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1、.1.2019·全国甲The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on

2、a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.2.2019·山东潍坊高三二模One day,an old man was returning home after shopp

3、ing.Suddenly,a bag of waste fell in the sky,nearly hitting him on his head.He was greatly frightening by the unexpected incident.Dropped the things he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!Obviously,the accident caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartmen

4、t.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.Only when we each behaved properly can our society be changed into a pleasing one.3.Childhood is a time when there are little duties.If a child has good parents,he is fed,looked after and love

5、d no matter when he may do.Its impossible for him to be given such much again in his later life.But a child is not so free to do as he wishes it.He is continually being told not to do this,not to do that,or being punished for what he had done wrong.When the young man starts to make their own living,

6、he becomes free from the rules of school and parents.Therefore,he can no longer expect others to pay his food,his clothes and his room.He has to work hard to live comfortable.If so,he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society.4.The person who has taught me most about the l

7、ife is my grandmother.She was more than just a grandmother to me.When she died a few years before,I felt I lost a really good friend.She always looked very nice on her age.She did everything she could make me feel at home.She was imaginative and would spend hours telling me stories she has made up.I

8、 am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer.Apart from kept a young boy entertained,she taught me a large number of important thing on how to behave.I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it.She was a positive person

9、 but she also taught me how to look for the good in everything.5.2019·全国丙卷The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didnt

10、seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to

11、 have my parents to turn to whenever need help.6.When I was at middle school,I have a nice classmate.She was friendly and very pretty,that was the first foreigner I had ever met.She was good in three languages,although he was born in China.It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her

12、mother came from England.All of them were teaching at a university at that time.She loved collecting stamps,listening pop music as well as playing the football.Her dream was to be an engineer,so she usually studied harder to achieve it.She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing.We a

13、ll liked her.7.Failure was something unavoidable.Properly handling,though,it can teach us a lot.Firstly,we should face it brave instead of complaining about a unfairness of life.Secondly,we should analyze the reasons timely to avoiding making similar mistakes.Last but not least,we are supposed to ma

14、ke appropriate changes and more effort.Only in this way we more likely to succeed.As for me,I have a positive attitude in failure,because I believe there has always wisdom to learn from failure.I will keep it in my mind that failure is the mother of success.8.As everyone knows it,health is the most

15、important thing in our life.Firstly,by doing sports,we get our body training.Secondly,doing proper activities keeps us physical fit.Lastly,when taking part in sports,we can learn not only the spirits of cooperation and optimism,but also what to handle difficulties.Whats worse,now our country carried

16、 out a national campaign of the students sports.The motto is that “Doing sports for one hour each day,and then you will be healthy in fifty years and live happy life forever.As for me,I enjoy doing sports because it is a good thing for both of us.9.Dear Jin Jing,Your problem is common one among midd

17、le school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you are lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show

18、that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate,and you can talk about your hobbies as well.Unless someone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confi

19、dence,you can make as many friends as possibly.Yours,Lily10.Dear Sir,The moment I see your poster asking for volunteers,I knew I should try my lucky.I am always a strong supporter of environmental protection.Besides,my hometown is popular tourist attraction.In terms of your character,Im happy to tel

20、l you that Im an outgoing and devoting person with good teamwork spirit.I have learned a lot from participating in some volunteer program in the past few months,such as cutting hair for empty nesters or collecting rubbish on the river at weekends.I am confident in that my involvement in this project

21、 will make it very differently.Look forward to hear from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua11.2019·山东临沂高三二模Jennie is very keen on running.Since she was six years,she has been getting up early and running every morning before school.She has also been cycled to school ever since she was learned to ride a bike.Last year she became the sports champions of our class.I know she had been hoping that she will be included in the locally sports