北师大版高中英语选修6 Unit16 Comminication Workshop 精品课件

1、Unit 16 StoriesCommunication WorkshopBefore you startAsk yourself the following questions:How to attract the attention of the reader?How to show the order of events?How to share feelings with the reader?How to use vivid language to make the writing more interesting?Pre-writing1. Read the three draft

2、s of a students composition on the topic A Day When Everything Went Wrong. Decide which one is the most interesting.Draft A Draft B Draft CDraft C2. Read Draft C again and find out sentences to prove how the writer: attracts the attention of the reader. shows the order of events. shares feelings wit

3、h the reader. uses vivid language to make the writing more interesting. To attract the attention of the reader:May 24, 2005 will live in my mind forever.The day started to go wrong the instant I left home.This was a big mistake!But the trouble was only just beginning.The result? To show the order of

4、 events:After waiting for ages, I decided to walk. by the time I arrived at school.As I climbed up the stairs to the classroom, And so the day went on, until finally I Even then, as I got into bed To share feelings with the reader:The sun was already boiling hot and you can image how I felt by the t

5、ime I arrived at school.The more I looked down, the redder my face became. I felt tense and dizzy. until finally I climbed, tired and ashamed, into bed.Use vivid language to make the writing more interesting:As I climbed up the stairs to the classroom, I heard a booming voice behind me.I tried and f

6、ailed to practice during the lunch break.The more I looked down, the redder my face became.Water spilled all over my pillow.Writing Write about a memorable day or event in your life. 1. Introduction Write a few sentences to set the scene and introduce the characters.2. Beginning of the narrative Des

7、cribe the main action. Include some dialogues.3. Development of the narrativeWrite what happened next.4. ConclusionWrite a suitable ending to your storySpeaking : Telling a story Use the pictures to tell a story with your partner. If you think you have made a mistake but are not sure, dont worry. Co

8、ntinue speaking. If you know that you have made a very simple mistake, correct yourself.Speaking strategies: Dealing with mistakes If someone does not understand you, try to say it again using different words. Use these expressions: “I mean”, “what I mean is ”.The people:Who are the main characters?

9、What do they do?Where are they from?How old are they?What personalities have they got?Step 1The story:1.The beginning: Where did the story take place? What was happening at the start? What had happened before?2. The action: What happened? Step 24. The end: What happened in the end? How did the people feel?3. Development: How did the characters react? Where did they go?