大作文高分模板英语一

1、2016 考研英语“图画类”高分作文模板（英语一）一、历年作文主题分类纵观历年考研英语一图画作文，可将其分为两类：人生态度类（常考积极方面），社会现象类（常考消极方面）。人生态度类：2014 年（孝敬父母），2013 年（正确选择），2012 年（乐观态度），2010（文化交流），2008 年（合作精神），2007 年（自信态度），2006 年（偶像崇拜，），2005 年（道德教育，尊敬老人），2004 年（终点即是起点，人生没有终点，要不断进取），2003 年（挫折教育）社会现象类：2015 年（科技副作用），2011 年（环境污染），2009 年（网络导致人际交流缺少）二、关于考研英语一大

2、作文几点建议1，没有要求一定要写标题的话，建议不要写，因为写对了不加分也不扣分，但是写错了会扣分，务必注意。2，考研英语大纲要求大作文字数为 160-200 字（不包括标点符号），建议写到 220 字左右，太多了也不好，不要超过 240 字，历年考研英语高分作文都在 220 字左右。3，大作文开头必须描述图画，并揭示主题词，主题词要贯穿全文，反复出现，否则容易被视为偏题作文。4，作文采用三段式，不建议标新立异，标的不好的话会摔很疼。5，书写方面，建议 0.5mm 黑色签字笔，字迹工整的同学比字迹潦草的同学作文平均分数高出 5 分左右。三、人生态度类作文模板第一段第一句：Sobered feel

3、ing flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above,图片描述.翻译：当我看到这幅图片的时候脑海中瞬间充斥着一种醍醐灌顶的感觉！如图所示，图片描述.【备注 1】：Sobered（醍醐灌顶的）可以根据不同的语境作相应的替换，如：Refreshed（神清气爽的）、Enlightened（豁然开朗的）、inspired（倍受鼓舞的）等。【备注 2】：instantly（立即地）可替换为：immediately（立即地）、instantaneously（瞬间地，突如其来地）第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Simpl

4、y as the above illustration appears at first glance, the symbolic meaning the picture conveys is rather deep and profound.翻译：上面这幅图画乍看起来很简单，但它的象征意义是非常的深刻的。【备注 1】：这句话大家可以根据文章字数来确定是否需要添加，字数控制在 220 字左右。【备注 2】：illustration（图画）可替换为简单点的：picture、image、cartoon.第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointe

5、d out that 主题词 exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course翻译：毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。【备注 1】：Beyond doubt（毫无疑问）可替换为：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.【备注 2】： explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously（显著地）。【备注 3】： pointed ou（t 指出）可替换为：illustra

6、ted、featured、portrayed、presented、depicted、described，这些单词都是表示“描述，描绘”的意思。【备注 4】：existsas：作为而存在，以形式存在。第二段第一句：The author wants to convey that 主题词 is omnipresent in the inspiring drawing above.翻译：正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达主题词在生活中无处不在。【备注 1】：【备注 2】：【备注 3】：omnipresent（无处不在的）可替换为：prevalent（流行的，普遍的）主题词 is omnipre

7、sent 可替换为：主题词 can be found in nearly all walks of life. inspiring（充满哲理的）可替换为： instructive（有教育意义的）、symbolic（象征性的）、philosophic（富有哲理的）、illuminating（有启发性的）、stimulatory（鼓舞人心的）。第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Every word you say, every action you take is probably labeled by 主题词 if you area person with the spirit of it.翻译：如果

8、你身上具备这种品质，那么你说的每一句话，做出的每一个动作都被打上了主题词标签。第三句：Indeed, the function of 主题词 has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive.翻译：事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，主题词的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。【备注 1】：Indeed（的确，实际上）可替换为：In fact、Actually第四句： When speaking of success, (no matter f

9、or individual development or the team/society,)主题词 plays a crucial role.翻译：当提及成功，（无论是对个人发展还是团队/社会发展，）主题词都扮演着举足轻重的角色。【备注 1】：括号内的内容可要可不要，视自己作文字数而定。【备注 2】：When speaking of 可替换为：When it comes to【备注 3】：crucia（l 关键的）可替换为：vita（l 关键的）、indispensable（不可缺少的）、momentous（重要的）、significant（有重要意义的）第五句：As can best be

10、 illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/Li Na/Liu Xiang/Yi Jian lian, anoutstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over theworld without the personality of 主题词.翻译：最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子，如果他没有主题词，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。【备注 1】：此句为从正面来进行说明主题词的重要性。第六句（这一句可要可不要）：The success o

11、f Yao Ming / Li Na / Liu Xiang / Yi Jian lian tells us that what 主题词 offers you is not the solution to a specific problem, but a kind of belief, which makes yourself believe that you can harness it and make it.翻译：姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的成功告诉我们主题词给予你的，不是解决某个具体问题的方法，而是传达给你一种信念，一种我能行的自我暗示和把事情做成功的信念。第七句（这一句可要可不要）：

12、However, it is exactly the overwhelming effect in this competitive society.翻译：而这些恰恰是在现代社会竞争体制中具有压倒性成效的因素。【备注 1】：overwhelming：势不可挡的，压倒性的第八句：Once lack of 主题词, people wille ignorant and muddle-headed, swim withthe tide and probablye the defective products of the cruel society.翻译：在现代社会中人们一旦缺少了主题词，就会逐渐变成

13、浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。【备注 1】：此句为从反面来进行说明主题词的重要性。【备注 2】：ignorant：愚昧无知的muddle-headed：糊涂的，浑浑噩噩的第三段第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of 主题词rests in both vital and trivial issues.翻译：从以上我们的讨论来看，主题词的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。【备注 1】：Given all above arguments 可替

14、换为：From what have been discussed above、Judging from what have been discussed above【备注 2】：it admits of no doubt that 可替换为：we may safely draw the conclusion that.【备注 3】：vital and trivial：重要的和琐碎的第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.翻译：因而，我们要提高社会责任感。第三句：At the same time, t

15、he authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.翻译：同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。【备注 1】：At the same time 可替换成：Meanwhile第四句：Only by being fully aware of the significance of 主题词, can we hope to witness theideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.翻译：只有我们对主题词的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生

16、活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。四、社会现象类作文模板第一段第一句：Embarrassed feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this drawing!图片描述.翻译：当我看到这幅图片的时候羞愧的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海！图片描述。【备注 1】：Embarrassed 可替换为：、punctious(惭愧的,内疚的)、Shameful。【备注 2】：instantly（立即地）可替换为：immediately（立即地）、instantaneously（瞬间地，突如其来地）第二句（这一句可要可不要）：Simply as the a

17、bove illustration appears at first glance, the symbolic meaning the picture converys is rather deep and profound.翻译：上面这幅图画乍看起来很简单，但它的象征意义是非常的深刻的。【备注 1】：这句话大家可以根据文章字数来确定是否需要添加，字数控制在 220 字左右。【备注 2】：illustration（图画）可替换为简单点的：picture、image、cartoon.第三句：Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out tha

18、t 主题词 exists as quite realistic negative power in our growing course翻译：毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了主题词在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的消极影响。【备注 1】：Beyond doubt（毫无疑问）可替换为：Undoubtedly、There is no doubt that.【备注 2】： explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously（显著地）。【备注 3】： pointed ou（t 指出）可替换为：illustrated、featu

19、red、portrayed、presented、depicted、described，这些单词都是表示“描述，描绘”的意思。【备注 4】：existsas：作为而存在，以形式存在。第二段第一句：As is incisively depicted in the realistic drawing above, the appearance of 主题词 is the corresponding social problem caused by excessively rapid development of modern society (which improved the living st

20、andard ofpeople at the same time).翻译：正如上面这幅现实性的图片所描述的那样，我认为主题词是现代社会过快发展（带给人们生活水平提高的同时）出现的相应的社会问题。【备注 1】：括号内的内容可根据字数要求进行删减，这句话不影响整个句子的表达。【备注 2】：explicitly（鲜明地）可替换为：incisively and vividly（淋漓尽致地）、conspicuously（显著地）。【备注 3】：As is incisively depicted in 可替换为：According to what is incisively depicted in第二句：

21、Indeed, 主题词 hasof people.)e a heated topic, (however, it is contradict with the nature翻译：事实上，主题词已经成为社会热议话题，（不过它与我们的人性的本质是背道而驰的）。第三句：According to recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters suffer from 主题词.翻译：根据中国社科院最近发布的一项调查，五分之三的年轻人因主题词而受到伤害。【备注 1】：

22、Chinese Academy of Social Science（s 中国社科院）可替换为其他机构，如：TsinghuaUniversity（清华大学）、China Youth Daily（中国青年报）、Peoples Daily（人民日报）、Xinhua News Agency（新华社）第四句：Who is to blame for the existence of 主题词?In my opinion, the following three factors should definitely be counted in.翻译：谁应该为主题词的社会现象买单？在我看来，下列三个因素难咎其责。

23、【备注 1】：In my opinion 可替换为：From my perspective（在我看来），On my personal level（在我看来）第五句：On the top of the causes might come the drive of interests. People always prefer things that benefit them.翻译：首要因素的是由于利益的驱动，人们经常倾向于对自己有利的事情。第六句：Then comes the absence of responsibility. Some self-concentrated people jus

24、t focus on individual interest(regardless of the existence of social responsibilities, resulting in the appearance of 主题词).翻译：其次是责任的缺失。现代社会中那些习惯凡事以自我为中心的人只关注个人得失（从而忽视了社会责任感的存在，导致了主题词的出现。）【备注 1】：括号内的内容可根据字数要求进行删减，这句话不影响整个句子的表达。【备注 2】：Then 可替换为：Furthermore/Moreover（除此之外）第七句：Last but not the least, the

25、 defective legal system is also one of the reasons that make the phenomenon of 主题词 exist.翻译：最后，法律系统的不完善也是导致社会上出现了一些主题词现象的一个原因。第三段第一句：Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the negative function of 主题 词 rests in both vital and trivial issues.翻译：从以上我们的讨论来看，主题词的消极影响出现在生活中的大事小事上。【备注 1】：Gi

26、ven all above arguments 可替换为：From what have been discussed above、Judging from what have been discussed above【备注 2】：it admits of no doubt that 可替换为：we may safely draw the conclusion that.【备注 3】：vital and trivial：重要的和琐碎的第二句：Therefore, we should enhance our sense of social responsibility.翻译：因而，我们要努力提高社

27、会责任感。第三句：At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system.翻译：同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。【备注 1】：At the same time 可替换成：Meanwhile第四句：With a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before theproblem of 主题词es things of the past翻译：伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，主题词这个问题迟早可以被解决。五

28、、模板套用示范示范一：2007 年真题实战演练主题类型：人生态度类主题词：自信主题词表达形式：self-confidence，self-belief，believe in yourself，be confident图画描述句：The goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is invincible.【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定语从句。There is a goalkeeper and a striker who are bot

29、h lack of self-confidence in the picture.文章内容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，the goalkeeper saw himself as a failure while in the eye of his opponent, he is invincible. Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that self-confidence exists

30、 as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that believing in oneself is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of self-belief has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive. When spe

31、aking of success, no matter forindividual development or the team, being confident plays a crucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can notachieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality

32、 of self-confidence.Once lack of self-belief, people wille ignorant and muddle-headed, swim with the tide andprobablye the defective products of the cruel society.Given all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of self-belief rests in both vital and trivial issues. Theref

33、ore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of self-confidence. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of self-confidence, can we hope towitness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their li

34、fe to the uttermost.译文：当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，守门员看自 己像一个失败者，殊不知在对手的眼中，他是不可战胜的。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了自信在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达相信自己在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，自信的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，自信都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子，如果他/她没有自信，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在

35、现代社会中人一旦缺少了自信，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。从以上我们的讨论来看，自信的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大众要提高他们关于自信的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对自信的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。示范二：2008 年真题实战演练主题类型：人生态度类主题词：合作精神主题词表达形式：spirit of cooperation，teamwork，being cooperative，help each other图画描述句：The man without rig

36、ht leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both of them can go fast and far.【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定语从句。There are two disable men going forward with each others help in the picture.文章内容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is sh

37、own above，The man without right leg ties himself with another man who has no left leg, so both of them can go fast and far . Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that the spirit of cooperation exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that

38、 working together is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of teamwork has been elevated to a relatively high height as thesociety marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success, no matter forindividual development or the team, helping each other plays a c

39、rucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, whocan not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality ofcooperation. Once lack of the spirit of cooperation, people wille ignorant andmuddle-head

40、ed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of teamwork rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of cooperation. At the

41、same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of being cooperative, can we hope towitness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.译文：当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，一个没了右 腿的人把自己和一个没了左腿的人绑在一起，这样他们就都

42、可以走得又快又远了。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了合作精神在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达合作在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，合作的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，合作都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子，如果他/她没有合作，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在现代社会中人一旦缺少了合作精神，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。从以上我们的讨论来看，合作的积极作用体现在生活中

43、的大事小事上。因而，大众要提高他们关于合作的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对合作的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。示范三：2012 年真题实战演练主题类型：人生态度类 主题词：乐观，积极态度主题词表达形式： optimism(n.) / optimistic(adj.) ， being optimistic ， being positive/optimistic attitude toward lifepositive ，图画描述句：Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thi

44、nks that its lucky to have a little left, while the other sights that its all gone.【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定语从句。There are two people who have different attitudes when their bottle falls down in thepicture.文章内容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As

45、is shown above， Seeing the bottle fell to the ground, one thinks that its lucky to have a little left, while the other sights that its all gone .Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that optimism exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey t

46、hat positive attitude toward life is omnipresent in the inspiringdrawing above. Indeed, the function of being optimistic has been elevated to a relatively highheight as the society marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success,no matter for individual development or the team, opti

47、mistic attitude toward life plays a crucialrole. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman, who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with outthe personality of being positive. Once lack of optimism, people wille

48、ignorant andmuddle-headed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of optimism restsin both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance theirawareness of

49、 being optimistic. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the imperfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of optimism, can we hope to witnessthe ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.译文：当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，看到倒在地 上的瓶子，一个人庆

50、幸还剩下一点，而另一个人却笃定的认为全完了。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了乐观在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达乐观在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，乐观的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，乐观都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子，如果他/她没有乐观，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在现代社会中人一旦缺少了乐观，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。从以上我们的讨论来看，乐观的积极

51、作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大众要提高他们关于乐观的意识。同时，政府也要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对乐观的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。示范四：2014 年真题实战演练主题类型：人生态度类主题词：孝敬父母，孝顺，孝心主题词表达形式：filial piety, mutual support，caring for the elderly，honoring our parents， respecting our parents图画描述句：Three decades ago, along the road walked a young

52、and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her aged mother through the road arm in arm.【备注】：对于基础一般的同学，以防句子出错，建议用简单句型。例如：Therebe 句型+定语从句。There are two people, a mother and a daughter, who show love with each o

53、ther in thepicture.文章内容：Sobered feeling flooded my mind instantly when I saw this picture! As is shown above，Three decades ago, along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand with smile on her face, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her age

54、d mother through the road arm in arm. Beyond doubt, this picture explicitly pointed out that filial piety exists as quite realistic positive power in our growing course.The author wants to convey that honoring our parents is omnipresent in the inspiring drawingabove. Indeed, the function of respecti

55、ng our parents has been elevated to a relatively high heightas the society marches forward andes more competitive. When speaking of success, nomatter for individual development or the team, caring for our parents plays a crucial role. As can best be illustrated in terms of Yao Ming/ Li Na/ Liu Xiang

56、/ Yi Jian lian, an outstanding sportsman,who can not achieve success and respects from all over the world with out the personality ofhonoring the elderly. Once lack of honoring the elderly, people wille ignorant andmuddle-headed, swim with the tide and probablysociety.e the defective products of the

57、 cruelGiven all above arguments, it admits of no doubt that the positive function of honoring our parents rests in both vital and trivial issues. Therefore, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness of respecting our parents. At the same time, the authority should strengthen the impe

58、rfect social system. Only by being fully aware of the significance of filial piety, can we hopeto witness the ideal scean in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.译文：当我看到这幅图片的时候醍醐灌顶的感觉瞬间充斥了我的脑海。如图所示，三十年前， 沿着那条路走着一位年轻的母亲，她脸上带着笑容搀扶着女儿往前走，而现在在处于生命中的黄金时间的女儿肩靠肩地带着年迈的母亲往前走。毫无疑问，这幅图片旗帜鲜明地指出了孝敬

59、父母在我们人生成长过程中的比较现实的积极力量。正如上面这幅充满哲理性的图片，作者想要表达孝顺在生活中无处不在。事实上，随着现代社会的进步，竞争的激烈，孝顺的作用逐渐被提到了一个相对较高的高度。当提及成功，无论是对于个人还是团队的发展，孝顺都扮演着举足轻重的角色。最能说明这一点的莫过于杰出运动员姚明/李娜/刘翔/易建联的例子，如果他/她没有孝心，就不会获得成功和取得全世界人民的尊敬。在现代社会中人一旦缺少了孝心，就会逐渐变成浑浑噩噩、随波逐流的群体，很有可能终将成为这个残酷社会的淘汰品。从以上我们的讨论来看，孝顺的积极作用体现在生活中的大事小事上。因而，大众要提高他们关于孝顺的意识。同时，政府也

60、要不断完善社会体制。只有我们对孝敬父母的重要性的足够重视，我们才能见证这样一种理想生活，在那里，人们才能享受他们的生活直到永远。示范五：2011 年真题实战演练旅程之“余”主题类型：社会现象类主题词：环境污染主题词表达形式：environmental disruption, polluting the environment，environmental pollution， environmental contamination，respecting our parents图画描述句：sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a c