中考英语满分作文真题解析另附32篇中考满分作文(1)

1、腾 达 教 育中考满分英语作文实例解析 杜义一、 要求：根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 某英文报纸就家务劳动，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。 提示词语:every family 、 lots of housework 、learn to do、help、parentsEvery family has lots of house work to do. As a member of a family ,everybody should learn t

2、o do housework. In my daily life, I usually help my parents clean the house ,beautify our yard and cook. I find it interesting and I like it when I stay with my parents. In order to relax my parents I plan to do more housework in this summber holiday . I believe they must be proud of their daughter

3、for what she does!重点句型 As a member of a family 此处As用的非常好，对整个句子进行了原因方面的补充说明。 I believe they must be proud of their daughter for what she does! 作者运用了be proud of 短语，生动,准确的表达了为而自豪之意，作者还用了一个what引导的名词性从句，使文章的语言风采更加耀眼二、要求：每个人都有自己的朋友。假如你最好的朋友叫李华(Li Hua),是光明中学的一名学生，请根据提示，以My Best friend 为题，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你的朋友李华。1

4、写作要点1）简要介绍李华的个人基本信息（如：姓名.年龄.就读学校等.及外貌等;）2)你们是怎样成为朋友的；3）你对李华有何评价 2. 写作要求：短文内容应包括提示的观点，语言要流畅，可围绕要点适当加些情节，以使短文意思连贯，短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;短文词数90左右My Best Friend I have a lot of friends ,but I think Li Hua is the best one .He is an eleven-year-old boy and studies in GUA naming Middle School .He is not only sho

5、rt ,but also very fat .The round face wears smile all the time .Last year ,I addicted to the computer games .He told me the harm to play the computer games and helped me to study lessons .Little by little ,I caught up with the others .And we become good friends .He is clever and his lessons are grea

6、t .Everyone in our class likes him.1 a lot of很多 2 not only.but also 不但。而且。 3 play the computer games 玩电脑游戏 4 little by little 渐渐地 5 catch up with 赶上6 get addicted to 沉迷于 1 but 引导的转折句：I have a lot of friends ,but I think Li Hua is the best one .我有很多朋友，我想李华是我最好的朋友。2 and引导的并列句：He is clever and his less

7、ons are great.他很聪明，他的功课也很好三、o I am Sally . Everyday I am very busy. I have too many rules in my house. I have to get up at six oclock every morning. I must have my breakfast at 7:00 oclock . I cant meet my friends after school because I have to walk my dog. I cant watch TV on nights. And I have to b

8、e in bed by 10:00 oclock.o On weekends, I have to make my bed and clean my room. Then I have to wash the dishes. Later I have to go to the Childrens Palace to learn the guitar. I love music. But I cant listen to music. At home .I never have any fun. My life is so boring. o I have to be in bed by 10:

9、00 oclock.o 而且我必须在 10:00 点钟之前睡觉。o I must have my breakfast at 7 oclock .o 我一定要吃我的早餐在 7点钟。四、 以Believe Myself为题，用英文写一篇短文，记述自己在学习或生活中克服困难的一件事。 提示：你遇到了什么困难；你当时的感受如何；你是如何克服困难的；你从此事中领悟到了什么。 要求：短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等，否则不计分；短文要切合题意，内容完整，表达清晰，语言正确，书写规范；短文词数80100.Believe Myself Many people will meet with all kind

10、s of difficulties in their life.what shall we do when meet with difficulties？Shall we give up or shall we try our best to overcome them? Different peoplehave different ideas. Two years ago，I went to a new shool in the city, because my father found a job there. At first I couldnt understand the teach

11、ers. I tried my best to listen to the teachers carefully, but I still couldnt understand them. How disappointed I was! At that time our monitor had a long talk with me. He ehcouraged me to study harder and never give up. He often helped me with my lessons. Little by little I could understand my teac

12、hers and caught up with my classmates.I did quiet well in the Mid-term exam.How happy I was! I thanked our monitor again and again. From that I learned that nothing is too difficult if one puts his or her heart into it. BELIEVE yourself, and you will win. overcome: 克服 disappointed： 失望的 encourage： 鼓励

13、 monitor:显示屏、监视器、班长、监视（verb）、监听（verb） little by little：一点点、渐渐 Many people will meet with all kinds of difficulties in their life. BELIEVE yourself, and you will win.五、目前，大部分学生都是独生子女，很多人对家务劳动都理解为是父母做的事情。而此题直面当前的这一社会问题，鼓励学生认真对待家务劳动，在暑假里帮父母做一些事情。可见中考题非常重视学生的基本素质教育。学生对此类话题应该说不是很陌生，并且在题中写作要点大都已给出，所以学生只要注

14、意词语的选用，句子的框架搭建，文章的连贯就行了。当然内容要包括题目要点，特别是自己的一会和观点。如能鲜明督导，文章将大放光彩。 文章的写作要点有： 1.目前每个家庭家务多的情况； 2.你经常在家里帮父母做什么； 3.做家务都有哪些体会； 4.暑假里做家务的打算； 注意事项： 1.不要遗漏写作要点；2.注意时态变化 3.观点或体会要鲜明； 4.恰当使用高级词汇，巧妙运用固定句式，注意文章的连贯。 Every family has a lots of housework to do. As a member of a family, ever-ybody should learn to do ho

15、usework. In my daily life, I usually help my par- ents clean the house, beautify our yard and cook. I find it interesting and I like it when I stay with my parents. In order to relax my parents I plan to do more housework in this summer ho-liday. I believe they must be proud of their daughter for wh

16、at she dose! 好句子： 1 beautify our yard and cook. beautify一词十分新颖。 2 I find it interesting and I like it when I stay with my parents. find加interesting作宾语补足语的句子简洁明了。 3 I believe they must be proud of their daughter for what she dose! 此句灵活运用了be proud of 短语，并运用了一个what引导的名词性从句，是文章的语言风采更加耀眼。六、下面是Sara的申请表，假如

17、你是Sara，请根据表格信息，写一封信介绍你自己，申请参加暑假澳大利亚交换学生项目。注意：信必须包括表格内容，可适当发挥，书信开头结尾已给出，不必抄写。（词数80100个）Application Form(申请表)NameSaraAge15NationalityChineseGradeJunior 3SchoolNo.1 Middle schoolPersonalityOutgoing and friendlyFavorite subjectEnglish and musicDear Sir, I wish to be an exchange student in Australia this

18、 summer vacation. My name is Sara. I am a 15-year-old Chinese girl from No.1Middle School and I am in Junior 3. My favorite subject are English an music because they are interesting. But I find science is very difficult for me. In fact I am outgoing and friendly, and I have a lot of friends in Beiji

19、ng. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to music and collecting stamps. I have hundreds of stamps from many countries. If I could join the project, I would learn English and make more friends.Yours,SaraIn fact I am outgoing and friendly, and I have a lot of friends in Beijing.事实上我很外向和友好，而且我还有很多的朋友在北

20、京。In my spare time, I enjoy listening to music and collecting stamps.在我的业余时间，我喜欢听音乐和收集邮票。七、 假如你是李强，你的美国笔友Marry正在学习汉语，她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况，请你用英语写一封回信，介绍你的英语老师Miss Li。要求： 词数80左右。 文中不能出现真实姓名。 Dear Marry: Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English

21、 teacher Miss Li. Miss li is a nice teacher and she taught us for three years. She is tall and slim .Blue is her favorite color and she often wears blue clothes. She likes reading and she often travels when she is free, she is kind and helpful. As a teacher, she is very patient. She spends lots of t

22、ime explaining difficult things to us .She teaches so well that she won the first prize in the teaching competition last year .All of us like her. Best wishes! yours Li Qiang As a teacher, she is very patient. 作为一个老师，她很有耐心 She spends lots of time explaining difficult things to us 她花了很长时间去将一些比较难的事情给我

23、们。 She teaches so well that she won the first prize in the teaching competition last year 她教课太好了：她去年得了教学比赛一等奖。 It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的。八、 外籍教师Richard想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式，请以“The way I go to school”为题，写一篇英语短文，向Richard介绍自己到校的方式。The way I go to school Im Li Hua.

24、I always go to school by bike because my home is a little far away from our school. I once tried walking to school , but it took me a very long time to get there. Whats more , when I get to school on foot I will feel tired , which is not good for my study. Another important reason is that riding a b

25、ike can help me keep fit . You know Im a student , so I have little time to do some sports no matter where I am. Now you will believe what I choose is right. Whats more , when I get to school on foot I will feel tired , which is not good for my study.用连接词whats more说出其他理由。 I always go to school by bi

26、ke because my home is a little far away from our school. 开篇点题，同时用because引导的原因状语从句给出选择骑自行车上学的第一个理由。 once tried walking to school , but it took me a very long time to get there. 词语once和try doing用在这说明作者也曾经尝试过其他的上学方式，但结果不理想。附：中考英语满分作文Great changes in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown wa

27、s just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didnt have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life . Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there a

28、re many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. Peoples living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the governments efforts . my hometown is becoming

29、 more and more beautiful . Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world . Its our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste

30、 things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldnt leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustnt pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to pr

31、otect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better . Improve our environmentGood environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ? We should plant more tr

32、ees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Dont spit in public places . Dont draw on public walls . Its our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy . Pol

33、lution around us In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on t

34、he earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to pr

35、otect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .Make our world more beautiful !Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . Its our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best fri

36、ends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldnt kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have .Lets do our best to ma

37、ke the world beautiful. Keep our school cleanWe are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there. Dont draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of o

38、ur school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, Im sure our school will be more beautiful .My country lifeI like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river ne

39、ar it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. Its very quiet . What a nice place I live in !How t

40、o learn English wellAs we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ? The best way is to use it all the time . If we c

41、an talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .How I learn English Hello, everyo

42、ne. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework

43、carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . Its Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . T

44、hats all . How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the

45、 English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines. Now I am one of the best students at English in my class. The importance of English English is the most widely spoken in the world. Its spoken by most people

46、 in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. Its also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. Its widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really

47、 a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. Its one of the worlds most important languages as it is so widely used. Thats why more and more people in China are interested in learning English. English is so useful that we must learn it well . N

48、ow lets work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class . I want to be an inventor TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent so

49、me new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to

50、make my dream come true. I want to be a tour guideI want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them dont know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the g

51、uides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true. I like the InternetThe Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Its very useful. I often search the Internet for

52、 some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons

53、 on the Internet. The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ? The Internet The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we cant do work better

54、. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet

55、 for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. Its bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .ComputerComputer is a wonderful machine. Its a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smalles

56、t computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun. The i

57、mportance of water Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die. However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink . Lets do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves . Water Water is very important for our life. Every d