江苏省盐城市大丰区小海镇七年级英语上册满分冲刺第20讲优秀作文赏析讲义(新版)牛津版

1、 第 20 讲优秀作文赏析 题一：假如你是李梅，英文名 Lily，在新生见面会上，你要做一个自我介绍，请你用英文写一篇文 章来介绍你自己。 要求： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 内容完整，语句通顺，语意连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 亮点 I am an outgo ing girl with many in terests and hobbies. Sports not only make me healthy but also give me cha nces to make new frien ds. Besides sports, I also enjoy readi ng

2、 and travelli ng. Both can ope n up my eyes and build up my mind. As a stude nt, I always remember stud y comes first. I love all the subjects because they make my school life colorful. I am always ready to help the people in n eed, so you can ask me for help at any time. 题二：假设你是林梅，你的英国笔友 Dave对中国人的周

3、末生活很感兴趣，请你以你的家庭为例写一 写你们通常是怎样度过周末的。 1. 提示词： usually, sometimes, after that, homework, housework, watch TV, play sports, go to the movies, visit, shopp in g. 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。 Dear Dave,2 I m very glad to get your letter. You asked me about my family life on weekends. Now let me tell you someth ing about

4、 it. Yours, Lin Me 亮点赏析 My family are always busy on weeke nds. First of all, I must finish my homework and at the same time my parents ne clea ning in our house. If there isn t much homework, I will help them with the housework too. After that, we usually cook together. Sometimes, we go to the movi

5、es.ed to do some 3 I like acti on movies but my mother likes roma ntic ones. On the after noon of Sun day, we go shopp ing to prepare for the coming week and the n visit my gran dpare nts. This is our way to spe nd most weeke nds. 内容与结构 结构清晰（分段，分层，有头有尾，过渡词） 选材得当（新颖） 有要点、有拓展 词汇丰富，避免重复 句式准确，适当修饰，形式多样4

6、 4 第20讲优秀作文赏析 题一: My name is Li Mei and Lily is my English name. I am an outgoing girl with many interests and hobbies. I like spo rts, such as swim ming, basketball and table tennis. Sports not only make me healthy but also give me chances to make new friends. Health and friends are very important

7、to me. Besides sports, I also enjoy readi ng and travelli ng. Both can ope n up my eyes and build up my mind. As a student, I always remember study comes first. I love all the subjects because they make my school life colorful. I study hard and I hope to be one of the top stude nts in my class. I am

8、 always ready to help the people in need, so you can ask me for help at any time. I believe we can get on well with eac h other. Let s enjoy our school life together. 题二： Dear Dave, I m very glad to get your letter. Yo u asked me about my family life on weekends. Now let me tell you someth ing about

9、 it. My family are always busy on weeke nds. We have to do a lot of work. First of all, I must finish my homework and at the same time my parents need to do some cleaning in our house. If there isn t much homework, I will help them with the housework too. After that, we usually cook together. The big dinner on weekend is very important for us. We often choose to eat dumpli ngs, hot pot or barbecues. Sometimes, we go to the movies. I like action movies but my mother likes romantic ones. On the after noon of Sun day, we go shopp ing to prepare for the coming week and the n vis