Is-romantic-love-the-most-important-condition-for-marriage

1、Is romantic love the most important condition for marriageWhat is the most important condition for marriage? Is Romantic? Is stable financial condition or anything else? On this question, different people have different views, but what most of us agree with is that Romantic which is indispensable, b

2、ut not all of love. In the fairy, lovely princess live with prince happily at last, but in real life, things go on reverse side sometimes. Before people get engaged , everything in love is nice. But after marriage something goes wrong. With enthusiasm of romantic fade away, different character and o

3、utlook on life and world decide the future of the marriage. Many young couple argue with each other on some trifles, and its a quite commonly phenomenon. Quarrel helps these young couple to have a better cognition on each other, but not every divergence can be solved. Without tolerance and understan

4、ding on each other, divergence will finally lead to divorce. Meanwhile trust is an infrastructural thing on marriage, without trust, there will be no marriage. Its true that romantic love lead people get together, but it is trust that make people live together for long time. Some people believe that

5、 today while most of us marry for romantic reasons, marriage at its core is still a financial union, and life boils down to dollars and cents. We cannot say who is wrong, and this conception have its reasonable side. After all, we should live in realistic whether you want to face it. But we should m

6、arry to create wealth instead of marry for wealth, while marriage without substance is not stable, so is the marriage only for wealth. Trust, tolerance responsibility and the faith for each other is crucial for a stable marriage. As for romantic love, its an indispensable condiment for a sweet love.

7、 1.1What is the most important condition for marriage?· 学习提示 易混词汇: wedding, marriage 均含“结婚”之意。  · 批改提示 注意condition和conditions，something区别。  · 2014 important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。  1.2Is Romantic?1.3Is stable financial condition or a

8、nything else?· 学习提示 易混词汇: econmic, economical, financial, economy 均含有“经济的”之意。  · 批改提示 注意condition和conditions，something区别。  1.4On this question, different people have different views, but what most of us agree with is that Romantic which is indispensable, but not al

9、l of love.· 名词错误 冠词缺失，建议将of+名词改为of+the+名词。  · 低频警示 t indispensable 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 搭配统计 动名搭配 have.view 在教材中出现过 4707 次  · 学习提示 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合，一致”之意。  · 批改提

10、示 people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。  1.5In the fairy, lovely princess live with prince happily at last, but in real life, things go on reverse side sometimes.· 句子错误 主谓不一致，lovely princess live不规范，建议修改。  · 动词错误 主谓不一致,请检查lovely princess live，动词建议用第三人称单数。  ·

11、名词错误 lovely princess 前面冠词缺失。  · 学习提示 易混词汇: at last, at length, eventually, finally, in the end, lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。  · 批改提示 注意live与living的区别。  1.6Before people get engaged , everything in love is nice.· 标点错误 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查

12、0; · 学习提示 易混词汇: affection, love, attachment 均含“爱，热爱”之意。  · 批改提示 people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。  1.7But after marriage something goes wrong.· 学习提示 易混词汇: wedding, marriage 均含“结婚”之意。  · 批改提示 but的近义表达有nonetheless或nevertheless。

13、  1.8With enthusiasm of romantic fade away, different character and outlook on life and world decide the future of the marriage.· 低频警示 romantic.fade 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 名词错误 单复数错误，请检查different character后的名词。  · 低频警示 romantic fade 在语料库中

14、无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 搭配统计 动名搭配 decide.future 在教材中出现过 452 次  · 学习提示 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。  1.9Many young couple argue with each other on some trifles, and it's a quite commonly phenomenon.· 句子错误 本句语法不规范，

15、请检查！  · 名词错误 单复数错误，建议将many.couple改为many.couples。  · 学习提示 易混词汇: argue, quarrel, debate, dispute, discuss, reason 均含“辩论，争论，说理”之意。  · 批改提示 argue with表示“据理力争”。注意与argue about的区别。  · 批改提示 注意commonly和in common区别。  1.10Quarrel h

16、elps these young couple to have a better cognition on each other, but not every divergence can be solved.· 低频警示 better.cognition 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 低频警示 solve.divergence 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 低频警示 these young couple to 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语&

17、#160; · 学习提示 易混词汇: couple, pair 均有“一对，一双”之意。  · 批改提示 help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid  1.11Without tolerance and understanding on each other, divergence will finally lead to divorce.· 学习提示 易混词汇: at last, at length, eventually, finally, in the end,

18、lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。  · 批改提示 lead to的近义表达有contribute to/conduce to/result in。  · 批改提示 查看understanding 和comprehension的区别。  1.12Meanwhile trust is an infrastructural thing on marriage, without trust, there will be no marriage.· 低频警示 infrastru

19、ctural.thing 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 学习提示 易混词汇: wedding, marriage 均含“结婚”之意。  · 批改提示 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。  · 批改提示 trust表示“相信”。注意与trust in的区别。详情点击  1.13It's true that romantic love lead people get together, but it is trust

20、that make people live together for long time.· 名词错误 冠词缺失，建议将for long time改为for a long time。  · 低频警示 romantic love lead people 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 低频警示 that romantic love lead people 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 学习提示 易混词汇: dwell, reside,

21、60;live, lodge, inhabit, settle 均有“居住，定居”之意。  · 批改提示 true的近义表达有accurate 。  1.14Some people believe that today while most of us marry for romantic reasons, marriage at its core is still a financial union, and life boils down to dollars and cents.· 低频警示 mar

22、riage at its core 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 学习提示 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。  · 批改提示 people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。  1.15We cannot say who is wrong, and this conception have its reasonable side.· 低频警示 reasonable.side 

23、;在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 低频警示 its reasonable side 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  · 学习提示 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion, impression 均有“思想，观点，观念”之意。  · 批改提示 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。  1.16After all, we should live in realistic whether

24、 you want to face it.· 学习提示 易混词汇: dwell, reside, live, lodge, inhabit, settle 均有“居住，定居”之意。  · 批改提示 face的近义表达有confront。  · 批改提示 want的近义表达有intend，tend，lack，need。  1.17But we should marry to create wealth instead of marry for wealth, while marriage without substance is not stable, so is the marriage only for wealth.· 词语错误 词性错误，of marry不规范，建议修改。  · 词语错误 请检查instead of marry，介词后面一般不跟动词原型。  · 句子错误 本句语法不规范，请检查！