四六级作文第二讲四六级作文中的常见错误

1、四级作文中的常见错误四级作文中的常见错误 5. 四级作文中的常见错误四级作文中的常见错误n5.1. 词层面词层面n5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当用词搭配不恰当However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded.In

2、recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased.In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. 5. 四级作文中的常见错误四级作文中的常见错误n5.1. 词层面词层面n5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当用词搭配不恰当1. However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.nHowever, the speed of a car is much higher than that

3、 of a bicycle.n说明：speed 只能和high, good, top, normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising 等搭配，不能与fast, quick, slow 搭配，但可以说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.2. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.nIn the past the price of milk was so high that mo

4、st families could not afford it.n说明：price只能和high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, reduced, reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive, cheap搭配，但可以说In the past, milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.3. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded.nNowadays, the

5、traffic in big city is getting heavier and heavier.4. In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased.nIn recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased.5. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%.nIn the past few years, the consump

6、tion/amount of grain has decreased by nearly 20%.n5.1.2. 修饰语不当修饰语不当He neither speaks English nor Chinese.Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.Having carried out economic r

7、eforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.1.To improve ones writing skill, regular practice is essential.n5.1.2. 修饰语不当修饰语不当He neither speaks English nor Chinese.nHe speaks neither English nor Chinese.Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other p

8、arts of the world immediately.nWithout television, people cannot immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.3. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.nWhen I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons.4. Having carried out economic

9、 reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved. Our government having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.nSince economic reforms have been carried out in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.5. To impr

10、ove ones writing skill, regular practice is essential.nTo improve ones writing skill, one must practice regularly.5.1.3. 把形容词和介词误作动词把形容词和介词误作动词nThis term well very busy.nThis term well be very busy.nThe cave like a room very much.nThe cave looked very much like a room.nI very like this novel.nI like

11、 this novel very much.5.1.4. 少用连词少用连词nI started to play table-tennis in middle school, still play it now.nI started to play table-tennis in middle school, and I still play it now.nTV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.nTV becomes an important part in ourda

12、ily life, because we cannot live without it.5.1.5. 指代不当指代不当nPeople have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.nPeople have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but this effort often proves useless.nTelevision provides us with a vivid,

13、colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.nBy providing us with a vivid, colorful world, television enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.n5.1.6. 一致方面的错误一致方面的错误nStudy hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.nStudy hard now so that you can

14、cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.nOne serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically.nOne serious problem human beings are faced with is how to use our natural resources economically.nNow fruit and vegetables can be seen ev

15、erywhere when it is in season.nNow fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season.n5.1.7. 词的误用词的误用nWith the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy.nWith the industrial development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy.nTV comm

16、ercials have a profound influence on our every day life.nTV commercials have a profound influence on our everyday life.nFirst we should use our natural resources in an economic way.nFirst we should use our natural resources in an economical way.5.2. 句子层面句子层面5.2.1. 中国式英语中国式英语nHave money can do many t

17、hings. 有钱可以做好多事情。nThere are many people do morning exercise in the park. 有很多人在公园里面晨练。nHis joke made me laugh to death.nI was quite amused by the joke he just told.nChinese people are devoting themselves to the physical exercise. Why? Because they think it is very important to their health.nMore and

18、more people are spending part of their free time on physical exercise because they realize the importance of regular physical exercise.nSmoking cigars will do harm to our body.nSmoking cigars will do harm to our health.nReading books can acquire knowledge.nThrough reading one can acquire knowledge.n

19、Now people go abroad is not easy.nIt is not easy for people to go abroad now.nNowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.nNowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.nThe chief reasons for the change have five points.nThere are five main reasons for the change.n

20、5.2.2. 句子结构不完整，不平衡句子结构不完整，不平衡nTV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.nTV becomes an important part in our daily life because we cannot live without it.nA park is a place where everyone can have a good time or just to be sitting around doing nothing.nA park

21、is a place where everyone can have a good time or just sit around doing nothing.n5.2.3. 悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语nWhile reading the paper last night, an article on solar energy attracted my attention.nWhile reading the paper, I became interested in an article on solar energy.n5.2.4. 主谓不一致主谓不一致n集合名词（army, audience,

22、 cabinet, class, company, committee, crew, crowd, family, government, group, party, population, public, staff, team等）作主语，如果指整体，则谓语动词用单数；如果指具体成员，则谓语动词用复数。n表示时间、距离、价格等的复数名词或短语，如果强调整体，谓语动词用单数；如果强调具体数量，则谓语动词用复数。单数名词如果跟着along with, as well as, besides, but, combined with, except, in addition to, rather t

23、han等时，谓语动词用单数。n但用eitheror, neithernor, not onlybut also, or等连接的名词作主语时，谓语动词需要与最近的那个主语保持一致。nTom is one of the students who does not take applied mathematics.nTom is one of the students who do not take applied mathematicsnSomeone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)nSome think that read

24、ing should be selective. (正).n5.2.5. 赘言问题赘言问题nIn my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.nIn my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.nIn general, young people in these days tend to remain single.nYoung people in these days tend to remain single.nThe reason

25、 why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution nor noise there.nThe reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution nor noise there.nWe must cooperate together to make our cities greener and cleaner.nWe must work together to make our cities g

26、reener and cleaner.n5.3 语篇层面语篇层面 偏离主题偏离主题 段落缺乏统一性段落缺乏统一性 缺少连贯性缺少连贯性n5.4. 语法方面语法方面 语态，比较级，非谓语形式，冠词用法，可数语态，比较级，非谓语形式，冠词用法，可数不可数名词，不定代词单复数，时态不可数名词，不定代词单复数，时态n5.5. 标点用法标点用法5.6. 拼写错误拼写错误nenvironment（环境，容易写成enviroment）ngovernment（政府，容易误拼成goverment）nmodern（现代的，容易拼成morden） respectable（受人尊敬的），respectful（尊敬别人

27、的），respective（各自的）neconomic（有关经济的），economical（节俭的）ndelighted（感到高兴的），delightful（使人高兴的）.nhistoric（有历史意义的），nhistorical（关于历史的）nconsiderate（关心别人的），nconsiderable（相当大的，相当多的）nsensible（合理的，可感知的），nsensitive（敏感的）ncredible（可信的），ncredulous（容易轻信的）ncontinual（持续的，中间有间隔），ncontinuous（持续的，中间没有间隔）nsatisfied（满意的），nsatis

28、factory（令人满意的）nfarther（更远，表示距离），nfurther（更进一步，表示程度）nimaginary（虚构的，想象中的），nimaginative（想象力丰富的），nimaginable（可以想象的）CET作文常见错误作文常见错误在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点；当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一，有时甚至是惟一的点；当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？如果下，一

29、篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将阅卷过程中所发现尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。1.句子成分残缺不全句子成分残缺不全We always working till late at night before

30、taking exams.(误误)We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正正)We should read books may be useful to us. (误误)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正正)2.句子成分多余句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误误)One test ends, but anot

31、her is waiting for you. (正正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误误)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正正)3.主谓不一致主谓不一致Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误误)Some think that reading should be selective. (正正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (

32、误误)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正正)4.动词时态、语态的误用动词时态、语态的误用I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正正)We have little time to read some books which we interest

33、. (误误)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误误)I have been studying in the college for two years(正正)5.词类混淆词类混淆It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误误)In my opinion, reading must be selective.

34、 (正正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (误误)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正正)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误误)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正正)6.名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (误误)Too

35、 many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正正)In the presidents office, we have found new equipments of various kinds. (误误)In the presidents office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正正)7.动词及物与不及物的误用动词及物与不及物的误用The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. (误误)

36、The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. (正正)Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. (误误)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正正)8.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking.

37、(误误)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正正)All these contributed to solve the serious problem. (误误)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正正)9.情态动词的误用情态动词的误用It may not good to our health. (误误)It may be not good to our health. (正正)They

38、should spent much time. (误误)They should spend much time. (正正)10. There be句型的误用句型的误用There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. (误误)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误误)There are many students w

39、ho think college education is worthwhile. (正正)11. 动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. (误误)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正正)It also may help you to make success. (误误)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正正)12. 根据中文逐字硬译根据中文

40、逐字硬译 If someones family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (误误)If ones family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health. (误误)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit.(正正

41、) 如何用简单句表达复杂思想如何用简单句表达复杂思想 n大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。 nIt is impossible for sb. to do sth. nIt is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找找到高薪的工作到高薪的工作.ncollege students who have just graduated nto find jobs which can give them a lot of money。 nIt is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which