高一英语概要写作材料选编

1、高一英语故事续写训练（1）Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water c

2、ould open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry

3、IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit （好处）of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the

4、18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to

5、 be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the cont

6、rary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist （免疫学家）, encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter （后者）position is gaining some ground.One possible versionPeople have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.（要,点 1 ） For a long time in history, people of s

7、ome European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.（ 要,点 2 ） However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.（要点 3） However, some scientists believe that ex

8、posure to some dirt may help our immune system.倭点 4）【范文点拨】（一）要点分析1 .文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点： However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.换句话说： Different people have different attitudes towards dirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知 Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin.范文中的要点 1 &

9、quot;People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. ” 概括非常精炼。2 .第二段主要谈到了在 16世纪，人们认为dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease,尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since 18 century可知，直到18世纪之前

10、，人们都认为dirt是很“友 好的”，有助于预防疾病。范文中的要点 2 "For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting川.”很好地总结了这些要点。3 .第三段用 Though引出人们对 dirt观点的转变“since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health.再

11、结合本段最后部分 Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea可得出要,点 3 "However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.4 .文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同，On the contrary引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt有助于增强免疫系统。这一观点获得了

12、一些支持。范文中的要点 4 "However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. 表达彳艮恰切。（二）要点连接文章概要，在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接 词进行连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。本篇文章整篇结构是总分的结构，要点 2和要点3在观点上截然相反，因此，之间需要表示转折的连接词，范文用了 However恰到好处。要点3和要点4在观点上又存在不同，因此，还是用表转折 的连接词However。不过小编认为，此处用 Neverthele

13、ss可以避免三句话内出现 两次 Howevero（三）关键词汇第一段：fixed （确定的；不变的）第二段：means （手段，方法），block out （挡 住），open up仔丁开），upon （之后；立即）第三段：long-lived （长期存在的）,sellthe idea （说服某人接收某个观点 ）第四段：warn off （警告某人不要靠近）, position （观点）,gain some ground 蚀得优势）以上这些关键词对于整篇文章的理解与转化成自己的语言都很关键，如果不能准确领会其用意，语篇理解的效果会大打折扣。所以，概要写作的基础是理解语篇， 而读懂语篇的基础是词

14、汇，尤其是对关键词汇的掌握与运用。在此基础上，综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，形成概要。读后续写训练六篇：一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was 川 and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbagesand carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard t

15、hat afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he

16、 found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours “Yes, sir. the farmer answered timi

17、dly （胆怯地）.“Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir." the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead maH' "About seven last evening. “Did you see whokilled the man”“No, sir." The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have youseen it yet” “No, sir：' The officer became an

18、gry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession怏认），but the farmer didn' t admit he was the murderer.注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The offic

19、er was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.The farmer was lucky .A few days later,参考范文：Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didn'

20、 t, he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police o

21、fficer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.After the investigation, the young man was

22、right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers二、读后续写（25分）I was responding to a call from a small brick flat in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-

23、goers , or someone who had just had a fight with a lover, or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.When I arrived at 2： 30 a.m., the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances, many drivers just honk （按喇

24、 叭） once or twice, wait a minute , then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.Unless a situation smelled of danger I always went to the door.This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance, I reasoned to myself. So I walke

25、d to the door and knocked. “Just a minute, " answered a frail, elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause, the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat , like somebody out of a 1940s movi

26、e. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls, no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.“Would you carry my ba

27、g out to the car? ” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab, then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm , and we walked slowly toward the cab.She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother tre

28、ated'" 注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown? ”Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it参考范文：Paragraph 1

29、:Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown? ” Asked why we didH t take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me t

30、o slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice.Paragraph 2:we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building, where the old lady would live the r

31、est of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair.When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a

32、 bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.三、读后续写（25分）My fiance （未婚夫）and I were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds were limited, and none of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory.One agent recommended a house in particular. Although

33、her description sounded wonderful, the price was beyond our range, so we declined. But she kept urging us to have a look at least.We finally did and it was love at first sight. It was Our Home, small and charming, overlooking a quiet lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners, a nic

34、e elderly couple, we felt the warmth and happiness of the marriage within that home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But every day, we would sit by the lake, looking at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there.Days later, we made a（n） offelar below the

35、asking price. Surprisingly, they didn' tlaugh at us. They renewed their offer instead. It was also much more than we could afford, but far less than the original asking price.The next day, we got a disappointing message that another buyer had offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to t

36、alk with the owners directly. We made our final offer, which still was thousands of dollars less than the other buyer' s bid. We knew it, but we had to try. Nobody knew if we could get it.注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:

37、Paragraph 2:参考范文：Paragraph 1We went to the owners ' home after we made our final offer, the other buyer came to visit the owners, he said the price he offered was much higher than ours, he begged the owners to sell it to him, then the owner asked the buyer, “why do you want this house?” the buye

38、r said : because it is near the city, I want to buy it for investment. I can rent it to earn money " the owner thought for a while and then looked at him and said, I' m sorry, sir, I can' t sell my house to you, because I am looking for someone who truly loves my house, not just for mon

39、ey：' Paragraph 2:The owner looked at us and said, “I want to sell my house to you!” then he explained: He' d seen us sitting by the lake all those times; he knew how much we loved the place and that we' d appreciate the years of work they had put into their home; he realized he would tak

40、e a loss by selling it to us, but it was worthwhile; we were the people they wanted to live there. He told us to consider the difference in the price “an early wedding present." That' s how we found our home and how I learned that when people are kind they are not strangers, only friends we

41、 haven ' t yet met.四、读后续写（25分）A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin（顽童）was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir? he asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my broth

42、er gave it to me for Christmas. " The boy was surprised.“You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish” He hesitated（犹豫）,Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted, but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “I wish," the boy went on, “that I could

43、 be a brother like that." Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and then he said again： Would you like to take a ride in my car?“Oh yes, f d love to :' the boy answered.After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?”Jack

44、smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. "Will you stop where those two steps are? the boy asked.注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你

45、所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps.Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car.参考范文：Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled饯疾的）brot

46、her. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car.“There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn't cost him a cent. And some day I m going to give you one just like itthen you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas wi

47、ndows that I' ve been trying to tell you about” Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride., looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve ,Jack learne

48、d the real meaning of the words: "It' s more blessed to give than to receive. He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that. ”五、读后续写（25分）Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found

49、the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window.I walked to the door and knocked, "Just a minute," answered a weak, elderly voice. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.I took the suitcas

50、e to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car.She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her. "I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.""Oh, you're such a goo

51、d man." She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, "Could you drive through downtown?""It's not the shortest way," I answered quickly."Oh, I'm in no hurry," she said. "I'm on my way to a hospice （ 临终医院）.I don't

52、 have any family left. The doctor says I don't have very long."I quietly reached over and shut off the meter （计价器）.For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the neighborhood where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had o

53、nce been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl.Sometimes she'd ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing.At dawn, she suddenly said, "I'm tired. Let's go now." We drove in silence Lo the address she h

54、ad given me."How much do I owe you?" she asked."Nothing." I said."You have to make a living," she answered. "Oh, there are other passengers," I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked so sad.注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为二段，每段的

55、开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug.Paragraph 2I was on my way to visit her.参考范文：Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the woman left , I said to her, “ My mother treated everyone kindly, she i

56、s a great person, but she passed away years ago. you are like my mother," the woman said, “thank you. If you want to visit me, I' ll tell you my story." Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go home.Paragraph 2The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old w

57、oman told me that she used to be a millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular building we saw last night. But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of cancer. She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sa d At last, the old wo

58、man said to me, “ Life is short, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn money to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you, " I said nothing but nodded hard.六、读后续写（25分）Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station（力口油 站）about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register（收款台）,I said hello to an older co