短文改错专项训练

1、文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( ) 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。1.The sayingthatpracticemakes perfectmean thatafteryou have plentyofpracticeinwhatyou were doing ，you willbe perfectin itIfyou wa

2、nt improveyourstudyand work ，rememberingthatthe most importantthingishow toputtheknowledgeyou have learnedintopractice Forexample ，when learninga language ， thoughyou can make fulluse foryour talent， practiceisnecessary Ifyou onlylearngrammar rulesby the heartand dontdo enough exercise ，it s certain

3、thatyou can tunderstandthelanguageperfectly Butifyou realpractisea lot ，maybe you will understand them much better In this way， you can apply that youhave learned better2Nowadays,thereisa increasingnumber ofpeoplejoiningintheactivitiesofvolunteering.Its well-known that volunteeringjobs are makingcon

4、tributionsto societywithsomethingin return. Its as the Spirit of Lei Feng. However, knowing this, there are still manypeople wouldliketo devotethemselvestothistrend.For instance,the2008 BeijingOlympicGames had such many volunteers. They make lots of contributions to the success of theOlympics. Moreo

5、ver, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm tothem.Even thoughsome people scareeris a volunteer.They arereadytohelpingothers.Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devotingthemselves to society.3All of us need friendship. An understandi

6、ng between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help eachotherand to make theirfriendshipto lastlong.As an old sayin g goes,“A friendin needis a friend indeed.” So really friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests. A

7、ndit is wise to have as many good friends that we can. The more fiends we have, the morewe can learn for one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.4Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schoolsstudents are not giving enough time to do outdoor ac

8、tivities. Teachers ask students tospend most of their timeat studies.Butifstudents feeltired,theycantpay attentionto thatthey restudying.They willbe ina bad health.Itsalsonotgood forhis studies.In my opinions, its important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Thenthey willenjoybetter

9、 health and work hard.So pleasepay more attention to student healthand growth.5My car just wouldnt move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a fewmiles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little beforeacceptingI d have tospend thenight inthecar.Maybe I can find

10、a telephone.Actually,I didn thave to walkfar beforeI foundthesmallhouse standingin a fieldwith a lightshone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant oldman opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone andthat it wasn t any wit

11、hin walking distance, but the oldman who offered to go to repairmy car.6We all want to grow up happily and healthy, and for this goal we must do several things.Firstly, we should develop good attitude for life. Life consist of not only sunshine butalsohard time.We should be brave in front of difficu

12、lties.Secondly,we must study hardbecause of knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build your country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sport so that we can keepfitness.We can go running,playingballgames but simplytake a walk aftera days study.If we do th

13、ose things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.7Dear John,Last summer, I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have toldone more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely t

14、o a river. It is so a beautiful place!Wecan hear birdssinging happy allaround. Everybodysleepsin tents,thatis very exciting.We usually work only fivehours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I amsure it willbe an unforgettableexperience.Ifyouhave interestsin

15、it,replytome soon.Yours,Li Ping8As a student,LiHua works very harder at hislessons,so he is alwaysone of thetopstudentin our class. He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football atweekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good attheir les

16、sons, so she always helps them after class.As a monitor,LiHua has organizedsome voluntaryactivitiessuccessful.Wevisita nursinghome last month, and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.9Yesterday I pai

17、d a visit to the Hong en Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughingloudlyeven if they were the only people in the world.

18、Whats better, they spat and eventhrewrubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign“No littering” nearby. What a shame!Such behavior left me in thought. If all visitors to the Hong young couples did, the park will be severely polluting I think both of us should mind our behavior in the publicen Temple Pa

19、rk do as the and soon turned into a huge dustbin.places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.10I am a 18 year-old middle school student I have been busy in my study and seldom helpedmy parents with the houseworks Feeling quite sorry for that, and I begin to think

20、 aboutwhat to do to help Last Sunday, when my parents went out shop, I suddenly got an idea:why not giving the rooms a throughout cleaning? Firstly I collected both the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put it in place Then I wiped thedust offall the furniture After that,I

21、 swept and mopped thefloors At thisvery moment,my parents came back and were quite surprising to see all the rooms tidy and floorsshining My mother gave me a hug and I see satisfaction in her eyes Tired as I was, Inever felt so happy11Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappo

22、inting as I felt at theshabbycampus andthepoorly-equippedclassroom, I foundtheteacherspatientbutconsiderate Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class I decide to make thebest use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates WheneverI had difficulties, they were alw

23、ays helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student inmy class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated My experiencetells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines whoyou are12As a middle school student of Senior Three I do sports one and two

24、hours a day, such asdoing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running andso on I thinkitis very helpfully in meTake exercise makes me even more healthier so that I won't beillvery often. What'smore, I also getmyselfrelaxingin differentkinds ofsports.Onlyin this way I do a be

25、tter job in my study in high spirits For doing physical exercise,I'mbecoming strongerand more confidentthanago I didthink it isnecessaryfor everyoneto spend some time on sports every day so people's health is important in modern life13 。Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city t

26、o you. Our city is a new modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been developed very rapidly. From here you can travel everywhere by the sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connectswithBeijingstartedbeing used,The placesaround our cityisrichin naturalresources.And we have

27、enough supply in electricity and energy resources. The public order is nice.The governmentwillsupportinvestors withmany ways. Wewishmore foreignfriendto investin our city.14Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class while the teacher suddenly slip and fell.We were all worried about her. One of th

28、e boy carried her on the back, under the help ofsome others, totheclinic immediately. It turned out that herright leg was breaking andshe had to stayin hospital.The followingday, we went to visither withflowersand fruit.Seeing her laying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and

29、 hoped that she would recover soon. Lucky enough, this Thursday she returned back to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were both deeply moved and proud of having sucha responsible teacher.15Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that mostof them

30、try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor. They work hardly and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleasing. Even their spend money is a kind of happiness.But some people believe wealth cant bringhim happiness. For example, when one makesa fortune, the famil

31、y members will come from different parts of the country and try toshare the wealth for him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying toshare more.In my opinion, I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness, especially inthe modern society. Butwe shouldtake a proper att

32、itudetowards wealth.Remember： moneyis not anything。16When traveling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. Fortunately, a well-dressing manon the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctors officeand took me there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. Because ofI d

33、idnt speakFrench well,I couldn ttalk withhim verymuch. However,even we couldn t talk,we couldcommunicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated hisconcernformy healthy.Through thisexperienceI have learnedwhat communicationcan takeplace without much actual language a

34、t all.17The Magic Tree House seriesare among the most popularbook seriesever writingforchildren.It tells a story of two kids, Jack and his sister Annie, seem to be very excited about finding a tree house in the woods. A tree house is magic and can transport him to various places and various times in

35、 history. It turned out that King Arthur from Camelot needshelp. However, Jack s head librarians, Morgan le Fay, sends him and Annie to help. They end up go to many different places and time periods through history on their adventures, which attract to readers a lot.The series so far has had over 40

36、 books and is likely to grow.18Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students tospend most oftheirtimeat studies.But ifstudentsfeeltired,they cantpay attentionto thatthey re stu

37、dying.They willbe in a bad health.It s also not good forhis studies.In my opinions, it they will enjoy and growth.s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Thenbetterhealthand work hard.So pleasepay more attentionto studenthealth19Tom and Dick are next door neighborwho both wor

38、k in same office They oftenwalk togetherto and from workOnce they were walking to home together while it suddenly started torain Tomquicklyopened hisumbrellaand saidproud ，“ My wife reallyhas greatforesight（先见之明） She saidthismorning itwould rainand tellme to carrymy umbrella ” Dicksmiled and walked

39、up to her under the protection of the umbrella， said ，“ Mine has evengreat foresightShe didn t let me carry one as she knew youd share yours to me.参考答案1.1 mean改为 means. 2.were 改为 are. 3.添加 to. 4.将 remembering 改为 remember.5.将 for改为 of. 6.去掉 the. 7.将 exercise改为 exercises.8. 将 real 改为 really.9.将 them 改

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