【课件】人教版（2019）必修一：Unit 4 Natural Disasters Period 4 Reading for Writing 课件 -

1、Learning objectivesIn this class, you will1. read a news report about a natural disaster and two summaries of the news report;2. conclude what a summary is and how to write a summary;3. write two summaries.1. Whats the writing style（体裁） of the article?Headline 2. Thinking: When you see this headline

2、, what information would you like to get from the news report?A news report1. What caused the tsunami?2. Did it influence China? name of the newspapertitle of the news reportreporter and datea picture of a tsunamiHeadline(tells what the story is about)Body(contains more information and details)Endin

3、g(gives something to think about)Byline(shows who wrote the story)Lead (includs who, what, when, where, why and how)点击添加相关标题文字ADD RELATED TITLE WORDS ow hy ho here hen hat Tips: Dont read word by word. Just scan it to find out & underline the key words about: time / place / persons / eventRead f

4、or main informationLead（导语）（导语） A tsunamiCaused by an earthquakeMore than 6500 people On 26 December 2004In Asia/Crashed into coastlines and killed Six elementsWhatHowWhyWhoWhereWhenReadingRead and find out the five Ws and one H of the reading material.The headline of the news report should be brief

5、 and catch readers eyes.The news report uses lots of numbers or figures, which makes the report accurate and more convincing.In general, the language of the news report is very brief and concise. Body（主体）Para. 1Para. 2Ending3. Foreign aid is being organized, but dangerous conditions and damaged road

6、 is making it difficult for rescue work.1. Thousands of people are missing. 2. The number of deaths is expected to grow.Q: What are talked about in this paragraph? (key words)Q: Whats the purpose of writing the last paragraph?To show concerns and prediction of the disaster.missing peopledeathsrescue

7、 work Who WhyHowA tsunamiCaused by an earthquakeMore than 6,500 people On 26 December 2004In Asia?(Crashed into coastlines and killed)LeadEnding3. Foreign aid is being organized, but dangerous conditions and damaged road will make it difficult for rescue work.1. Thousands of people are missing. 2. T

8、he number of deaths is to grow.In Southeast & South Asiamissing peopledeathsrescue work Write a summary for the news report.WhereWhenWhatSummaryRead the news report released the day after a tsunami and answer the questions.1 When did the tsunami happen?On 26 December 2004.2 What caused the tsuna

9、mi?It was caused by the strong earthquake that reached a magnitude of 9.0.3 Why would it be difficult to deliver food and supplies?Because the conditions are dangerous and the roads were damaged.P.54Figure out the summary of the news report.Check the main points it includes.On 26 December 2004, a ts

10、unami killed more than 6,500 tourists，fishermen and many other locals in Southeast Asia. Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow. The damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.口date 口time 口place 口event 口cause口 ef

11、fect 口following eventsLearning tip: A summary is a short statement of main points. A summary paragraph tells the main ideas and the most important information of a longer passage.P.55 Ex.2.Step I. Read the text and write a list of the main details. Strange things happened in the countryside before t

12、he earthquake; An earthquake hit Tangshan China on 28 July 1976; The number of people who were killed or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000; Nearly everything in the city was destroyed; Soldiers and medical workers came to help the people who had great loss and to try and find survivor

13、s; With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the citys people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earthquake ruins.P.55 Ex.3Para1: Strange things happened in the countryside of Hebei, China. Para2: A strong earthquake hit Tangshan, and many people were killed or injured. Par

14、a3: The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Para4: The rescue work began soon after the quake. Para5: With strong support from the government and the citys people, the new city of Tangshan was built.Step III. Organise the ideas and draft your summary. For several days, strange things occ

15、urred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei. Then, on 28 July 1976, an earthquake hit Tangshan city. The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Many people were killed or injured. The rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to find survivors and help

16、 the people who had lost everything. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people, a new Tangshan was built.题型解读概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。评分标准考试说明中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25 points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相

17、应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。 写作方法1.定位查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。 写作方法1.定位查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇

18、的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。写作技巧-如何写概要写作？一、题型特点概要写作的阅读材料词数一般为300左右。写作要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇约60词的内容概要。概要所用语句既要用词二、注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下不得超过10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三

19、人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。 准确，结构合理，语义连贯，不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。 典例示范阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Weve reached a strangesome would say unusualpoint. While fighting world hunger continues to be the matter of vital importance according to a recent report from the World Health Organization(WHO)

20、, more people now die from being overweight than from being underweight. Its the good life thats more likely to kill us these days.We really dont have many excuses for our weight problems. The dangers of the problem have been drilled into us by public-health campaigns since 2001 and the message is g

21、etting throughup to a point. Worse，nearly 18 million children under the age of five around the world are estimated to be overweight. In the 1970s, Finland, for example, had the highest rate of heart disease in the world and being overweight was its main cause. Not any more. A public-health campaign

22、has greatly reduced the number of heart disease deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland taking diet pills doubled between 2001 and 2005, and doctors even offer surgery of removing fat inside and change the shape of the body. No won

23、der it ranks as the worlds most body-conscious country.We know what we should be doing to lose weightbut actually doing it is another matter. By far the most popular excuse is not taking enough exercise. More than half of us admit we lack willpower. Others blame good food. They say: its just too inv

24、iting and it makes them overeat. Some also blame their parentstheir genes. But unfortunately, the parents are wronged because theyre normal in shape, or rather slim.Its a similar story around the world, although people are relatively unlikely to have tried to lose weight. Parents are eager to see th

25、eir kids shape up. Do as I saynot as I do.解题思路第一步：定位Part 1：1.More people now _ than from being underweight.2.Its the _ thats more likely to _ these days.Part 2：3.The _ of the problem have been drilled into us by _.die from being overweight good lifekill uspublic-health campaigns since 2001 dangersPa

26、rt 3：5.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland _ doubled between 2001 and 2005.6.We know _but actually doing it is another matter.Part 4：7.Others _ good food.8.Its a similar story around the world, although people are relatively _. taking diet pillswhat we should be doing to lose

27、 weight blameunlikely to have tried to lose weight4.In Finland，a public-health campaign has greatly _ the number of _ deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades. reducedheart disease第二步：改写1.要点1和2合并：Good life is more likely to kill us and more people now die from being overweight.改写： Good life

28、becomes _ and more people now die from being overweight.the killer of our health 第二步：改写2.要点3和4合并：People have gradually realized the dangers of being overweight through public-health campaigns since 2001 and the number of heart disease deaths has been greatly reduced in Finland.改写：Since 2001 people have gradually _ the dangers of being overweight through public-health cam