高中英语作文写作指导(成人仪式篇)(课堂PPT)

1、1题目展示 假如你是李明，昨天学校为你们举办了十八岁成人仪式。请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件，描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。 1. 成人宣誓； 2. 感谢家长和老师的教育和培养； 3. 家长代表讲话； 4. 表演节目。注意：1. 邮件必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：100-120； 3. 开头结尾已为你写好 4. 参考词汇：宣誓 make an oath 成人仪式 coming-of age ceremony 2书面表达写作指导书面表达写作指导一、仔细审题，确定提纲：一、仔细审题，确定提纲：1. 表明目的，告知事件； 2. 成人宣誓；3. 感谢家长和老师； 4. 家长代

2、表讲话；5. 表演节目； 6. 简述你的感受；二、适当发挥，丰富要点：二、适当发挥，丰富要点：1. 表明目的，告知事件：昨天学校为我们举办了十八岁成人礼仪表明目的，告知事件：昨天学校为我们举办了十八岁成人礼仪式式2. 成人宣誓：已经成人，对社会要有责任意识成人宣誓：已经成人，对社会要有责任意识3. 感谢家长和老师：感谢家长辛苦养育，感谢老师耐心的教感谢家长和老师：感谢家长辛苦养育，感谢老师耐心的教育育4. 家长代表讲话：祝贺我们成为国家一员家长代表讲话：祝贺我们成为国家一员5. 表演节目：唱歌、跳舞，场面和气氛愉快表演节目：唱歌、跳舞，场面和气氛愉快6. 简述你的感受：收获颇多，深感重要，大有

3、感触：努力学习，简述你的感受：收获颇多，深感重要，大有感触：努力学习，成就自我，实现梦想，担当家国之责任成就自我，实现梦想，担当家国之责任3三、选词构句，表达各要点信息：三、选词构句，表达各要点信息： 1. I am writing an E-mail to tell you something that happened in our school yesterday. We held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday in the afternoon.2. We made an oath that we sh

4、ould have a sense of duty for our society as grown-ups from now on. 3. We showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up. We also showed our thanks toto our teachers who have been educating us patiently. 4. One of representatives of the parents who attended the ceremo

5、ny gave a speech. He congratulated us on becoming proud citizens of the republic. 5. We put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. 6. We learned a lot from the activity. I decide I will work hard at my lessons to fulfill my dream so that I can be more competent and better shoulder my respon

6、sibility for my family as well as my country.7. Its very important for us. I will remember the day in my life. 4四、整合信息，美化句式：四、整合信息，美化句式：1. I am very glad to write you an E-mail, telling you that we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday yesterday afternoon. 2. we made an oath

7、 that we should have a sense of duty for our society as grown-ups from now on. 3. We showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and to our teachers who have been educating us patiently. 4. One of representatives of the parents who attended the ceremony gave a spee

8、ch to congratulate us on becoming proud citizens of the republic. 5. We put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. 6. We learned a lot from the activity and I decide I will work hard at my lessons to fulfill my dream so that I can be more competent and better shoulder my responsibility for

9、my family as well as my country.7. I think its very important for us and I will remember the day in my life. 5五、布局谋篇，衔接成文五、布局谋篇，衔接成文。Dear Mike, I am very glad to write you an E-mail, telling you that we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday yesterday afternoon. First we made

10、 an oath that we should have a sense of duty for our society as grown-ups from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and to our teachers who have been educating us patiently. And one of representatives of the parents who attended the ceremony gave a speech to congratulate us on becoming proud citizens of the republic. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity and I decide I will work hard at my lessons to fulfill my dream so that I can be more