感谢信写作课件

1、Dear XX,In this letter, I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you,for your hard work during my English teaching.,Last term, you always collected exercise books on time to,my office. But for your help, I couldnt have grasped the,information about students study. whats more, thanks very,much f

2、or your resposibility to make students read in the morning,and let them finish homework independently.,Never stop your beautiful way of helping us.Your help really,means a lot to me and your classmates. Thanks again for your,help.,Yours,Catherine,A thank-you letter,1,Chongqing No. 1 Middle School,Ch

3、ongqing, China,August 21st, 2010,Dear Sir/Madam,body,Yours truly,Li Hua,信头,称呼,正文,结束语,签名,(,写信人的地址,),(,写信的日期,),2,一,.,感谢信的写作指导,?,1.,掌握写信格式,?,感谢信属于书信，应该使用,英文书信的,写作格式,。首先应该在左上角写上称呼，后,面用逗号；正文写作结束后应该在右下角写,上敬语，如,Yours sincerely;,然后在下一行,与之对齐署名。,3,2.,有序组织要点,?,首先,，,应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；,陈述,写信的目的,，即致谢；,(,In this let

4、ter, I would,like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your,hard work during my English teaching.),?,其次,，应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处；,?,最后,，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良,好的祝愿。,4,3.,灵活把握时态,感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。,?,通常，在提到对方,曾经,所给予的帮助时，应,用,过去时态,；,(,Last term, you always,collected,exercise books on time to my office.),?,在提到对方的帮助所产

5、生的实际效果时，可,以使用,现在完成时态,；,(With your help, I have,finished my work on time.),?,在涉及到现状时，应用,一般现在时,；,?,在表达祝愿或希望时，使用,一般将来时态,。,5,?,4.,运用规范的语言,感谢信在行文的每一个环节有一些常用句型。,?,表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以用,I benefited greatly from your help.,With your help, I achieved,等句型表达；,?,也可以用虚拟语气表达，,例如：,Without,your help, I couldn,t have,But

6、 for,your help, I couldn,t have,If,it hadn,t been for your help, I couldn,t have,等，这样更能增强表达效果。,/,6,感谢信,Letter of Thanks,?,写作格式,?,第一段：,表达感谢,之情并,说明原因,；,?,第二段：,细述,并赞赏对方给与的帮助；,?,第三段：,再次阐述谢意,并表达,回报,愿望。,Vocabulary,：,(,感谢,),v.,thank, appreciate;,n.,thank,s, gratitude, appreciation;,adj.,thankful, grateful,

7、 appreciative.,7,感谢信,Letter of Thanks,?,短语：因,而感激,sb.,1.,thank you for ,2.,appreciate,ones,doing ,3.,be grate,ful,/thank,ful,to sb. for ,4.,many thanks for ,5.,express my,thanks/gratitude,for ,8,?,第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；,?,常用句式,?,I am writing this letter to thank you for ,?,I am writing to express my sincer

8、e thank,s,for,?,I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt,(adj.,衷心的,),thank,s,to you for,?,With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for ,?,I am writing this letter because I,am thankful,to,you for ,9,?,第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；,?,常用句式,?,It was nice/kind/thoughtful,(adj.,考虑周到的,),of,you to.,?,T

9、hank you very much for your kind hospitality,(n.,好客,热情招待,),and the honor you showed me,during my visit,?,It was,your kind help,that,(,强调句型,),?,If it,had not been,for your (help/guidance/,assistance), I,wouldnt have,(won the prize),(,虚拟语气,) But for/Without ,10,?,第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。,?,常用句式,?,Thanks aga

10、in for your generous help.,?,I appreciate it,more than,I can say.,?,My true gratitude is,beyond,the words description.,?,I feel deeply,thankful,to,you and I really do not,know how to thank you enough for your help.,?,Please accept my sincere thanks for your help,which I will never forget.,?,Nothing

11、could ever,return the favor,you gave me.,11,?,第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。,?,常用句式,?,Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is,anything I could do to,pay you back,(,回报,).,?,Please do allow me to,return your favor,(,报答,),?,Best wishes for your health and every happiness.,12,写作模板,?,Dear,?,How about your

12、life,/ study/ work,? I,m writing,to thank you for your,.,/ Thanks for your,.,致谢,?,During, you,. First, you,.What,s more, you,. Another thing that I,can,t forget is that you,.,/ There is still one,thing that I can,t forget. That is,.,原因,?,Thank you,/ Thanks a lot for your kindness again,.,?,再次致谢,Best

13、 wishes,./ Give my best regard to,.,祝愿,?,Yours sincerely,?,13,Example,?,假设你是李华，交换生,Tracy,刚刚结束在你们学校,的学习生活，已经返回英国。作为班长，请你根,据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信，感谢她一学期,以来带给大家的美好回忆：,?,1.,怀念与她相处的快乐时光；,?,2.,感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助；,?,3.,感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍；,?,4.,欢迎她有机会再来中国。,14,第一档,（,18,-,20,）,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,完全达到了预期的写作目的。,?,所有要点细节,全覆盖。,?,语法结构和词

14、汇,应用较多。,?,语言运用能力,较强；,语法结构或词汇,有些错误，但为尽力使,用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致。,?,全文结构紧凑，有效使用了句间连接成,分。,作文评分标准,15,第二档（,15-17,分）,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,达到了预期的写作目的。,?,所有要点细节全覆盖。,?,句式和词汇的运用能满足任务要求。,?,语法和用词基本准确,，少许错误主要,是为尽可能表达丰富内容所致。,?,内容连贯，使用简单的语句连接成分,第三档（,12-14,分）,基本完成了试题规定的任务。,基本达到了预期的写作目的。,?,要点细节基本,覆盖。,?,句式、词汇的运用,基本满足,任务要求,?,语法、用词有些错

15、误，但不影响理解,16,第四档,（,6-11,分,）,未恰当完成试题规定的任务。,未能清楚地传达信息。,?,主,要细节漏掉或未描述清楚,。,?,句式和词汇有限。,?,语法或用词错误较多，影响理解,第五档,（,1-5,分,）,未完成试题规定的任务。,?,明显遗漏主要细节,?,句式单调，词汇贫乏,?,语法用词错误多，严重影响理解,第六档,（,0,分）,未能传达任何信息；,所写内容与要求无关。,17,范文,Dear Tracy,How about your life back in Britain?,I,m writing this,letter to express our thanks to you,on behalf of the class.,We enjoyed the great time when you stayed here. During,last term, you helped us a lot in our English,，,so we made,great progress with English study.,2)What,s more, all of,us,are v