上海市九年级初三中考英语-作文修改及亮点句型训练3

1、.自制中考冲刺英语作文提升例文及修改范文【浦东新区】Write at least 60 words about the topic “I enjoy reading, traveling, doing sports. 请以“我喜欢做为题目，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。要求内容贴 意思连接。 请在答题纸上补充完好题目 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分Use the following as your reference: What do you enjoy doing? Why do you enjoy doing it? What can you get/lea

2、rn from it?【参考范文】 I Like Reading NewspapersAs students, we usually get the information through watching TV, reading newspapers, surfing the net and so on. However, I like reading newspapers best.Not only can newspapers bring news to us, but also provide us with many other things I cant learn from th

3、e English textbook, such as how to cook. Moreover, its good for my English study for plenty of short sayings and mottos can be learned from the newspapers.In a word, its worth reading English newspapers! 修改意见：题目可以改成I like reading English newspapers，因为文章的内容及结尾都是围绕English newspapers来展开表达的；第二段的us换成me.修

4、改后的文章：I Like Reading English NewspapersAs students, we usually get various information through watching TV, surfing the net and so on. However, reading English newspapers plays an important role in my daily life.Not only can newspapers bring news to me, but also enable me to acquire more knowledge I

5、 cant learn from the English textbook, such as how to cook. Moreover, all sorts of short sayings and mottos in the newspapers do a lot of good to my English study.In a word, I cannot emphasize the importance of reading English newspapers too much, I will persist.写作提升：1、not onlybut also 不仅而且 放句首，句子要部

6、分倒装2、moreover“而且表示递进关系，类似的短语还有whats more, besides, furthermore.3、in a word“总之表示归纳总结，类似的短语还有on the whole, in short, all in all, in general, to sum up.4、be worth doing值得做eg: Anything that is to be done is worth doing well.任何需要做的事都值得做好。5、various各种各样的adj. A variety of, all kinds of, all sorts of都有这种意思6、play an important part/role in在中扮演重要的角色，起重要的作用。7、enable sb to do sth使某人可以有时机做某事eg: Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.8、do good to对有好处9、cannot emphasize the importance of too much再