【2019最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案

1、【 2019 最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准中，要求“词汇丰富，有修辞意识，显示出较强的语言运用能力”。因此要想在高考英语写作中取得高分，就必须使用一定的高级词汇和句式，为文章增加闪光点，避免单一、呆板的句式， 从而增添语言表达的多样性和灵活性，提高文章的档次。1. 肯定不如双否好修辞的使用在写作中是很大的亮点，双重否定也是种修辞， 可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。 典例 He believesthathe has enough timetochallengehimself. He believesthatit is never

2、too lateto challenge himself. 典例Ms.Lispenta wonderfultime with us，but we know thatwe shouldthank her for all her hard work and guidance very much.Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us， but we know that we欢迎下载。cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. 典例 I quite agree with this view.

3、 I can t agree more with this view.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。2. 陈述不如倒装妙在写作中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装、强调、从句、独立主格或分词结构以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。 在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对写作，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。(1) 否定词开头 典例 I will never marry you.Never will I marry you.其他的否定词，如not ，seldom，hardly等开头的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。(2) 地点状语开头 典例 Our library

4、 is in the center of our school. In the center of our school lies our library. 典例 There are some flowers on the bank.On the bank stand some flowers.在表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首，后面进行主谓倒装， 这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句， 使整个句子呈现更多的亮点。【2019最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案 典例 In the centerof o

5、ur school liesour library，which isbetween the garden and the teaching building.(3)only介词短语(4) 形容词 as主语谓语动词 典例 Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus andthe poorly-equippedclassroom ，I found the teachers patientandconsiderate.DisappointedasIfeltattheshabbycampus andthepoorly-equipped class

6、room， I found the teachers patient andconsiderate. 典例 Although our country is rich ，we have a lotof problems. Rich as our country is，we have a lot of problems.还有其他的倒装结构： 典例 So glad am I to hear from you.3. 主动不如被动巧在英文中，被动语态的使用很重要。因为英语中经常用被动语态，汉语中经常用主动语态； 英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头， 强调一件事发生在什么人身上， 而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个

7、人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯， 如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现出丰富的句型，整篇文章也生动起来。3/103/10 典例 Then we willcut the cake and wellsing songs and playgames.Then the cake willbe cut and wellsing songs and play games.4. 分词结构不能少在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构。如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀， 如果你的作文中有状语从句，马

8、上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。 口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。 典例 If such is the case，you should apologize to her.第一步，去掉连词if ；第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词， is 变成分词是 being ，所以最后变成： Such beingthe case ，you should apologize to her. 典例 Ms.Li entered the classroom，and he was surprised tofindwe were s

9、tandingin line ，clappinghands and saying loudly“Happy Teachers Day！” Entering the classroom ，Ms.Li was surprised to find we werestanding in line，clapping hands and saying loudly“HappyTeachers Day！” 典例 I saw them on the bus; I felt a kind of satisfaction.【2019最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案 Seeing

10、them on the bus ，I felt a kind of satisfaction.1. 合并句子 ( 丰富结构 )·Not only can I improve my oral English but also customs in western countries.I learn some·For one thing， they help to improve my writing skills andbroaden my horizons.For another，they can enrich my life andprovide me with grea

11、t fun.2. 改变语态( 避免单调 )·Besides ， I ama book-loverand the books are so wellkept thatthey are as good as new.3. 使用省略 ( 达到言简意赅的效果 )·Ifso，please keep quietabout itbecause we want to give hima surprise.4. 使用强调句型 ( 突出语意 )·My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you m

12、ake use of it that determines who you are.· It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.· It s because of this and my effort in class that I managedto get the first place in the English Contest held recently our school.in5. 使用倒装句 ( 增强说服力 )·So suddenly did he catch the diseas

13、e that the whole family5/105/10were at a great loss.6. 使用虚拟语气 ( 提出建议，委婉表达，易于接受 )7. 使用 with 复合结构 ( 丰富句式 )·The park was fullof freshnessand beauty of spring ， with thesun shining and birds singing.8. 使用状语从句 ( 强调谓语或句子 )·Whenever I had difficulties，they were always available.9. 使用定语从句 ( 表意丰富 )

14、·In 2012，he who was praised by his teacher for being good arranging time received his fourth degree through learning on the Internet.at·Last but not least， my physics teacher is my role model，whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.10. 使用名词性从句 ( 体现扎实的语言功底 )·Not to mind

15、what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.·My English is just OK and the two main problems in my studyare thatI feelit difficult to learnwords by heart，and thatI often feel nervous when speaking English.11. 使用非谓语动词 ( 不定式、现在分词、过去分词以及动名词的使用，可使句式多样化 )【2019最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档

16、：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案·Whats worse，they spat and even threw rubbishintothe lake ，totallyignoringthe noticeablesign“No Littering” nearby.·Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other，trying to catchthe ball.一、用复合句完成下列句子1. 一个人要是不努力，就将一事无成。( 状语从句 )Nobodycanachieveanythingofrealsignificanceunless_he_wor

17、ks_hard.2. 与逃逸的司机相比，我为我所做的感到自豪。 ( 宾语从句 )Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what_I_did.3. 不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重了。 ( 同位语从句 )Noonecandenythefactthat_the_environment_is_getting_polluted_more_and_more_seriously.4. 使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。 ( 主语从句与表语从句 )What_impressed_me_mostwasthat_they_had_had_profes

18、sional_training.5. 鞋在我们的生活中起着重要作用， 因为它们能够保护我们的脚免受伤害。 ( 状语从句 )Shoes playan importantroleinourlife，for_they_can_protect_our_feet_from_being_hurt.6. 我最大的爱好是读书看报， 这已经成为我日常生活中不可或缺的一7/107/10部分。 ( 定语从句 )7. 众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。 ( 定语从句)8. 我们到了一座小山，山脚下有一条小河在流淌。 ( 定语从句 )Wearrivedatahill，at_the_foot_of_whi

19、ch_there_flows_a_small_river.9. 只要我们有坚强的信念，就能够克服任何困难。 ( 状语从句 )As_long_as_we_have_a_strong_will，wellbe able to getover any difficulty.10. 每当见到有人需要帮助时，我就会尽力去帮助他。 ( 状语从句 )Whenever_I_see_someone_in_need，I willspare no efforttohelp him.二、按要求升级下列句式1.After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two

20、months，we strongly desired to be the winner.(用分词作状语改写句子 )Having_practiced_playing_basketball_for_almost_two_months，we_strongly_desired_to_be_the_winner.3.Theyareexperienced，knowledgeable，patientand【2019最新】精选高考英语二轮培优江苏专用文档：专题五书面表达第一讲含答案understanding.(用 not only.but also.并列句型改写句子 )They_are_not_only_experienced_and_knowledgeable，but_also_patient_and_understanding.4.We should speak more English.We think it is very important.( 用 it 作形式宾语改写句子 )We_think_it_very_important_to_speak_more_E