(英语)书面表达练习_英语考试_外语学习

1、(英语)书面表达练习一英语考试一外语学习一、英语书面表达1 .书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对 初中生什么时候放学比较合适？ ”这一问题进行了热烈的讨 论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在 5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一 篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school at 5 o clock at 4:45 at 5 o clock .exercise to keep healthy and read books do what we want, such as listening to mu

2、sic take a part-time job:.注意：(1)短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80-100;(4)短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we haveheld a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.【答案】What time should junior high school

3、 students leave school?” This week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students shou

4、ld leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving s

5、chool at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also drawsome pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 hold a class meeting , talkabout, the result of , keep healthy, after school , have more time to do , want to do , suchas, listen to music , in favor of, clean the room ,

6、 play tennis 等。而复杂并歹U结构They canexercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students thinkthat students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leaveschool at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as l

7、istening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时 Most students think / Some think/ A few think述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有 条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2 .书面表达小手拉大

8、手，同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来 ，淄博人民万众一心，众志成城，让 人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生 ，我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。1 .种植花草树木；2 .遵守交通规则；3 .公共场合不大声喧哗；4 .公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥，至少两点）参考词汇：civilized文明的 make joint efforts共同努力 obey遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint e

9、fforts （共同努力）.Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For example, to protect our env ironment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In ad

10、dition （此夕卜），we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore （而且）,we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队）for aticke

11、t or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 make joint efforts , as junior students , for example , obey the traffic rules , run red light, in addition , no longer, in public , and s

12、o on , whats more , on a bus, in need, be accustomed to , queue up , all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo cit

13、y more civilized. 等插入语 的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3 书面表达初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演 请你以 Believe Myself, and I Will Win 为题写一篇演讲稿。提示：（1） What was the ev

14、ent?（ 2） How did you make it?（ 3） What s your feeling?要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。（ 2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（ 3）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello,everyone!Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is

15、a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They

16、also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn t seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parentsand teachers were happy for me.

17、 I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for m

18、e.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win 为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写 作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的 英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作 时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需 要适当发挥，

19、但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不 能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行 表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词 以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点： 首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合 理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使 用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确， 尤其注意了不规则

20、动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简 单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句 型， 如 When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. 、 My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. 、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn

21、 t 、seerthei&itdreicuwont be afraid ofthe difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! 等等。4.人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍 人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。贽成的理由反对的理由你的看法1 .广交朋友2 .可自由表达思想3 .有利于外语学习1 .浪费时间2 .影响学习3 .可能上当受骗(be cheated)1.2.注意：1.所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。2.词数80词左右，短文的

22、开头已给出(不计入总词数)。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some peoplethink【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some peoplethink students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on

23、line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on

24、 line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的 观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真

25、阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注 意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。5 书面表达假如你是李明，彳的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中

26、打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d like to tell you something about the haze.Yours, Li Ming 【答案】Dear Jack,I m glad to receive yo

27、ur letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious d

28、iseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bi

29、ke or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自

30、己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，

31、分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures

32、 to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。6.书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以 My Unforgettable Middle Schoo

33、l Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文 介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2 .短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺 ；3 .短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】 How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly e

34、nding. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However,

35、 I still have a lot to improve. I didn t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn t havoad sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work ha

36、rder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题：结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和 一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文 意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达 出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文

37、结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only but also, help a lot,share happiness and sadness, do well in , give up, besides, so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj., therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密；文章 的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了 自己愿望与想法， 使文章增色不少，值得学习。7.

38、共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给 21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便 启益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还 占道挡路你的观点我认为参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2 .表格中 你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3 .词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数

39、。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have wonhigh praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere so that it s35aByeo auound on pub

40、lic bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What s more, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cannpublic bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much o

41、f the road, they arein our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应 包才4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的 观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下 文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意 正确的时态和语态以及

42、谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇 短文表达流畅。8 .书面表达中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择 游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。BritainTimeJuly 1 - July 14Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace（白金汉宫）visit the British Museum （大英博物馆）watch football matches Attentionchangeable weatherCost20,000 yuanAustraliaTimeAugust

43、 15 -August 24Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast（黄金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionwinterCost16,000 yuan要求：1 .所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由；2 .结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项;3 .文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4 .语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；5 .不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。The sum

44、mer holiday is coming. I think it s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. I think it s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go toBritain.The tim

45、e is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Nex

46、t I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And its expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time

47、 there!【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提 供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介 绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个 要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文 章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的 结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的 复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文 章增色添彩。

48、最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。9.中央电视台经典咏流传节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing upwith Reading为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。要点提示：读书的重要性1.狄取知识，开阔眼界；2.提升自我，增强自信读过的一本书或 一首诗1.作品内容简介；2.读书感悟及对自己的影响。多读书，读好书1.利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；2.多读经典文学作品注意：1 .短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。2 .文中不得出现自己的真实姓

49、名、学校及地名。3 .词数：80-100 （文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇： classic经典作品；open up one s eyes阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； bemore confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especial

50、ly classics.【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am readi