如何写好读写任务中的主题句

1、 读写任务段落之主题句读写任务段落之主题句评分标准及解题要求评分标准及解题要求读写任务写作（读写任务写作（25分）分）概括（概括（5分）分）写作内容（写作内容（20分）分） Lead-in 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。 得得18-2018-20分；分；2.2.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容包含题目

2、所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。得得14-17分。分。 3.3.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。用合适的语

3、言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 得得11-1311-13分。分。 4.4.包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得得7-117-11分。分。5.5.只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大文章有些地方照抄原文

4、。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得4-6分。分。2013年广东高考年广东高考读写任务，第二部分读写任务，第二部分部分部分(20分分)评分细则评分细则评分标准及解题要求评分标准及解题要求读写任务写作（读写任务写作（25分）分）概括（概括（5分）分）概括全面，表述清晰概括全面，表述清晰写作内容（写作内容（20分）分）:主题明确，内容丰富主题明确，内容丰富2007-2013的广东高考卷中，都给出三条内容要点。的广东高考卷中，都给出三条内容要点。因读写任务因读写任务“写作内容写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有所列要点

5、的顺序已具有内在内在的逻辑性的逻辑性，所以应该按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作。，所以应该按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作。一般是每个写作要点安排为一般是每个写作要点安排为一个自然段一个自然段，且将写作内，且将写作内容的容的每个要点作为各段的主题句每个要点作为各段的主题句，将主题句放，将主题句放在在各段各段的开头的开头，这样既可以避免在写作时，这样既可以避免在写作时跑题或遗漏要点跑题或遗漏要点，又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全 。 As for me, what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous univer

6、sity, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dorm and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the

7、college life. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。 My ideal college life is that I become mature both physically and mentally. I can also obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well p

8、repared for society. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。 As we all know，college is different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to

9、the real society. So an active part in activities，associations as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life. Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。What is a top

10、ic sentence? A topic sentence is a sentence to tell the reader what the paragraph is mainly about.How to write a topic sentence？2. Answer the question directly1. Repeat the content3. Share the experience 4. Express your viewSkill 1 Repeat the content 复述内容 要点要求说明某事的重要性、意义、重要作用、差别、影响、利弊等。这类主题句直接翻译要点作为

11、段落的主题句。According to the information, write a topic sentence.1. (NMET2010要点要点2) 你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；My _ used to _like this.2. (NMET2011要点要点2) 想家给学习和生活带来的影响；Being homesick _ my life.affected / influencedhad an influence /effect onTask 1 Finish all the exercises in Skill 1 parents/relativeencourage m

12、e to study3. (NMET2013要点要点1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛; 1)Cleaning the street is a kind of hard job.2) There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is hard.important/of importance play an important role in.affect/influence have an effect/influence onadvantages and disadvantagesbe beneficial/of benefit to; do good to

13、; do harm to；be harmful to；the reason whyis that/ The reasons for this are as follows. Useful expressionsSkill 2 Answer the question directly回答问题回答问题 要点的题干是要点的题干是问句问句或含或含“是否是否”的句子的句子, ,可直接回答可直接回答, ,作为主题句。作为主题句。1. (NMET2007要点要点1) 以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：读信后的感受；After reading the letter, I _by your de

14、epest love for me.2. (NMET2011要点要点3) 你（或你的朋友）是如何应对的。 (材料内容：上寄宿学校材料内容：上寄宿学校,想家了需要适想家了需要适应新的环境应新的环境)Task 2 Discuss in your group and finish all the exercises in Skill 2 According to the information, write a topic sentence.As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment.was moved/ touched 3. (

15、NMET2013要点要点2) 假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？If there were no cleaners in the city, it would be filled with rubbish.Skill 3 Share the experience引出经历引出经历 需要需要讲述、举例讲述、举例时，引出记叙文的具体时，引出记叙文的具体事例。事例。It reminds me of my experienceI also experience such a before. I also have a similar experience (of.).It occurred to me t

16、hat my friend had a similar experience.Sentence patterns about sharing the experience According to the information, write a topic sentence. (NMET2011要点要点1)以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家(homesick)的经历，内容包括： 时间、地点和起因； (Tips:我也有像Tom那样想家的经历。/ 使我想起了我的经历。)Task 3 Finish all the exercises in Skill 3 1) I also have a

17、similar experience of feeling homesick like Tom.2) It reminds me of my experience.2. (NMET2012要点要点1) 上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;It reminds me of my favourite teacher, Miss Li. Skill 4 Express your view表明观点表明观点 要点的题干含要点的题干含“认为认为”、“的看的看法法”等时等时, ,可明确表示对某观点支可明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同作为主题持、赞同或反对、不赞同作为主题句。句。Useful expr

18、essions 依我看来， In my opinion/view, As far as Im concerned From my point of view Personally (speaking), As for me,建议建议suggest doing sth / thatadvise sb to do sth/thatsuggestion/ advice采取有效的措施采取有效的措施take effective measures/ steps/ action to do sth1. (NMET2010要点要点1 ) 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法；Task 4 Discuss in you

19、r group and finish all the exercises in Skill 4 According to the information, write a topic sentence.From my point of view, it is not a good idea to encourage children with money./Personally, I dont agree that parents encourage kids with cash because it will make them gradually lose their sense of r

20、esponsibility.2. (NMET2010要点要点3 ) 你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。 In my view, parents should use helpful things to make their children study instead of money.3. (NMET2013要点要点3 )你对平凡工作的看法。 In my opinion, we should respect ordinary workers. Summary（2014届惠州一调）然后以约120个词，就“梦想”发表你的看法，包括如下要点： (1)梦想在我们成长的道路上所起的作用； (2)列举一

21、个为实现梦想而奋斗的事例； (3)为了实现“中国梦”，你能做些什么？Homework (1)梦想在我们成长的道路上所起的作用 A dream plays quite an important role in our life, providing us with guidance and motivating us to overcome all kinds of difficulty. A person without a dream is like the world without the sun. We students may face may many challenges, such as endless homework, failures in exams, pressure from parents. When these drown us in sadness, dreams will cheer us up. Only those who have a dream and pursue it regardless of any obstacle can own success in the end.(2)列举一个为实现梦想而奋斗的事例 The passage re