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1、 树人中学 2017 学年第一学期高一故事续写积累(一)使用班级:高一全段姓名:_一、环境描写的素材编制人:田秀兰份数:380日期:2017.12.1班级:_环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度:客观为从环境事物本身入手,主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行,主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写:part 1 环境描写的 adj 要求:有声,有色,有质感,有味道the blue sky(蓝天) the songs of birds(鸟鸣) the thundering clouds(电光闪雷鸣)the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花);(the dark,raining even
2、ing 雨夜交加的夜晚)the green grass(青草) the fragrant roses(艳丽的玫瑰); the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳)part 2 环境描写的 verb (vi&vt)要求一)wind (blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.a gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like acurtain,一阵风吹,吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像卷起的窗帘。2.the wind, soft and cold, clic
3、ked through tree branches and stirred the bushes thatsprinkled the slope.风,轻柔却寒冷,轻点着树枝,搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.a cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.a cold breeze wafted through my hair.(冷风吹拂过我的头发)the wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.(今日正是放风筝的好天气,
4、强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。)二)water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音:1.at one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某处,潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.the water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear颜色surface.水是深蓝色的,阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.a little way off was a small brook, rushing and
5、 sparkling along between green bank.离此不远,有一条小溪,在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。4. it murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.似乎它在温柔低语,就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。 (action, sound, colour)三)sky (stand/ appear/turn)1.the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是浓浓的灰色,伴着拥
6、挤的朵朵云1 2.blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写:1.sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物(状态/动作/被).2.sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物(状态/动作/被)3.it was so adj that we find/feel4.sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/sth held sb entirely in their power它是如此.以至于景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/景物让我完全惊呆了5.it loo
7、ked/seemed/appeared/felt like 景物看起来像二、场景描写的素材(来自原著:追风筝的人)1. at least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey.within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spunin the sky. a cold breeze wafted through my hair. the wind was perfect f
8、or kite flying,blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier.空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝,如同纸制的鲨鱼,巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头,这个数字翻了一番,红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞,熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝,风速不大,恰好能让风筝飘浮起来,也便于操控。the water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.3. then i glanced u
9、p and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in thesky. they danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills,floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on san francisco, the city i nowcall home.(场景、比喻)我抬起头,望见两只红色的风筝,带着长长的蓝色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着,飞越公
10、园西边的树林,飞越风车,并排飘浮着,如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山,这个我现在当成家园的城市。4. blue skies stood tall and far, the sun like a branding iron searing the back of yourneck. creeks where hassan and i skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshawsstirred dust when they sputtered by.(场景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂,到了夏天它们也干涸了
11、。黄包车嗒嗒走过,扬起阵阵灰尘。5. somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. the wind, soft and cold, clickedthrough tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. and from below,the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.2 在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音,还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝,吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面,水流在山谷淌动,传来阵阵微弱的
12、声音。6. by three oclock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdenedwith lumps of clouds. a cool breeze blew through the park.(天气)到三点时,雨停了,铅灰色的天空阴云密布,一阵寒风吹过公园。7. the sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between theramshackle buildings.(景象)太阳开始下山,那些摇摇欲坠 的房子的裂缝中,渗
13、出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描写时间,动作,心理和情感一)、情感好词:1.喜乐 the smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 a smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。 a ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。 laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。 his eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
14、 a wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。 unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。 i was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。 i was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。 she wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 her
15、smile lit up the whole room. she shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。 her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。 she was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。 her flushed face was shining with excitement. joy welled up inside her. 她心中涌起喜悦。 i was floating on air. 我漂浮在空中。她激动得满脸通红。 amusement gleamed in
16、his eyes.2.愤怒:他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。 i was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。 he was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。 his anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。 he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。 he was breathing fire and fury. his voice trembled with anger.他充满着怒火。他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 he gave me a look of burning anger. he glared
17、 at me with burning eyes.他愤怒地看了我一眼。他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 he flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。3 his face clouded with anger.3.悲伤烦恼他气得脸色阴沉。he stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 i feel like i am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 her hands were shaking. she was on the v
18、erge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息,他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。 she burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。 she sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。 i tried to fight back tears. /my eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的
19、眼里充满了泪水。 a frown(皱眉)now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。 they sat there with glum looks on their faces. the news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.他们坐在那里,带着一脸忧郁。这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。 he brimmed over with sorrow when. 他满是悲伤 they were immersed in sorrow. these days he was in low spirits.4.害怕:他们沉浸在悲痛之中。这些日子他情绪低落。
20、he turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。fear slowly creeps upon her.she was struck with horror when. 她感到恐惧she was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。a flood of fear welled up in him. / fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).她的心跳得厉害,几乎窒息而死。she shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。5. 感动: touched deeply/immensely, we被深深感动 我们, tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热
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