高三英语教师公开课改错

1、英语高考专题复习英语高考专题复习短短 文文 改改 错错Warming upCorrect following words.In the other handBe responsible with sb/sthBe opposed for sthLarge quantity ofHave an effect in sbLose the heartMake a great progressThe accident was happenedIn hurryConvince sb sthAt sight ofA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as

2、possiblyonfortoquantitiesonthethea awaswas a oftheequipmentGenerallypossibleWhats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对。看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对。2. 看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。但无法改正。3. 知道改正句子错误的地方知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。但答案不正确。新版新版：假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌：假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

3、作文。文中共有写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上修改后的词。），并在其下面写上修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2.只允许修改只允许修改10处，多者（处，多者（从第从第11处起处起）不计分）不计分 并不

4、是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并非只有一处错误。非只有一处错误。Obey the rules of correctionI love camping .ItI love camping .Its my favourite way to spent the summer s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year,vacation. Last year,my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of my fami

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6、very day . We cook over a fire and the food tasted wonderfully. For a For a whole Week , I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. whole Week , I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I At night , I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It

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10、onderfully. For a whole Week , I saw lonely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I whole Week , I saw lonely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesheard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt

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12、代词代词介词介词近近5年高考短文改错考点年高考短文改错考点分布统计表分布统计表动动词词连连词词代代词词介介词词形容形容词词副词副词名名词词冠词冠词2015（全国卷）（全国卷） 31112112014 (全国卷）全国卷）31112112013 (全国卷）全国卷）3111121 合计合计9333543近近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表年高考短文改错考点分布统计表项目项目年份年份一、动词形一、动词形2008浙江卷浙江卷 Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends , while I c

13、hose to take a part-time job.2006安徽卷：安徽卷：Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. decidedwishes2006安徽卷：安徽卷： You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out. 2006天津卷：天津卷： Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitti

14、ng to a college. permittedadmitted语态：主要看句子的主语和谓语之间是主动还是被动语态：主要看句子的主语和谓语之间是主动还是被动关系，还要注意语态的构成形式、有些不能使用被动关系，还要注意语态的构成形式、有些不能使用被动语态的动词以及主动形式表被动的情况。语态的动词以及主动形式表被动的情况。2014全国卷全国卷II： My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of 2015浙江卷：浙江卷： In the morning, it was full of students exercisi

15、ng. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. looksis2015全国卷全国卷I： Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very 2015陕西卷：陕西卷： I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.to二、名词数二、名词数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误、的用法错误、a/an2006

16、浙江卷：浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.2008浙江卷：浙江卷：I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. envelopesknowledge 2006福建卷福建卷： If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 学生版：学生版：Most of the stud

17、ents in our class are now making rapid progresses 2006重庆卷：重庆卷： In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. progressskyinterest2015陕西：陕西：Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on.steps三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副 注意注意形容词和副词形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。法。这也是高考短文改

18、错题的常考点。2007浙江卷：浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 学生版：学生版：We should work hardly to achieve our udhard 2006湖北卷：湖北卷： A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. 2006辽宁卷：辽宁卷： She was usual patient with her students and never made

19、them disappointed. strongusually2015浙江：浙江： On the left hand side of the class, I can easy see the football field. 2015陕西卷：陕西卷： My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help.1 系动词后用形容词（如系动词后用形容词（如am/is/are/was/were/become/go/smell/feel）2 形容词修饰名词，副词修饰动词，形容词。形容词修饰名词，副词

20、修饰动词，形容词。easilybest四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现现在分词、过去分词，动名词在分词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误。错误。NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.2007宁夏卷：宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day. talkingto2008浙江卷：浙江卷： It is one of

21、 the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year.学生版：学生版： The big fire burned hundreds of houses, made hundreds of families homeless.makingfound 人称代词，物主代词的使用人称代词，物主代词的使用反身代词反身代词oneself 的使用的使用人称代词的主格和宾格人称代词的主格和宾格不定代词的使用不定代词的使用Both,all,either,neither,none的使用的使用.6. Whose 和和whos， its和和 its的

22、区别的区别五五、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟（ 2007全国全国I） I was only about six when he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.mine2007陕西：陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myself学生版：学生版：We must try ours best to overcome all difficulties to solve this particular problems.ourour 2015浙

23、江 Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. 2014陕西 jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.itNoneNone 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭多词、少词和搭配错误。配错误。 catch a sight of lose the heart in hurry

24、in Sunday afternoon express us such many peopleaonourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住六、习惯用法要记住 2007浙江卷：浙江卷：So I didnt lose my heart and kept running. 学生版：学生版：Because the help you gave me that summer, My life changed. 2006福建卷：福建卷： It is so a beautiful place! ofsuch七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同

25、的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. 2007天津卷：天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but whywho / that八、逻辑错误须关注八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴张冠李戴。20