2020年江苏省徐州市中考英语总复习专题练习-书面表达

1、2020 年徐州市中考英语总复习专题练习-书面表达书面表达的概念英语书面表达， 就是以书面形式传递信息。初中阶段主要通过写小故事、看图写话、 写引己、书信等，考查学生用英语进行表达的能力。书面表达是一种指导性写作(Guided writing) ，它有一个“提示” ，提供了控制的诸方面，包括时间、词数、要点(目的、对象、时间、地点、内容 )、体裁、题材 (书信、日记、通知)、情景形式 (图画、图表、提纲、短文)等。简单地说：书面表达就是用英语把日常范围内的事情写出来，让以英语为母语的外国人能看懂。书面表达既考查学生基础语法知识和语言知识的运用，又考查考生审题和布局谋篇、组织成文的能力， 传递信

2、息，交流思想。这是一种综合性很强的题型，考生需要掌握下述七种技能：(1) 英语书面语的书写技能 (包括拼写、标点，等等 )； (2) 准确的审题技能； (3)指导性写作的用词技能； (4) 在特定题材下、特定时间内的书写速度；(5) 运用语法来表达意义的技能；(6) 语篇的整合技能； (7)交际技能。答题技巧1体例得当，要点齐全。在动手写之前，先认真审题，明确所写要点，从表现主题的需要出发，精心组织材料。认真审题，必须从三方面人手：审文体(弄清写何种体裁的文章)，审要求 (内容、要求、时间、环境 )，审人称 (要求用何种人称，是第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称)。，一般来说， 书面表达的顺序是：

3、 写提纲一打草稿一连句成文。 文章写完之后， 再回头对照提示及要求，仔细核对，确保没有遗漏要点。2表达准确，条理清楚。平时应重视句型、习惯用语的积累，掌握一定量的单词和习惯用语，而不是考前突击背和记。 力求正确使用词语，使用地道现成的英语句型和自己熟悉而且又有把握的句子，不造没有根据的和中式句型，更不能采用在中文句型中使用英语单词的做法。有的考生易受母语影响，写出中式的英语句子。例如：应根据内容要求，通过确定句子的主语和谓语的形式来连词成句。一个句子一个中心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。然后对分散的句子按一定的顺序(如时间和空间)进行加工整理。3词数适中，书写规范。注意用词的准确性。 考生可以选择自己

4、最有把握的表达方式， 做到语言规范。 尽量使语句过渡自然，整个语篇浑然一体。注意把握好时间。 因为书面表达一般在试卷的最后， 所以有的考生没有留足时间， 导致仓促应战，造成要点不全、开头不好、表述不清、没有结尾或卷面潦草等问题。考试时间是有限的，因此不能边写边想边改或写写停停，而是应该一气呵成。一般说来，可按照下列步1骤进行： 一审试题， 二圈要点， 三注短词， 四定基调， 五写全文， 六改病句。 还要注意词数，书面表达对词数都有一定的要求，过多或过少都会影响成绩。在进行大量扎实的基础训练的基础上，还应该进行系统的专题训练，即按照不同的体裁进行专门训练，从而掌握表达技巧。针对性练习书面表达1

5、Millie是这样支配她的零花钱的(见下表 )。请写一篇90 词左右的短文进行简要说明，可适当发挥。短文的开头已给出，不计人总词数。I m Millie .i d like to tell you a few things about how I spend my pocket money_2最近学校进行了主题为“说出你的烦恼”的调查。请你用英语写一篇短文，内容包括调查结果 (如图所示 )、对老师和父母的建议。注意： (1)词数： 90 个左右。 (2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Our school has made a survey “Dontkeep your worries ”.

6、 Here are the results._23王平现在美国上学。 今天他将外出一天。 请你以王平的名义给房东 MrsBlack 写一张留言条，要点如下：注意：(1) 词数 90 左右。留言条已给出的部分(见答题卡 )不计人总词数。(2) 不要逐字翻译。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。(3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dear Mrs Black,I am having a day out today._Early this morning,_Wang Ping4随着网络的发展，人们消费观念发生了转变，购物方式也在悄然变化，“网购”成为一种时尚。请你根据下表的提示写一篇短文。要求： (1)要点

7、要全；(2) 词数： 90 左右。开头部分已经给出，不计人总词汇；(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online._3_5假如你是张亮，近期你将和家人一起休假三个星期，你给旅行社写了一封邮件，请旅行社就出行路线、交通方式等提出建议，帮助设计出行攻略。内容如下：(1) 目的地可远可近，但要精彩。(2) 热爱户外活动，尤其喜欢徒步和游泳。(3) 住宿条件好，宾馆、公寓都行，最好带厨房、可以自己做饭。注意：(1) 词数： 90 左右。(2)电子邮

8、件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。Dear Travel Agent,My family and I want to take a trip this summer somewhere in eastern China. I hope you can provide me with some information about the kinds of vacations that your firm can offer._Thank you very much!Zhang Liang6假如你是 Lucy ，想应聘校报英文版的记者 (English reponer) 。请根据招聘要求写一封

9、应聘信，说明你能胜任此职的理由。4注意：(1) 内容须包括表中要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；条理清楚、语句连贯；(2) 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名；(3) 词数 90 左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。Dear Sir,My name is Lucy.I am writing to recommend myself as your English reporter._Yours faithfully,Lucy7初中三年来，你在兴趣爱好、外貌、性格特点等方面有哪些变化?请写一篇90 左右的短文进行简要介绍。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Time flies! I'

10、ve been in middle school for three years now._I'm not what I used to be.And what will I be like in the future?8星期一下午你所在学校全体初三学生参加了英语词汇竞赛，你获得了第一名，当天进行了颁奖仪式。请你根据以下提示写一则日记介绍词汇竞赛的情况，并谈谈你对竞赛的感想。提示：(1)比赛时间：星期一；地点：学校大礼堂。(2)比赛以考试形式举行，大家认真答题；老师们认真批阅。(3)十人获奖校长颁奖。(4)你的感想：丰富学生的校园生活.注意：(1)词数： 90 词左右。(2)日记的格式

11、和开头已经给出，不计入总词数：5March 31st, 2020, TuesdayFineOn Monday afternoon an English vocabulary contest was held in our school hall._9 Simon 是一名中学生。以前他经常生病，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，写一篇90 词左右的短文。注意：(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；(2) 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Sport Makes A DifferenceSimon is a middle school student_610你是李华，

12、 寒假期间参加了居委会组织的社区服务活动。请你按照图片内容顷序，以“CommunityService”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。注意：(1) 短文开头、结尾已写好。(2)词数： 90 左右。(3)参考词汇： sports facilities 一体育设施billboard 一广告牌Community ServiceDuring the winter vacation, the students in our community joined in the meaningful activity.All of us tried our best for our communit

13、y._Having done all these, we saw a more pleasant community. Though we were tired, we felt happy as all of our work was done.7书面表达答案1I'm Milllie. I'd like to tellyou a few things about how I spend my pocket money.I'm afood lover. Chinese food is my favourite. I spend a lot of money on foo

14、d and drinks every month,maybe one third of the money I get from my parents.That's because I eat a lot of snacks. I alsolove books, especially comic books. I also buy some books which help me with my studies. Ispend about 20 percent of my money on books. For entertainment, I'd say about one

15、third. I playgames, and go to karaoke with my friends sometimes. I save up the rest in a bank.2Our school has made a survey- "Don't keep your worries".Here are the results. About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework.They have too much homework to

16、 do every day and they feel stressed. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them in their studies.It's dlfficult for them to get along well with theirparents. The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health. They complain that they have no time

17、 for their hobbies or after school activities.I think students should have more communications with their teacliers and parents.3Think Before You Search OnlineSome students now have a new use for the Internet-helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.Some s

18、tudents agree with it. They sometimes don't know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it's easy and it saves time.However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the an

19、swers won't improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.4With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has

20、become a fashion in our daily life.Shopping online bas many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you're interested in without going out.You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more

21、 varieties of goods, whose prices are generally low.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. For example, it's very easy for you to buy goods different from pictures you see on the Internet. Also, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that they don't need at all.

22、 That's a waste of money.5Dear Travel Agent,My family and I want to take a trip this summer somewhere in eastern China. I hope you can provide me with some in formation about the kinds of vacations that your firm can offer.We would like to travel to an exciting place and don't mind how far w

23、e have to go. It has to be a place where we can do lots of outdoor activities; we especially love hiking and swimming, but any kind of outdoor activity is fine. We also need to stay in a good hotel or apartment. It would8be nice if we could get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking

24、 our own meals. The room needs to be big enough for three people. Also, would you give me some suggestions for vacation sports? Also, please let us know if it's best to travel By plane, train or bus. We'd like to be away for about three weeks.Thank you very much!Zhang Liang6Dear Sir or Madam

25、,I'm a Grade Nine student from Xuzhou. I'm glad to learn that you want a few par?time English reporters. I'm quilt interested in it.I think I'm fit for the job. As a student, I've read a lot and have much knowledge in manyfields. I'm fond of English and do well in beth speaki

26、ng and writing. Besides. I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school hroadcasting stations. So I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I'm looking forwardto your reply.Yours faitbfully,Daniel7Time fl

27、ies!I've been in middle school for three years now. Great changes have taken placein me.As for my personality, I used to get angry easily, but now I am able to control my temper.I know it's important to be polite and helpful. And my appearance has changed a lot. I used to be very small and m

28、y eyesight was good. But now I have grown into a tall boy and l am near-sighted, so l wear glasses. At weekends, I used to play computer games. But now adays, I usually go out and play ball games. It's good for my health.I am not what I used to be. And what will I be like in the future?8March31s

29、t,2020TuesdayFineOn Monday afternoon an English vocabulary contest was held in our school hall, All Junior 3 students entered for the contest. We were asked to work out a test paper on English words and all of us worked carefully. After that, the teachers marked our papers. When news came that I won

30、 the first place, I could not believe my ears as there were only ten winners. This afternoon the awards ceremony was given and our headmaster presented the prlzes to us.I suggest we should have more competitions like this. On one hand, it can enrich our school life. On the other hand, we will become

31、 more interested in English study through such activities.9My Favourite Place at SchoolMy favourite place at school is the playground, I have so many sweet memories there! The school playground is very big. During breaks and after school I love going there toenjoy myself. I hate sitting at classroom all day long. I need to get relaxed and the playground isthe ideal place for me. I often play ball games after school. Sometimes I chat with