高三英语写作公开课

1、书面表达书面表达How to make your writing more effective？By Janet字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。 samples of student work字迹潦草难以辨认字迹潦草难以辨认 read and writefind it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads had taken place in my hometownbuildingswidenedIt will be wonderful when you come to China if you are

2、 freeshow you aroundI will be glad to语言不地道语言不地道; ;中文式思维中文式思维; ;语言错误较多语言错误较多samples of student workA good compositionContent structurelanguage What is a good writing？ Content: cover the key points (内容要完整内容要完整) everything must be to the point(切题切题) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)*

3、 Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误没有语法错误)* appropriate vocabulary and expressions(得体的词汇得体的词汇和表达和表达) good sentence patterns（句式）（句式） 1. Our school is at the foot of Huangyang Mountain.2.Our school is very

4、 good.Our school is situated/located at the foot of Huangyang Mountain. Our school is well-equipped / is equipped with advanced teaching facilities. I. 使用得体的词汇或短语使用得体的词汇或短语3.Our winter vacation is coming. Our winter vacation is approaching / drawing near.approach / draw near4. We are very happy duri

5、ng winter holidays. We have a lot of fun during winter holidays. 5. Everyone should do his homework. Everyone is supposed to do his homework. 6. We all think Miss liu is a great teacher. （评（评 价很高）价很高） We all think highly of her .Lets appreciate some sentences.II. 丰富的句式：丰富的句式：1.Only in this way can w

6、e learn English well.2. With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying.3. Located at the southwest corner of our school, the garden covers an area of 1000 square metres.4. It was not until she took off her glasses that her father recognize her.5.In China, our winter holidays last about 20 days, d

7、uring which time we celebrate the biggest festival -the Spring festival.倒装句倒装句with复合结构复合结构非谓语动词短语非谓语动词短语强调句强调句定语从句定语从句Lets imitate the sentences. I realized Janet was a nice teacher only after I left school We can live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings only in this way. 一、一、only倒装句倒装句 W

8、e can expect our hometown take on a new look only with combined efforts.Only with combined efforts, can we expect our hometown take on a new look.Only after I left school did I realize Janet was a nice teacher.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.二、强调句二、强调句It i

9、s/was +被强调部分被强调部分+ that/ who+其他其他.The lack of environmental awareness causes such behavior.It is the lack of environmental awareness that causes such behavior.I didnt know Wangkai until I saw Disguiser .It was not until I saw Disguiser that I knew Wangkai .1.The thief was taken away by the police. H

10、is hands were tied. (with +宾语宾语+分词）分词）2. The woman is beautiful and tears are running on her cheeks. (with +宾语宾语+分词）分词）The thief was taken away by the police, with his hands tied.The woman is beautiful, with tears running on her cheeks.三、三、with复合结构复合结构 有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。 With so many people helping you

11、, you neednt worry. 随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的压力压力。 With the college entrance examination drawing near, some students choose to tear their books into pieces in order to reduce stress and pressure from their learning. 由于我的耳机坏了，由于我的耳机坏了， 我不能做听力练习。我不能做听力练习。 With my earphone broken, I

12、cant do the listening exercises.1.Two people are walking on the grass and totally ignore the notice which says, “keep off the grass”.2.Chenjiale walked out of the classroom and many girls followed her. 四、非谓语动词四、非谓语动词Two people are walking on the grass totally ignoring the notice which says, “keep of

13、f the grass”.Chenjiale walked out of the classroom, followed by many girls.The kids were invited to the party and they were very excited.When I walked through the park, I saw many beautiful flowers.Invited to the party, the kids were very excited.Walking through the park, I saw many beautiful flower

14、s.我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学 （a key university）。）。My dream is that I can enter a key university.我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。That I can enter a key university is my dream.I have a dream that I can enter a key university.我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。I alw

15、ays dream that I can enter a key university.五、名词性从句五、名词性从句2. 2. 他建议我努力学习。他建议我努力学习。1.He suggested that I should study hard. 宾语从句宾语从句2. It is suggested to me that I should study hard. 主语从句主语从句3. He gave me a suggestion that I should study hard. 同位语从句同位语从句4. What he suggested to me is that I should stu

16、dy hard. 主语从句主语从句 +表语从句表语从句Lets conclude.InversionEmphatic sentenceNon-predicate verbWith composite structure Noun clauses As a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However Use proper linking wordsDear Editor,As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your ho

17、use. These books have many advantages._ one of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history.These topics, I think, are very popular with us students.To begin with In my opinion; Therefore; However; whats more_, along with the texts there are many beautiful and c

18、olorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. _, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. _, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.whats

19、 moreHoweverThereforeGood afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration

20、and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is

21、the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!A.the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. SecondlyABCDEF 技技 巧巧1. 使用得体的词汇使用得体的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是

22、衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式Lets polish the following paragraph. Last Sunday, a big fire broke out in a building near my home. The peopl

23、e were rescued when the firemen arrived. The firemen depended on their professional knowledge and quickly prevented the fire from spreading. Finally, the fire was put out, people were all in relief. It was last Sunday that a big fire broke out in a building near my home. Only when the firemen arrive

24、d were the people rescued. Depending on their professional knowledge , the firemen quickly prevented the fire from spreading. Finally, with the fire put out, people were all in relief. 联合国教科文组织某考察团正联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

25、1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100- -120之间。之间。Practice Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome

26、 to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching

27、building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.