文章请别人看

56、，容易发现新的问题。当然，运用此法时须对他人意见进行消化、理解后才能进行修改。 3、个人针对别人对自己文章圈出的错误进行更正，不会的问老师、同学。 4 、重新写这篇文章。 5 、老师抽查改，把共性错误收集起来写在黑板上让学生改错。然后大声读正确句子两遍。 6、 学生在5的基础上基本已经知道了常规所犯的错误，然后自己检查自己的短文，修改错误。大多数学生基本上能做到 _不离十，修改好自己的错误。我感觉这种方法很好。 7 、四人一组的组长改。 8、有时我也会提前把好生的文章写在黑板上当范文读，或者让学生把出错多的学生的文章写在黑板上让全班学生共同改错。 9、有时我会面对面给学生进行作文反馈，当场指出学生错误之处，好的地方大加表扬，如好的开头，好的句式，好的词语等。 总之，批改学生作文，不时变换方法，既减轻了老师的负担，又提高学生学习积极性，在作文批改中，以鼓励为主，尤其对那 些成绩较差的学生，教师就要抓住其优点，用略微夸张的感叹句进行肯定和赞扬，顺带指出希望，这样效果会好些。 Do you agree or disagree with the