2020-2021年中考英语书面表达汇编

1、2020-2021 年中考英语书面表达汇编一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.书面表达我的英语学习初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇f短文，多听听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松.多说运用英语，增强能力与信心.多读书开阔视野，了解英语文化.语法规则更好地理解与运用.写作写写日常生活.其他要求：1语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范;2.必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80-100。【答案】My En glish StudyHow time flies!

2、My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my En glish study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs.Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with cla

3、ssmates. Speak ing En glish can enhance the abilityand con fide nee to lear n En glish well. Third, read more En glish books. Read ing can broade n our horiz on and help us understa nd En glish culture .In additi on, lear n some grammar rules to better un dersta nd and use En glish. Fin ally, we can

4、write about our daily life.In a word, only whe n we develop in terest i n study ing En glish can we lear n it well.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back,listen to theradio,a good way to learn En glish,relax ourselves,com muni cate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition , ina word等。而感叹句H

5、ow time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.禾口复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，

6、考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对 初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右 放学，下 表所列里 大家的发 言记录。 请你写篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 oclockexercise to keep healthy and read booksat 4:45do what we want, such as liste

7、 ning to musicat 5 oclocktake a part-time job注意：(1)短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3) 词数：80-100；(4) 短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头： “What time should junior high school stude nts leave school? held a classmeeti ng to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussi on.【答案】 “What time should junior hi

8、gh school students leave school?”This week we have held aclass meeti ng to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussi on.Most stude nts thi nk that stude nts should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise tokeep healthy and read more in terest ing books after school.Some think that

9、 stude nts should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such asliste ning to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collect ing discardedplastic bottles to sell for mon ey.I am in fa

10、vor of leaving school at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keephealthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room

11、，playtennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most studentsthink that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, becausethey can have more time to do what they want to do, such as liste

12、ning to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表This week we have达多样化；同时Most stude ntsthink/ Some think/ A few tl使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总 结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有 条理。【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数

13、。3书面表达假如你是Amy,德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中， 她询问如下信息：1.你家情况；2有关餐桌礼仪；3.她要承担的家务劳动；4现在，你 就她提出的问题给她回信,也预祝她在你家过得开心！ 要求：1.文章必须包括图片中主要内容,可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3.字数约110词。Dear Sara,Im glad to hear from you yesterday._Love,Amy【答案】Dear Sara,Im glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family nex

14、t week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placedon the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate.This is a sign of politeness. The appropria

15、te thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feeluncomfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there. As for housework, I think its our dutyto help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes

16、, clean the room and make the bed. Ihope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【详解】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do so

17、me housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，makethe bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列结构In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and sharedby everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope youcan take care of yo

18、urself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的 亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达 更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和

19、较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。4每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变 化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1.变化是什么?2.变化是如何发生的?3.变化后有什么感受?【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and

20、bought me a lot ofbooks. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantasticway to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】 结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，

21、人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was ,my mother always readGradually I began to,Books are等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begi nto do sth, love doi ng sth, fe

22、el like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5.书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(set up traditional culture classes)，但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。Your opinionn ecessary or unn ecessaryYour reas onsthe root（根）of Chin ese culture

23、, know more about, spread,developYour suggesti onDear editor,As we all know, Chin ese traditi onal culture is facing a great challe nge because of the rapid developme nt if intern ati onaltech no logy no wadays._Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chin ese traditi onal culture is facing a great ch

24、alle nge because of the rapiddevelopme nt of intern ati onal tech no logy no wadays. In my opinion, its n ecessary for schools toset up traditi onal culture classes.First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditionalculture and run after Wester n cultu

25、re. Second, traditi onal culture classes can give stude ntschances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, sett ing up traditi onalculture classes can spread and develop our Chin ese culture.All in all, it is of great importa nee to set up tra

26、diti onal culture classes in schools. Let schools to set up traditi onal cultureclasses!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本 文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称， 注意主谓一致问题， 句子结构主要为系 表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用， 比如：Chinese traditional cultureisfacing /its n ecessary for schools to,we shouldnt,They can raise，-

27、it is of greatimporta nee to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认 为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处becauseof,in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call o等这些词组 的运用也让文章增色不少。6书面表达 初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题,老师要求你在英语课上做

28、一个以“LessPressure Makes Life Better为题的报”告,谈谈你的做法,与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求 写一份发言稿,内容包括：1.普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2.我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3.我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2.词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are unde

29、r too muchpressure. _【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cantget on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wan

30、ted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kindsof after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressedout so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes bet

31、ter life. Thank you.【解析】 【详解】 这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要 包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的 压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应 由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和 体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意 根据表达的需要使用正确的时态

32、，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构 为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和 复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分，使文意连贯。【点睛】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现 象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目 中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短 文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式 准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁

33、。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾 语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students cantget on well withtheir classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in myclass、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。7书面表达假设你将代表你校200

34、9届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言 稿，发言稿的内容要点如下： 回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同 学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得 出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to ma

35、ke a speechon behalf of the graduating class of 2009.Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to makea speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this be

36、autiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively andinteresting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parentssupport and our classmates help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done f

37、or us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生 动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写 作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。8书面表达(本题15分)根据要求

38、完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量(positiveenergy)。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助， 也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：1.你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2.说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；3.呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词 数。In the program, a customer stood up when

39、 a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire herbecause she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried m

40、y best to make her stop crying. When I knewshe was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for othershelp. I stronglybelieve helping others will fill ou

41、r society with positive energy. As the saying goe s,“The roses in her hand, the flavor inmine.（113w）”【解析】【详解】 本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以 及鼓励大家相互帮助，并让世界充满正能量。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be for, adj en ough to do,

42、 theother day, try ones best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in oneto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思 连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因

43、此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确 性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。9.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网 上购物的文章。优点(a

44、dva ntage)1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点(disadva ntage)1.只看到图片， 看不到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购shopp ing on li ne;商品goods;导致cause注意：1所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping

45、online.【答案】With the developme nt of the Intern et, many people are used to shopp ing on li ne. It has become fashi on able.Some of us stude nts also join the group.Shopp ing on li ne has many adva ntages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without goingoutdoors. You c

46、an avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you canchoose from more varieties of goods,whose prices are gen erally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy f(s opinion, be supto buy goods t

47、hat aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people tobuy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopp ing on li ne.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时 态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任

48、务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，ingood quality，figure out，have the chanee to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动