人教版高中必修2Unit5 Writing求助信

1、A Letter of Asking for Help求助信的写作指导求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助人遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助，因此应以，因此应以一般现在时一般现在时为主；在叙述为主；在叙述求助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用求助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过过去时态。去时态。2.贴切使用过度性词语贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用可用first, besides, whats more等过度等过度性词语；请求对方提供一系列的帮助性词语；请求对方提供

2、一系列的帮助时，可用时，可用in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过等过度性词语度性词语.当写信需要时，要恰当使用当写信需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以使行文连贯。这些词语，以使行文连贯。熟悉常用句型熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面的一些句型：写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面的一些句型：1）说明写作目的时可用：）说明写作目的时可用：My name is. Im writing to you for some help.Im writing to you to get some help.I am writing to

3、 you to ask for some/ your help.2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用：简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in. Faced with so many difficulties, I have to . I would like to know how can I Do you have some good advice on 2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用：简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in. Faced with so many difficulties, I h

4、ave to . I would like to know how can I Do you have some good advice on 3.请求对方做某事时可用：请求对方做某事时可用：I really dont want to bother you, but I really.Would you offer me some advice?Do you have some good advice on Would you like to.I would like you to.I wonder whether you could do me a favor.What do you thi

5、nk ?What if we ? What if we use the name “Moonlight”?4.展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达： Im sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and. It will be appreciated if you can. I would be grateful if you could/ would. 5.表示期待对方回复时可用：表示期待对方回复时可用： I would appreciate

6、your reply offering some suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Im looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance.这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言特点。特点。The outline of the letterDearxx, My name is_

7、. Im writing _. I have much difficulty in _.Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problemsFaced with_, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to _? In the meanwhile, I beg you to _ so that/ in order that _. Also, I would like you to _.Ask for help Im sure that I can _ with your h

8、elp. It will be appreciated if you can help me to _. Look forward to your reply. yours_, XXPredict the effect and express thanksSignature熟悉求助信常用句型熟悉求助信常用句型 1.说明写作目的时可用：说明写作目的时可用： My name is. Im writing to you for some help. Im writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ you

9、r help.2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用：简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in. Faced with so many difficulties, I have to . I would like to know how can I Do you have some good advice on 3.请求对方做某事时可用：请求对方做某事时可用： I really dont want to bother you, but I really. Would you offer me some advice? Do you have some g

10、ood advice on Would you like to. I would like you to. I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think ? What if we ? What if we use the name “Moonlight”?4.展望获得帮助后和表示感谢展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达：的表达： Im sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and. It will b

11、e appreciated if you can. I would be grateful if you could/ would.5.表示期待对方回复时可用：表示期待对方回复时可用： I would appreciate your reply offering some suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Im looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance.De

12、ar Freddy, polite greetingParagraph 1 the purpose and the situationParagraph 2 the problems in your band Paragraph 3 Yours sincerely/hopefully, polite endingLi Hua your nameStructure of the letterWriting task 你和你的朋友想组建你们你和你的朋友想组建你们自己的乐队，但你从来没有自己的乐队，但你从来没有在乐队里演奏过。现在你想在乐队里演奏过。现在你想写一封信给写一封信给Freddy ,Fre

13、ddy ,向他求向他求助，询问他的建议，信的开助，询问他的建议，信的开头已经给出头已经给出(P39)(P39)，请完成后，请完成后部分的内容。部分的内容。 提示：根据提示：根据FreddyFreddy的回信，的回信，完成求助信正文里问题的阐完成求助信正文里问题的阐述述, ,可适当扩展可适当扩展。 字数：除了开头字数：除了开头100100字左右。字左右。 Content: lAre your ideas clear and to the point? （观点是否清晰？）观点是否清晰？）lHave you used linking words properly? （有没有用连接词？）有没有用连接词

14、？） lHave you written with proper topic sentence and supporting sentences? Accuracy: lAre there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?（是（是否有拼写或语法错误？）否有拼写或语法错误？） Handwriting:lIs your handwriting neat and easy to read? （书写是否工整？）（书写是否工整？）Step 4 Assessment Dear Freddy: My name is Li Hua. Im beginning a ba

15、nd with my friends. However, we have never been in a band before. Could you please give us some advice? I would like to know what music to play and we cannot decide. I like pop music but most of my friends like rock n roll. Liu Mei likes rap. How are we to decide what to play? Do you suggest we play

16、 a little of all of these types of music? Or should we only play one kind of music? How did you and your friends decide what to play? We hope you can give us some advice. Yours hopefully,Li HuaSample letterpolite greetingthe purpose and the situationthe problemsthe polite endingyour nameDear Freddy,

17、 My name is Zhou Yufei.Im beginning /starting a band with my friends. Can you please give us some advice about practising? Should we invite our friends to listen to us and give us suggestions? Should we find a quiet place where we will not bother others with noise? In your opinion, whats the best time to practice our music? If you are faced with these