建议信、求助信、投诉信写作指导及模板

1、结构写信的原因表示欢迎表述建议理由提出建议有说服力补充建议提出建议建议理由祝愿建议信(Letterofsuggestion)一、简介(1)建议信写作注意事项写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。(2)写作方法首段：a.简介自己，不要罗嗦；b.说明目的，注意语气。主体：a.提出具体建议；b.首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；c.经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文,因为内容与议论文相似。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。(3)写作流程图第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：(1) AfterIreadyourletterinthen

2、ewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat(2) Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto-(3)Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter(4)Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.(5)来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议IhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyouplantohaveavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Irecommendthat(6)写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议一

3、一建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。IamwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoestablishawebsiteofourowntoattractmoreclients.(7)Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto.andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestions你来信询问我关于.的意见，我会尽量提出一些有用的建议。第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议套语：我建议(1)Idliketosuggestthat(2)MayIsuggest

4、that(3)Inmyopinion(4)Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat(5)Iamwritingtoadviseyouof(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould(7)Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.(8)Youmayconsiderdoing-第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复套语：(1)请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.(2)我希望你会觉得这些意见提议建议是有帮助的实际的有用的.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggesti

5、onsproposalsrecommendationshelpfulpracticaluseful.(3) Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(4) Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.(5) Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.(6) Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.(7) .Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadvicein

6、toaccount/consideration.建议信模板(一)Dear,Iamverytoknowthat I'mlookingforwardto. I'mafraidthat I'dliketosuggestthatfirstthen_. Ibelievethiskindofarrangementwill Moreover,if, Itisnecessaryforyouto. Withyouwill. Wish建议信模板(Dear,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout问题）,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesug

7、gestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.First,itisImportantto建议一.Asyouwill建议的理由。Then,italsohelpsifyou建议二。Because®议二白理由.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideat0议三。Iamsurethat建议三的理由。Ihopeyou'llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytoDiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails

8、.Goodluckwithyour舰愿）.Yourssincerely,三、示例Writing（30minutes）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringthesummerholidayforaweek.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbelo

9、winChinese.1、表示欢迎。2、提出对度假安排的建议。3、祝愿ALettertoaSchoolmateJune23rd,2001DearXiaoWang,IamverygladtoknowthatyouaresooncomingtoBeijingtojoinmeinthesummerholiday.第一段表示欢迎I'mlookingforwardtcyourarrival.IfyoucanstayinBeijingonlyforaweek,表明建议的原因Iamafraidthatyouwillhaveatightschedule语气亲切，符合说话人身份forvisitingan

10、umberofplacesofhistoricinterestI'dliketosuggestthatyou_firstvisitsomefamous叙述词和副词placesthatyouhavethegreatestinterestinsuchas一目了然thePalaceMuseum,theSummerPlace颐和园），theGreatWall;thenyoucanvisitthoseplacesyouthinklessthen使文章结构important.Ibelievethiskindofarrangementwillmakeyouhaveenoughtimetoapprec

11、iate（欣赏）具有说服力whatyoureallywanttosee.Moreoverifyoureallywanttobeagoodtraveler,ItisnecessaryforyoutreadsomebooksabouttheseplacesbeforeyoucometoseethemwithyourowneyesWithmoreknowledgeabouttheseplacesyouwillhaveabetterunderstandingofChinesehistoryandculture.IameagertomeetyousooninBeijing.Wishyouinadvanc

12、eapleasanttriptoBeijing.文体要求使自己的安排建议有理有据表达良好的祝愿，符合Bestwishes!Yoursever练笔：建议信（1）-阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingt

13、heproblemsofthecanteen.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaiti

14、ngissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasImconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,itssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,

15、it'sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!1. deliciouswaitingtaste（n.味道）tasty（adj.可口的）cook（n.厨师）cooker（n.炊具）price价格2. lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3. atalower/reasonableprice以较彳氐的价格4. varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5. Foronething,Foranother,6. m

16、akesb（not）dosth7. wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8. Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9. Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan'taffordthem.10. Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan'tsatisfyourneeds.11. Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourti

17、meofrestatnoon.12. Thefoodinthecanteendoesn'ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn'tgood.13. Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14. It'sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15. Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.

18、Inthelongrun,it'sbadforourhealthandstudy.17. Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18. Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19. Ithinkit'snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20. It'shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit's

19、hightimeforustotakemeasures21. Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure（形象）andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents'needs.22. Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23. Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn'twaitsolong.24. Asfar

20、asI'mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What'smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25. Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.高考书面表达之求助信应该遵照英文书信的格式，表达出自己希望得到的急切心理和诚意。1、 求助信的文章框架：（自我介绍）1.直言目的2.描述困难3次达希望得到的帮助（联系方式）2、 常用句式1 .求助信开头的表达句式：1.1 'm

21、writingtaskfor/getsomehelp.whetheryoucangivemehelp.2. I'msorrythatIhavetoaskafavorofyou,withthehopethatyouwillbekindtohelpme.3. SorrytobotheryoubutIreallygetsomeproblemsrecently.4. Imakeboldtowritethislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor.2 .描述困难的经典句式1. ButIhavemetsomedifficutieswith/in2. Butunfortunately,

22、I'mencounteringdifficultyin3. Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.4. Ifacethechoicebetweenand5. It'sreallyhardformetodecide/dealwith6. Ineedyourhelpbecause3 .表达希望得到帮助的句型1. Expectingyourwritingbacksoon.2. Lookingforwardto/Hopingforyourearlyreply.3. Yourkindearlyreplywill

23、behighlyappreciated.4. Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreicateitifyoucouldhelpme.5. IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.5.1 amsurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.7. Canyoumanagetogivemesomeconstructiveguidance?8. Isincerelyhopetogetyourtimelyreply.4 .过渡性词汇歹

24、U举困难时;first,besides,also,what'more,atthesametime,inthemeanwhile,inaddition,.请求系歹U帮助so,thus,however,but,inorderthat,sothat5 .情感词汇假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助。现在你给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：1 .学习英语时遇到的问题生词多，记忆有难度2 .课文长，背诵不可能sorry,bother,beg,wouldyoulike-unfortunately,unluckily,especially,sincerel

25、y,badly,3.语法难，理解有障碍hopefully,4.向英语老师提出帮助Dear,注意：1.词数100120;2.可适当增加细节Mynameis.I'm.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyin.First.What'sworse/Worsestill,.What'sworst,.Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.Wouldyouliketosothat/inorderthat?Inthemeanwhile/Meanwhile,.Also,Iwouldlikeyoutoto.

26、I'msurethatIcanwithyourhelp./Iwillbemuchappreciatedifyouhelpmeto.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,(2011课标卷)假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCentei)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介2.求助内容3.约定时间4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua;Phone:12345678)注意：1.词数100左右。人称：第一人称；第二人称时态：一般现在；一般将来思维发散部分：求助内容：具体困难1具体困难

27、2;.写信对象；辅导中心教师DearSir/Madam,I'mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity/1mwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-makingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterProvideshelpforstudentsand1manxioustoget

28、helpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.Pleaseletmeknowwhichdayisokwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua;12345678.Lookforwardtoyourreply.yours,LihuaDearteacher,MynameisLihua.I'mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyinlearn

29、ingEnglish.First,Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.Besides,thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.Whatsmore,grammarisalsoverydifficulttolearn.Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketointroducetoussomegoodwaystolearnnewwordssothatwecanrememberthemmoreeasi

30、ly?Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyoutoteachthetextmoreslowlysothattheaveragestudentscaneasilyfollowyou.Also,Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomerulesandgoodwaystolearngrammar.I'msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudywithyourhelp.YoursSincerely,高考书面表达之投诉信投诉信(lettersofcomplaint)通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部

31、门，揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕，抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等，以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚，态度要冷静，做到有礼貌，不能恶言伤人。【篇首句】介绍自己，说明写作目的：投诉。1. I'mLiHua.IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutI'mafraidthatIhasiintcaboakeacompyourrestaurant.我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。2. I'mwritingtoyoutocomplainabout.我写信是投诉.3. Iwanttoexpressmydissatisfacti

32、onaboutthewoolenscarfIboughtfromyourcompany.我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。Practise：【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。1. Inthefirstplace,thefoodistoosaltyandthewaterisn'tservedintime.Inaddition,themusicyoubroadcastistoonoisy.Underthesecircumstances,Ifindithardtositherehavingdinnerquietly.首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。而且，你们播放的音乐

33、太吵了。在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。2. WhileIwasonholidayinHongKongaboutaweekago,Iboughtagreenshirtfor300HKdollarsinyourshop,butthereseemstobesomethingwrongwithit.Whenit'swashed,itfadesincolour.NowIcan'twearit.大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。3. Itarrivedontimetheda

34、ybeforeyesterday.ButwhenIcheckedit,Ifoundaholeinthemiddle.IwasastonishedbecausetheholewasobviousandIdidn'tthinkyoushouldneglectthisdeficiency（缺陷）.它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。4. Ihavedialedyourservicenumberforseveraltimesbutitwasalwaysbusy.我多次拨打你们的服务电话，但它总是占线。5. Nowthis

35、problemkeepsworryingme.现在这个问题一直在困扰我。6. Toimprovethesituation,youcantakethefollowingmeasures.为了改善状况，你们可以采取下面的措施。7. Canyouchangeanewoneformeassoonaspossible?你们可以尽快给我换件新的吗？8. Iinsistyouchangeanewoneformeorgivemearefund退款）.我坚持你们给我换件新的或者给我退款。9. HowshallIsendthisscarfbacktoyou?我怎么把这条围巾寄还给你？【篇尾句】希望给予考虑，并期待

36、对方尽快回复。1. Thanksforyourconsideration.感谢你的考虑。2. Ihopeyouwillgivedueattentiontothismatter.我希望你给予此事应有的重视。3. Ibelieveyouwilltakemycomplaintseriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的投诉。4. I'llappreciateitifmydemandismet.如果我的要求被满足，我会非常感激。5. I'lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.期待着你早日答复。投诉信模板Dear,Iam（自我介绍）.Ifeelbadtotroubl

37、eyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout.Thereasonformydissatisfactionis（总体介绍）.Inthefirstplace,施怨的第一个方面）.Inaddition,（抱怨的第二个方面）.Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit感觉）（抱怨的方面给彳带来的后果）.Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucould（提出建议和请求）,preferably（4一步的要求）,andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby（设定解决事情最后期BM）.Thanky

38、ouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.YourssincerelyLiMing学校受污染【内容提示】假如你是市一中的学生，名叫王红。你要向本市一家报刊编辑（editor）写封信，反映你校受污染的问题，呼吁有关部门采取措施，保护环境，防止污染。请你用下面的素材写100词左右的一封信。你校位于山脚下，一条小河从旁边流过，院内树木四季常青，鲜花争艳，景色美似花园。但两年前，附近建起一家化工厂，排出大量污水、废气，造成校园污染，严重影响了师生健康。请有关部门出面解决这一问题。【作文示范】SchoolPollutedNo.1MiddleSchoolMarch5,1997DearEditor,Ourschoolliesatthefootofamountainwithasmallriverpassingby.Itusedtolooklikeabeautifulgarden.Thereusedtobegreentreesandallkindsofflowersinourschoolyardallyearround.Butgreatchangeshavetakenplacesinceachemicalworkswasbuiltnearourschool