【高中英语写作训练】靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

1、写作层级训练第三部分靓化词汇一一学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽 力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型， 即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此， 为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次， 从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面： 一、使用亮点词汇的 4种方法1.标新立异“语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。(1) Great cha ng

2、eshave taken place in our school in the last few years.A nd the newscame that a short film will be shown in our school.(2018 全国卷U书面表达)f Our school has witnessecgreat cha nges in the last few years.A ndword came that ashort film will be shown in our school.(2018 全国卷U书面表达)(2) 1 bmsy with my less ons n

3、ow, for the College Entrance Exam in ati on, which is veryimportant to me, is near.fInoccupied with my less ons now for the College Entrance Exam in ation, which is ofgreat importanceto me，is around the corner(2017 天津高考书面表达 )(3) Our team, besidesregular training，will join in a variety of activities.

4、fOur team，apart/aside from regular training，will join in a variety of activities.(2017 全国卷川书面表达)(4) Several days late，when the video was played on the graduation ceremonyit was verypopular.fSeveral days late，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony it was wellreceived(2017 北京高考书面表达)2多样表达

5、 避免重复在写作时， 应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语， 要尽量用贴切多样的词语来 展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(1) Moreover， we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built， a wide range of sportsevents are able to be held.f Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up, a wide range of sportsevents are able to b

6、e held.(201 全国卷 川书面表达)(2) The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including manymatches.fThe team will hold a range of activities,some of which will appeal to you,including manymatches.(2017 全国卷川书面表达)(3) We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We m

7、ay have differentways to deal with such a situation.fWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may havevarious waysto deal with such a situation.浙江高考书面表达)3单词短语 短语优先 当单词和短语表示同一个意思时, 优先使用短语。 恰当使用短语, 一方面能使文 章更加生动,另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。(1) Hopefully, these suggestions would behelpful

8、/beneficial to you.fHopefully, these suggestions would beof great help/benefitto you.(2018 全国卷I书面表达)(2) To learn more about the development of our school all the students are welcome towatch the short film Growing Together.fWith the aim of learning more about the development of our school，all the st

9、udents arewelcome to watch the short filmGrowing Togethe.(2018 全国卷n书面 表达 )(3) There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty inadvance. f There is no doubt that you are supposedto know about the history of the TangDynasty in advance.（2017 全国卷I书面表达）（4）Firstly，the final e

10、xam of this term is comingso I am busy preparing for it.fTo begin with，the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparingfor it.（2017 天津高考书面表达）4用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底， 显示出自己的写作水平， 应避免反复使用低年级学过 的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。（1）If you take my advice you are sureto have the most unforgett

11、able experienceduring your college in Beijing.fSo long asyou take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experieneeduring your college in Beijing.（2018 北京高考书面表达 ）（2）Second，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skillsconcerning my position.fSecond，I am sparing no

12、effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerningmy position.（2017 天津高考书面表达 ）（3）I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Fridayafternoon.fI should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Fridayafternoon.（2016 全国卷 川书面表达）二、使用亮点词汇的

13、 2 点注意1 注意增加亮词的 “出镜率 ”，变消极词汇为积极词汇 阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇， 写作中能运用自如的词汇为 积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词” 。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英 语作文表达水平的高低。 现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词 汇与消极词汇之间； 另外，很多背过的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌 生词汇。因此在备考过程中， 考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持 接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复使用初中学过的简单词汇， 背了大 量的亮词妙语而不用。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想

14、一想还有没有更好 的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这 个含义，大家首先想到的是“ beautiful，”那么在下笔时， 要想一想还有没有更出 彩的表达， 如 “attractive 或“charming等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult，那是不是用“tough 或 “challenging 更与众不同呢？2.注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握 的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三至五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地

15、“完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特别提醒考生在使用“高级词汇”时，一 定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇 并不一定就是高级词汇，例如： 一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。Early in the morni ng we purchasedsome Christmas prese nts.（purchase 太过于书面 化，改为 bought 更地道）三、写作的秘密武器一一 24 个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chaneeopport unitychoicealter nativeideaopi nionpeoplein dividualresul

16、tconsequeneeeffectin flue nee动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withun derstandmake senseofdeveloppromotecon sidertake intoacco unt形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimporta ntvital/ sig nificantin terest ingabsorb ing/difficultchalle ngingappeali ng副词fin allyeve ntuallyhardlybarely

17、immediatelyin a flashno wadayscurre ntly连词sothereforeandas well as(1) lt is of importanee for you to understand the conten, Tang poetry.f It is of importanee for you to make sense othe content, Tang poetry.f It is of importanee for you to be aware of the conten,Tang poetry.(2017 全国卷I书面表达)(2) That s

18、why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a beCeoice.fThatswhy I think the trip along the Yangtze Riverwill bea betteralternative.(2017 北京高考书面表达)(3) In the coming three years our school life will be difficult.fIn the coming three years our school life will be challenging四、写作的顶级装备一一 27 个加分

19、词汇表达关注的名词attention, focus，concern表达争论的名词discussion，debate argument表达现象的名词phe nomenon表达优缺点的名词advantage disadvantage strength，weakness表达增长或下降的动词in crease accumulate, decrease decli ne表达导致后果的动词短语result in， lead to, bring about， con tribute to，giverise to表达支持、反对的动词短语approve of，be in favor of， object to表

20、达可能性的形容词likely表达有好处的形容词ben eficial表达强调的副词particularly，especially(1) The picture shows a commonphenomenonthese days.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。(2) The Internet hasbrought about many cha nges in the workplace.网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。（3）0ur teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火

21、。II综合演练III请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1. We were sointerested in the competitio n that we formed a group to take part in it.（2018 天津高考书面表达）keen on2. Imery glad to learn that you are coming in September.（2018 全国卷I书面表 达）more than3.We are desperately in need of your helpAs a result, I sincerely invite you to joi

22、n us.（2018 天津高考书面表达）As a consequenee4. So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynas, whichwill help you prepare for your class.（2017 全国卷I书面表达Therefore；make_preparations _for5. The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapeson the spot.（2017

23、全国卷n书面表达）various/a range _of6. In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry I advise you to learn some briefhistory of the Tang Dynasty in advance.（2017 全国卷I书面表达）acquire7. Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.（201 北 京高考 书面表达）came 丄一 with8. The reasons ar*he fol

24、lowing.（2016 四川高考书面表达）as_follows9. At the same time , I decidedto study harder rather than waste precious time on thoseuseless thin gs.（湖南高考书面表达）made _up _my _mind10 . As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.aresupposed。11. There s no harm in your staying up latemetimesoc

25、casionally/onee in a while 12 . Theteacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challe ngingn.句型转换1. She didn t listen to what her teacher said in the class. f She turned a deaf ear to whather teacher said in the class.2. At that time , I realized that she didnfAt that tim

26、e,it occurred to me that she didn t tell the truth.3. You should finish your homework before you play football.fYou .are supposed to fin ish your homework before you play football.4. In my opinion , neither you nor she has met the standard.fAs far as Inconcerned, neither you nor she has met the stan

27、dard.5. I can t bear the way she treats her pare nts any Ion ger.fI can no longer put .up with the way she treats her pare nts.6. During the mountain climbing , please help each other and pay special attention toyour safety.fIn the course of the mountain- climbing,please help each other and pay spec

28、ial atte nti onto your safety.7.After five hours stop work, we were all tired.fAfter five hours -nop work,we were all worn out.8. Jack is very clever, who often thinks of new ideas.fJack is very cleve,who often comes up with new ideas.川.请用高级词汇对下文黑体部分进行提升考生作文Dear Pete,It is a great honor for me to invite you to l.take part in the activity “ Build a CivilizedCampus ” this mon th.We 2.plan to go hand in hand to 3.build our civilized campus where beauty andt tell the truth.harm ony meet.To achieve the goal we ll 4a sk the school to com muni cate with eac