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1、WELCOME 20122012年湖南卷年湖南卷. .书面表达书面表达生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，期间有烦恼，有惊喜，而又找回的经历，期间有烦恼，有惊喜，有感慨有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：主要内容包括：1.1.丢失的物品；丢失的物品；2.2.物品失而物品失而复得的经过；复得的经过；3.3.你的感想。你的感想。注意：注意：1.1.词数不少于词数不少于120120个；个；2.2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 Getting back what you have lost w

2、ould be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom

3、 quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly conv

4、inced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.How to polish(润色润色) your composition?一一 遣词遣词 努力使用高级词汇努力使用高级词汇1.At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. At weekends, we have _ homework to do. endless2. I had a good idea.A good idea_ me.struck

5、3.As a result, the plan was a failure.The plan _ _ to be a failure.4.She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Austria _ _ _ _studying music. turned outfor thepurposeof5.She cant correctly pronounce the word.She _ _ _ pronouncing the word. has trouble/difficultyin2 2学会使用恰当的过渡词：学会使用恰当的

6、过渡词：1 1）表示转折关系）表示转折关系but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), otherwise, in spite of, despite , regardless of(不管,不顾), although, though, while. 3 3） 表示对比关系表示对比关系on the contrary; Instead of; on one handon the other hand; for one thing ,for another thing.2 2） 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系besides, furthermore , whats

7、 more, in addition, moreover , worse still, to make matters /things worse,6 6）表示解释、说明关系）表示解释、说明关系7 7）表示结论）表示结论namely (也就是), actually, in fact, as a matter of fact, such as, for example/for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to thisin short, in brief

8、, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, 4 4） 表示因果关系表示因果关系as a result /consequence (of), owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of(由于), so, therefore, because, since ,as 5 5） 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系shortly afterwards(不久之后), first, second, then, next, finally,

9、in the end, eventually. 二二 造句造句- 灵活多变的句式结构灵活多变的句式结构1.1.使用强调句使用强调句2) l didnt realize the importance of learning English well until then._ _ _ _then _ I realized the importance of learning English well.Itwas not untilthat1)The dog has saved my little brother._It is the dog that has saved my little bro

10、ther.2.2.使用倒装句使用倒装句You can learn to write English well only in this way._Only in this way can you learn to write English well.Though I am weak, I will make the efforts._ _ _ _, I will make the efforts.Weak asIam3.3.使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news._ _ _ _, t

11、he young man couldnt help crying.Hearing thebadnewsShe walked out of the room and many students followed her. _ _ many students, she walked out of the room . FollowedbyHe didnt turn up. And it disappointed everybody._ _ everybody _ he didnt turn up.Itdisappointedthat4.4.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句, ,定从定从_ _ ever

12、ybody _ _he didnt turn up.disappointedthatwaswhatHe didnt turn up, _ disappointed everybody.which5. 5. 改变语态改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off. _ _ _that the conference be put off.It issuggested6.6.使用并列句使用并列句If you give him an inch , he will take a yard. _ _ an inch, _ he will take a yard.themore excitedWhen he spoke, he felt more and more excited.The more he spoke, _ _ _ he felt. Give himand1.开头段开头段 开门见山，点明主题开门见山，点明主