雅思小作文表格与段落组织

1、9雅思A类写作TASK 1第四讲 表格图与段落组织 表格图可以分为两类，与时间段相关的表格图写法上要注意趋势的描 述，但以数据分布为主的表格图，写作时要运用一些比较和对比结构, 这点与饼状图相似，但是与饼状图不同之处在于表格图的写作需要处 理大量的数据。需要注意?不要将所有的数据都呈现出来?审题阶段要首先找出追重要的数据，如最大值，最小值，相等值 等?尽量归并数据，要根据已有知识来分类，例如看看是否可以找到 发达国家与发达国家、女性就业的部门等等。SampleThis table of figures shows the number of crimes per 100,000 people

2、in the US in six years from 2001 to 2011.Cnrne Rates in the US from 2001 to 2011 (mmong 100,000 p8sori3)I _ _Years| Crime一20012003200520072009-I2011Violent crime504.5475.846% 09467 04204403.6Homicide crimeI _ .5.6 一 J5,014.SProperty cri me3,6583,6543.4323277嫩柏2,941 |The table above illustra

3、tes the results of a survey concerning the number of crimes among 100,000 persons in the US in six separately years: 2001, 2003, 2005, 2007, 2009 and 2011.It is noticeable that although a decrease can be seen in all the three kinds of crimes, property crimes were considerably higher than the other t

4、wo kinds of crimes.Of the six years, violent crime rate peaked at 504.5 per 100,000 persons in 2001, but from then on, it declined continuously and plunged to a bottom of 403.6 per 100,000 persons in the last year of 2011.Property crime rate follows similar pattern to violent crime rate. Over the el

5、even-year period, property crime rate continued to fall from 3658 in 2001 to 2941 in 2011.It seems that homicide rate is almost negligible, compared with the other kinds of crime rates. From 2001 to 2007, homicide rate fluctuated between 5.6 and 5.7 per 100,000 persons. From 2007 onwards, homicide r

6、ate experienced an obvious drop and hit a trough of 4.8 in 2011.Overall, crime rates in the US were on the decline during the period in question and reached an all-time low in 2011. Certainly the year 2011 was the safest year in this period.Task 1The table below give information about Favorite Pasti

7、mes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Task 2The table gives information about students' opinions on different aspects of courses they attended in a university in 2012.Summarise the information by sel

8、ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Percentage of students rating aspects of their course as "very good".CoursePre* courseInfarmatianTeaching QualityTutor SupportCourseContentR.e5ourcesBusine5i62%93%96%74%58%Com puting61%88%85%69%56%Maths64%64%90%72%

9、51%Task 3The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.Range of activitiesVery satisfiedSatisfiedNot satisfiedFerrale members35%35%30%Male memebers55%40%5%Club facilitiesFeirale members

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12、ze the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.i9852000Watkin255237Bicycle5141Car3,1991806Local bus429274Long distance bus54L24Train28936STaai1342Other450585All ITCHje54,7405,475Task 1This table clearly presents and compa

13、res favorable pastimes in eight different countries. The pastimes, across the top of the table, are analyzed in relation to each country.As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching television. On the other hand, this figure is quite low for China where only 15% of

14、 people watch television. Predictably, Americans like music at 23%, whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the same way. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, for example, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chinese like hobbies

15、 the most at 50%, as opposed to only 20% in France. It isn t surprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia and the USA at 30%.It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influenced by a number of factors such as the socio-economic situation or the clim

16、ate. These factors influence cultural differences between different nationalities and make cross-cultural experiences more interesting.Task 2The table shows how students feel about a variety of aspects of courses they took in university in 2012.Among the three given courses, the aspect of business e

17、arned more appreciation from the students than the other two. In terms of teaching quality and tutor support, the rating as "very good" reached 93% and 96% respectively, which were the highest compared with computing and maths. The percentage of satisfactory comments for course content and

18、 resources were also higher than average level.As a contrast, the rating for the aspect of computing as "very good" was lower than average concerning pre-course information (61%), tutor support (85%) and course content (69%). The students also did not think highly about the teaching qualit

19、y and resourses.The number of students who were satisfied with the pre-course information of the maths course was slightly more than business and computing. However, the teaching quality was only recognized by 64% of the students, which were much less than those of business and computing. The situat

20、ion was similar for resources.All in all, business was the most welcomed course among the students. Besides, among the five categories, students are more satisfied with the teaching quality and tutor support than the others. (203 words)Task 3The table compares the opinions of male and female club me

21、mbers about the services provided by a city sports club.We can see from the responsesthat the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activ

22、ity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities. Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63% respectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club openi

23、ng hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male membe

24、rs feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.Task 4The table presents statistics of the subway systems in 6 cities in aspects of age, length, and annual users.As can be seen in the table, the subway system in London which was opened in 1863 ranks the first in date opened.

25、 Immediately behind is the system in Paris with the opening year in 1900. They are followed by the systems in Tokyo (1927), Washington DC (1976), and Kyoto (1981). In the last place is the system in Los Angeles. It was opened in 2001, 138 years later than the system in London.A similar sequencecan b

26、e seen in kilometers of route. The system in London again takes the lead with 394 kilometers and it is followed by its counterpart in Paris which is 195 kilometers shorter. The only difference occurs in the systems in Kyoto and Los Angeles. The latter is 17 kilometers longer than the former.Surprisi

27、ngly, although the system in Tokyo is neither the oldest nor the longest, it is indeed the highest in passengers per year. The figure of it is 1927 million. By contrast, the system in Kyoto is the last in this category. It is 45 million, less than one-forty-second of its counterpart in Tokyo.Overall, the table shows introduction of the subway systems in the six cities. Among them, the system in London is both the longest and the oldest while that in Tokyo is the busiest.Task 5As can be seen from the table, walk and certain short-distance transportation