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1、The lake looks like glass in the sun.keep you spellbound第1页/共16页第一页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。How is the passage developed? A. In the order of time B. In the order of locationAlong the wayThe lakesUp the mountainsDown the hillsIn the valleysIn the late afternoonIn the early eveningAt midnight第2页/共16页第二页，编辑于星期日：一

2、点 九分。Although it was autumn, the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet. Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice. Have you ever seen snowmen ride bicycles? Thats what we looked like! Along the way children dressed in long wool coats stopped to look at us. In the late a

3、fternoon we found it was so cold that our water bottles froze. However ,the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful. Wang Wei rode in front of me as usual. She is very reliable and I knew I didnt need to encourage her . To climb the mountains was hard work but as we looked aro

4、und us, we were surprised by the view. We seemed to be able to see for miles. At one point we were so high that we found ourselves cycling through clouds. How cold?How cold?What surprises?What surprises? We looked like snowmen riding bicyclesReading & Listening (Line 1-8)Enjoy or not?Enjoy or no

5、t?Although it was autumn, the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet. Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice. Have you ever seen snowmen ride bicycles? Thats what we looked like! Along the way children dressed in long wool coats stopped to look at us. In the late afte

6、rnoon we found it was so cold that our water bottles froze. However ,the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful. Wang Wei rode in front of me as usual. She is very reliable and I knew I didnt need to encourage her . To climb the mountains was hard work but as we looked around

7、 us, we were surprised by the view. We seemed to be able to see for miles. At one point we were so high that we found ourselves cycling through clouds. 第3页/共16页第三页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。Cycling through clouds is a surprise!第4页/共16页第四页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。Discoveringwhat to dowhat to dohear , see , smell , feel.hear

8、 , see , smell , feel. personal emotionspersonal emotionsThen we began going down the hills. It was great fun especially as it gradually became much warmer. In the valleys colorful butterflies flew around us and we saw many yaks and sheep eating grass. At this point we had to change our caps, coats,

9、 gloves and trousers for T-shirts and shorts.feelfeelseeseefunfun do do第5页/共16页第五页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。what to writeemotions/feelingsTip 1what to hear, see, smell, feel,.what to do 第6页/共16页第六页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was so quiet. There was almost no

10、wind - only the flames of our fire for company. As I lay beneath the stars I thought about how far we had already travelled.Enjoyinga _ midnight in the wildquiet/ peaceful/romantic夜深风也静，躺在璀璨星空下，篝火作伴，我尽情遐思。夜深风也静，躺在璀璨星空下，篝火作伴，我尽情遐思。At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was

11、 so quiet. There was almost no wind - only the flames of our fire for company. As I lay beneath the stars I thought about how far we had already travelled.第7页/共16页第七页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。how to describe a scene?Tip 2Describe the characteristics (特性) of a scene(场景) with proper and vivid adjectives.第8页/共16页第

12、八页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice.We looked like snowmen riding bicycles.The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.第9页/共16页第九页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。advantages: 1. make sth. easy to understand 2. vivid, figurative(形象的形象的), interesting s

13、imile 明喻明喻 personification 拟人拟人.Tip 3figures of speech (修辞手法）修辞手法）第10页/共16页第十页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。The rising sun looks like _红红的红红的小脸儿小脸儿温暖我的心窝温暖我的心窝点亮我生命的点亮我生命的火火 火火火火火火火火火火你是我的小呀你是我的小呀小苹果小苹果儿儿就像天边最美的云朵就像天边最美的云朵Your lovely face is like flame burning my heart;You are the apple of my eyes like the most bea

14、utiful clouds in the clear sky.the center of an egg. a yellow ball rolling from the water.fish swimming freely in water.The rising sun looks like Diving feels like _Diving feels like 第11页/共16页第十一页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。 a well-written travel journal tenseWhat to writeHow to write attractivelyconclusionpast 1

15、. what to do 2. what to hear/see/smell/feel 3. emotions/feelingsCatch the characteristics of a scene(景象景象) - vivid, picturesque(画面感的画面感的)Use figures of speech(eg.simile,personification) - vivid, figurative（形象的）（形象的） and interesting第12页/共16页第十二页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。trying第13页/共16页第十三页，编辑于星期日：一点 九分。tryingA morning in Park Requirements (要求） tens