英语写作技巧点拨课件

1、英语写作技巧点拨Writing Tips -review and practice英语写作技巧点拨The beauty of writing“Reading makes a full man; “Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; conference a ready man; and writing an _ man.”and writing an _ man.” -Francis Bacon -Francis Bacon exactexact阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。

2、-培根培根 英语写作技巧点拨A. structureB. connectivesC. word choiceA wonderfulessayD. sentence varietyHow to write well英语写作技巧点拨A. structure英语写作技巧点拨Sample A-1 As you know, my predecessors crossed the Pacific Ocean at a time when such a long journey seemed hardly possible. Actually, they made it with the help of a

3、 fairly big boat and a few canoes carried on it. When they finally found the suitable living place near Lake Titicaca, there was few edible food. But they did manage to make conditions better by hunting wild animals and planting seeds brought from China. Without doubts, we could not witness the pros

4、perity of the South America if they failed to conquer the difficulties and adapt to the unfamiliar environment. The reason why my ancestors left China is that he and his brother were being persecuted by the emperor of Shang Dynasty. They travelled to Peru in order to avoid being killed.英语写作技巧点拨Sampl

5、e A-2Dear friends, You mentioned in the latest letter that you werecurious about my ancestors anecdotes. Well, asfor me, it was a pure adventure which Ill alwaystake pride in. Driven by the itch to explore the world, theywere determined to set their foot on every squareinch of earth. However, when t

6、hey finallystruggled their way to what is now called Peru, theamazing scenery of Amazon jungle touched stringsof their hearts. So not surprisingly, they settled there, making their livings on hunting and planting. So this is all about their story. I hope youll be satisfied with it.Compare sample A w

7、ith B which is clearer? 英语写作技巧点拨Sample B-1 The clouds are floating in the sky, and the sun is shining. What a wonderful day for the sports meeting! The students are all excited and happy. The competitors try their best to run their races. “Come on! Run faster!” some students shout. Others are busyin

8、g writing articles to encourage their classmates. 英语写作技巧点拨Sample B-2 There is no doubt that the students enjoy the sports meeting which was held last week. On the one hand, they had an amazing opportunity to show their talent and abilities. On the other hand, everyone works together to achieve a com

9、mon goal. What fun they had that day!Compare paragraph A and B and pay special attention to the beginning and ending.Whose meaning is clearer?英语写作技巧点拨analysise.gsthesis statement(主题句）主题句）restate the thesis(重申重申主题句主题句Structure of the essayopeningbodyconclusion英语写作技巧点拨The following is an outline. Put

10、it in order.My opinions on the Social PracticeNowadays, more and more high schools begin to organize students to take part in the social practice. It is a hot topic and Id like to talk about my opinions.In a word, the social practice is a meaningful activity.英语写作技巧点拨There is no doubt that Im in favo

11、r of taking part in the social practice.Providing a chance for students to apply what they have learnt is another benefit.Enriching the students experience is one of the important benefits.英语写作技巧点拨Tips for arranging the structureTo make your essay clearer, you shoulduDivide your essay into paragraph

12、s.uWrite a topic sentence for each paragraphu“thesis-body-conclusion” structure英语写作技巧点拨B. Connectives英语写作技巧点拨 Observe the words in red Titanic sailed for New York on April 10th, 1912. She was carrying 1316 passengers and a crew of 89l. Even by modern standards, the 46,000 ton Titanic was a colossal

13、ship. At that time, she was not only the largest ship that had ever been built, but was regarded as unsinkable, for she had sixteen water- tight compartments. Even if two of these were flooded, she would still be able to float. The tragic sinking of Titanic will always be remembered, for she went do

14、wn on her first voyage with heavy loss of life. New Concept English L.10 The loss of TitanicThe use of connectives can make you essay smooth and organized. 英语写作技巧点拨Fun time!Pick a picture and finish the task, and then you can win a gift!英语写作技巧点拨好好学习，天天向上。好好学习，天天向上。Study hard, _make progress everyday

15、._ you study hard, you will make progress every day.andIf英语写作技巧点拨除了时尚的外观以外，除了时尚的外观以外，ipad 还有很多还有很多实用的功能。实用的功能。_ its fashionable design, ipad also has a good many useful functions.Apart from/Besides/In addition to英语写作技巧点拨 尽管是周末，同学们还在努力学习。尽管是周末，同学们还在努力学习。 _ it is weekend, the students are studying har

16、d.Although/Despite the fact that英语写作技巧点拨o发工资了，我们决定去看发工资了，我们决定去看泰坦尼克号泰坦尼克号。 _ I got my salary, we decided to go and watch the “Titanic” movie.o食品安全问题越来越多，人们不知道该吃什么了。食品安全问题越来越多，人们不知道该吃什么了。 There are more and more problems on food safety and _ we have no idea what to eat. Because/As/Since/After so/as a

17、 result/therefore/thus英语写作技巧点拨Connectives并列并列先后先后因果因果递进递进假设假设转折转折and, or, but, both and , either or , so that, neither nor , not only but also , as well asto begin with, first, second, later, finally, afterwards, in the end, last but not the leastbecause of, due to, since, as; thus, so, as a result,

18、 as a consequencein addition, as well, also, secondly, apart from thatif/ on condition that/ as long as/ unless/ in casehowever, though/ although(yet)/ even if/ no matter/ in spite of/ despite英语写作技巧点拨C. Word Choice英语写作技巧点拨英语写作技巧点拨“Advanced” expressions我认为I think重要important赞同agree with好goodfavorable;

19、 awesome, amazing, fascinatingessential; urgent; vital be in favor of; approve of subscribe tofrom my perspective, as far as I am concerned 英语写作技巧点拨说明 show很多 a lot of有用 useful想做某事want to doindicate; reflecta good many; quantities of a large amount of be of use/help be beneficial to be dying to do lo

20、ng to do be eager to do desire to do英语写作技巧点拨D. sentence patterns英语写作技巧点拨Magic time!英语写作技巧点拨Choose your favorite sign.英语写作技巧点拨Follow the example and make a sentence.e.g. Having finished my homework, I went on to help my parents.listen to/laughHaving listened to the song called “Gangnam style”, we bur

21、st out laughing.英语写作技巧点拨 You are very brave!You are very brave! So, you have to finish 2 tasks So, you have to finish 2 tasks to get the gift. to get the gift. Will you continue? Will you continue?英语写作技巧点拨 I didnt know that Mo Yan had won the Nobel Prize in Literature until I read it in the newspape

22、r. (倒装）倒装） _I read it in the newspaper _ I know that Mo Yan had won the Nobel Prize in Literature.Not until did英语写作技巧点拨 We all acknowledge the fact that a single man with a large fortune must be in want of a wife. (it) _ that a single man with a large fortuen must be in want of a wife.It is acknowle

23、dged 英语写作技巧点拨Congratulations! Congratulations! You are the lucky one! You are the lucky one! You can get a gift without You can get a gift without answering the questions.answering the questions.英语写作技巧点拨Finish the sentences using emphatic structure.Failure is important to us.It can make us stronger.

24、And it can lead us to progress.It _ that _.It _ that _.is failureis failuremakes us strongerleads us to progress英语写作技巧点拨Combine the 2 sentences.1. All my friends are in possession of an ipad.2. I am dying to have an ipad.The fact that all my friends have possession of an ipad made me dying to get on

25、e.All my friends have possession of an ipad which I am dying to have.All my friends have possession of an ipad, So I am dying to get one.英语写作技巧点拨You are lucky today!You are lucky today!Hug three friends andHug three friends and you will get a gift! you will get a gift!英语写作技巧点拨 Make a sentence using

26、at least 3 of the following words. fact Mo Yan us proud Nobel Prize in Literature 英语写作技巧点拨 _ by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy. (interview) Interviewed 英语写作技巧点拨Having listened to the song called “Gangnam style”, we burst out laughing.Not until I read it in the newspaper did I

27、 know that Mo Yan had won the Nobel Prize in Literature.It is acknowledged that a single man with a large fortune must be in want of a wife.It is failure that makes us stronger. It is failure that leads us to progress.The fact that MoYan won the Nobel Prize in Literature made us proud.Interviewed by

28、 the CCTV reporter, the man said he was very happy.英语写作技巧点拨1. What sentence patterns do you know?emphatic structureinversionclauses: noun clauses, attributive clauseit sentencesV-ing, p.p2. Where should we use them in writing? beginning/end of a paragraphSentence Variety英语写作技巧点拨 step 1. draft your t

29、hesis statement step 2. make you outline step 3. add the details step 4. polish the essayWriting Steps英语写作技巧点拨p an opening with a thesis statementp body with supportive detailsp conclusionp topic sentences in each paragraph refer to the list and make necessary changes. p eye-catching words and expressionsp diverse sentence patternsPro