2017-2018浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

1、2016.9浙江高考：OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom."I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.W

2、ithnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobileph

3、oneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty

4、.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefully

5、alongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：

6、3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.2017.6Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepa

7、ir,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled（骑行）alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim."Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Buwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawi

8、nstantlythatitwasn'tadogwPlalqibickfycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'

9、;sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetear

10、ingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalar

11、gevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.Paragraph2Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.201711.浙江高考Avacat

12、ionwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingto

13、thosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallof|ourfriends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?hleinaolyentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelyd

14、roveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler'scMookshadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:"YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI'llstandoutsicdoorandplaylookoutwh

15、ileyougo."Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,wherearekids?”WWhat?!Oh,GoshIthoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet."Wewereneveractuallylebehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Moms

16、uddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindaho-keekirithalikelybackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasasnic

17、eassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.20186Itwassummer,andmydadwant

18、edtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'friend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknow

19、hissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaul

20、totakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridbymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytow

21、ardsthemountains."Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudongetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtoc

22、reateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织白blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.参考范文一：Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopters

23、cameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment（时间）,shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn'sofrightened（情感）.Sheremindedherselfconstantly,（心理）-Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe（情感）hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon（动作）!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow."Shefelt

24、asleep作）anddreamedofseeingTom（动作）.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen（时间）walkedalongthestream,hoping（心、理）tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly（时间）,shespotted（动作）ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged（动作）toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpati

25、ence.Themoment（时间）thehelicopterappeared（动作）again.Theneareritgot（动作）,themoreshewaved（动作）theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,（情感）thehelicopterdidn'tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpeoffthehelicopterandrushed（动作）towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly（情感）andburstintotears（情感）.参考范文二：T

26、hecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.Paullookedou

27、tthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac'sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.aIthoughtIwasgoingtodie,criedto'thMacMacretrieved（取回）hisbicycle,andthethreemenresumed（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtoke

28、epinoneanother'ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandburstintotears."Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”参考范文三：Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.DavidandIlookedatDad,hoping

29、hecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandsetupourtentbeforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiringourstunningtent."Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconcDespitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.Para1

30、:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom'sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum.Toou

31、rrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents'placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.范文四：Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesu

32、ddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappeared