The skills of scenery description3

1、What is the description of scenery?The scenery Natural scenery social environmentNatural scenery description The natural scene、the scene of characters activitywhich Social environment descriptionReflect the social culture, customs and habits, living human, the art of living.多角度写景2 23 31 1正面、侧面相结合实写、

2、虚写相结合（以虚衬实）人的各种感受相结合 （味、触、视、听、嗅等）文本5 56 64 4详写、略写相结合动静相结合多种修辞方法相结合 Every spring, red as fire kapok, powder Ru Xia peony flowers, white jade, rose flowers in blossom. Some of them are full of branches, buds, some bud Chuzhan, some stood in full bloom. A burst of refreshing fragrance attracted many sm

3、all bee buzzed, sing and dance.The birds singing merrily song, flying in the sprouting willows, with moving dance to show their talents. 每到春天，红得如火的木棉花，粉得如霞的芍药花，白得如玉的月季花竞相开放。它们有的花蕾满枝，有的含苞初绽，有的昂首怒放。一阵阵沁人心肺的花香引来了许许多多的小蜜蜂，嗡嗡嗡地边歌边舞。鸟儿们欢快地唱着动听的歌儿，在发了芽的柳树上飞上飞下，用动人的舞姿来展示自己的才华。1.从视觉、听觉、味觉三个角度。2.运用了比喻、拟人、排比等修

4、辞手法。3.用虚实结合，动静结合的手法进一步丰富描写。 The main role in the writing of scenery description 1.Give an account of time and place Reveal historical background 2.Exaggerate atmosphere 3.Display the dimenshions and depth of the characters personality 4.Drive the plot to advance 5.Take advantage of scenery to expres

5、s emotionThe skills of scenery description add modifiers:1.Adding modifiers(妙加修饰语妙加修饰语): Its mean to add some descriptive adjective words ,such as colors words,size and shap,nature, that you can write more vividly rhetoric devices:rhetoric devices:(rhetoric devices:(巧用修辞手法巧用修辞手法) ) metaphor, personi

6、fication, parallelism, repetition, reference etc. integrate into the authors experiences and feeling(融情于景融情于景)Association method(联想法）联想法）Imagination（想象法）（想象法） 想象花儿像孩子一样调皮可爱花朵儿一串挨着一串,一朵接着 一朵,彼此推着挤着,好不活泼热闹！ “我在开花，”它们在笑。 “我在开花！”它们嚷嚷。由春花联想到秋实 花里带着甜味儿；闭了眼，树上仿佛已经满是桃儿、杏儿、梨儿。 Adding modifiers One ray catche

7、s the drops that from on the edge of the roof, and I am treated to a row of tiny, quivering colorsmy private rainbow. They are red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet, which makes a wonderland. 一缕阳光正好照在屋檐边的雨滴上，形成了只有我才看见的一条细细的，忽隐忽现的彩虹。五颜六色-赤橙黄绿青蓝紫，简直就像仙境一般。 We rounded just such a cape to

8、wards sunset, the most easterly point of a continent, dramatically high and lonely, a great purple mountain overhung by a great purple cloud, the sea had turned to a correspond-ing dusk of lavender. 将近日落时分，我们正好绕过这样一座海角。这个海角位于大陆的最东端，挺拔兀立，引人注目。这是一座紫红色的大山，笼罩在一大片紫红色的云雾中。大海变成了淡紫色，跟薄暮景色十分相称。 rhetoric devi

9、ces The swallows were flying to and fro, up and down in the sky. The birds, like musician, sang their melodious songs in the trees, and butterflies, like colorful dancers, were fluttering here and there. 燕子在天空飞旋。小鸟像音乐家一样，在树上唱着优美的歌，小鸟像音乐家一样，在树上唱着优美的歌，蝴蝶像多采多姿的舞蹈家一样蝴蝶像多采多姿的舞蹈家一样，拍动着翅膀，飞来飞去，我们深深地呼吸着新鲜空气

10、，开怀大笑。 It may be by day light, looking at the sea, rippled with little white ponies, or with no ripples at all but only the lazy satin of blue, marbled at the edge where the passage of our ship has disturbed it.Or it may be at night,when the sky surely seems blacker than ever at home and the stars m

11、ore golden.(para 6) 要是在白天,我们就凝视着海面,时而大海掀起涟漪，象奔腾的小白驹;时而涟漪消失不见，只留下一片蓝澄澄的锦缎.我们船只开过搅动了缎面，船边上泛起了大理石般的斑澜花纹若是在夜晚，我们翘首望天，这儿的夜空比故乡的更黑，星光却显得更加璀璨。 metaphor,metonymy,analogy,parallelismThe stars seemed little cuts in the black cover, through which a bright beyond was seen. （para6）星星宛如黑幕上的一个个小裂缝，通过这些小裂缝，我们看到了金光灿

12、灿的天外世界。Simile Only a second does it last, that streak of green light; we wait for it while the red ball cut in half as though by a knife, sinks to its daily doom. Then come the twilight colours of sea and heaven (We have discovered the fallacy of saying that darkness falls suddenly in these latitude

13、, at any rate on sea level), the wine pink width of water merging into lawns of aquamarine, and the sky a tender palette of pink and blue. （para26） 当刀切般的半轮红球沉入每天的归宿地时，我们等待着绿光的出现。蓦地那道绿光一闪，只持续一秒钟就消失了。接着海天的颜色变得昏暗起来（我们发现那种认为在这样的纬度上，黑夜是突然降临的说法是一种谬误之见，至少在海平面上并非如此），辽阔的酒红色的水面渐渐溶为一块块蓝绿色的草坪。那天空也溶为一块柔和的粉红色和蓝色的

14、调色板。 metaphorDoes one like island because one unconsciously appropriates them, a small manageable domain in a large unmanageable world? I cannot tell why it should give me such a queer sensation to reflect that that island has always been there (unless indeed it be no more than the work of the patie

15、nt coral) and will be there still, should I return to find it waiting for me. It is the same sensation as I have experienced in looking at a photograph of ,say, some rive valley of innermost China, and seen a boulder, and thought that if I could find myself transferred to that spot I could touch the

16、 reality of that particular piece of rockIt is there. For me , I could sit on that very boulder. 在这难以驾驭的大千世界里，这些孤岛的确是块小小的易于驾驭的领地，人们会不自觉地将其据为己有，这是不是人们喜欢这些岛屿的原因呢？那座岛屿一直就存在那儿（除非它真的不过是耐心的珊瑚虫的 作品），并且将依然存在在那儿，假如我一旦回来发现它在等着我的话。当我想到这些时，心理就会产生一种奇特的感觉。为什麽会这样，我自己也说不清。当我看着一张照片，比如说中国内地某河谷的照片，看到里边有一块巨石，想到如果我自己能亲临

17、其地的话，我就能够碰一碰那块特定岩石的实体时，我也会产生同样的感觉。巨石在那儿，为我而存在。我就能实实在在坐在这块巨石上啦。 periodic sentence(1)All around us, I can smell spring. The trees are green and leafy. I can hear the sounds of children playing their yards and the lawn mowers kicking into gear. And the air has a warm breeze to it the kind that warms th

18、e hairs on your arms as it blows by.我似乎闻到了环绕我们的春天的气息，树林已是枝绿叶茂。我听到了孩子们在院子中嬉戏的声音；我还听到了绿地上割草机的轰鸣声。空气中洋溢着和煦的微风它拂暖了你臂膀上的汗毛。(2)House are packed tightly together, and where are no houses, there are roads. On these roads, the traffic flow is endless. Naturally, the children have nowhere to play. They must s

19、imply sit indoors on their own and watch television. The rooms are cramped and short of sunlight. 这里的房子一个挨着一个，没有房子的地方工业便是道路，在这样的路面上，车辆川流不息。自然孩子们没有过玩耍的地方工业，只能自己呆在家里看电视。房间狭窄，而且是缺少阳光。Association method(1)当你在青岛旅游观光的时候，也许在不远处的别墅里，正有一个金发、碧眼的美丽女郎，正在阳台上品着咖啡，朝着你深情的微笑正所谓你在桥上看风景，楼上看风景的人在看你。你在桥上看风景，楼上看风景的人在看你。W

20、hen you travel and tourism in Qingdao, when, perhaps not far from the villa, is a blond, blue-eyed beautiful girl, is the balcony top grade of coffee, affectionate towards you smile . . the saying goes, you look at the bridge scenery, the people upstairs to see scenery see you. (2)你可以想象这小小一叶片舟与大海搏斗时

21、的惊心动魄，也可以想象它鱼儿满仓凯旋归来时的喜悦之情。You can imagine, this little one struggle with the sea when the boat leaves the soul-stirring, it is also conceivable that the fish warehouse full of triumphant joy when they return. Imagination The young moon lies on her back tonight as is her habit in the tropics,and as,I think,is suitabl