1.6顾家北写作训练营1.14第三节范文

1、 种树还是盖房9USK VKUVRK ZNOTQ ZNGZ OZ OY SUXK OSVUXZGTZ ZU VRGTZ SUXK ZXKKY OT UVKT GXKGY OT ZUTY GTJ IOZOKY ZN:U NGZ KZKTZ JU _U GMXKK UX JOYGMXKK%XUOJK SUXK NUYOTM 点击开始作答观点开头段替换词Some people thinkt it is more important: some people consider it importantPlant more trees: increase the number of treesOpen

2、areas: open spaProvide housing: build more houses and apartment buildings学生观点点评学生的观点点评A 多种树 B 其他公共设施C公共基础设施发展不完善陈词滥调。这个观点太多人用了。A 全球剧增B 无家可归的人增加C 修建房屋更重要这个题目确定 AA 建筑施工范围扩噪音污染严重 C在城镇空旷区多种树更重要这个观点不够有力。毕竟建筑施工不是的，而是暂时。A 社会快速发展 B 大量树被砍伐，自然环境遭到破坏 C 需要多种树这个题目确定 A。发展迅速被砍伐不代表要在城市种树。A 建房子 B 空间拥挤 C 人们感到压抑这个题目确定

3、 A。如果的话，应该说建立房子的好处。A 多种树能营造一个良好的栖息地 B吸引野生动物来居住 C 实现人与自然和谐共处和 的 不符合，种了树不代表野生动物就来，因为城市不是它们的自然栖息地，而且为什么一定要强求动物来城市居住呢？A 多种树 B生态环境 C减少环保支出用于其他投资陈词滥调。 的钱不是这个题目的关键，这个题目显然是在意绿化或者是房屋对人的影响。开头段范例Some people consider it important to increase the number of trees in open spa, compared with building morehouses and

4、 apartment buildings. I agree with this idea, although housing can be essential to the well-being of peopleliving in some cities. (6.5)The space in densely populated urban areas is limited,andplanting more trees and the construction of new buildings.ernments have found ird to reach a balance iny opi

5、nion, the acs to greenspais important to thestandards of living, although housing also has an impact on peoples well-being. (7+)结尾段范例In, making cities greener issibly a better option for urban areas, unless the demand for housing faroutstrips the supply.主体段一A 城市多种树 B 增加绿化面积提高空气质量 C 为居民创造良好的生活环境背景：城市

6、车多，污染严重解释（A-B）：树木可以吸收，污染物，产生空气对比：如果房子很多，密集，污染严重词伙:Improve air quality, improve public healthHeavy traffic, heavily pollutedAbsorb carbon dioxide, filtollutants,Densely populated, serious pollution范文:Trees play a key rolea aining and improving air quality, which is essential to the health of city dwe

7、llers. Airpollution hase a pressing environmental ie in urban areas, as the number of cars has been increasingcontinuously. Trees can create oxygen and absorb the contaminants we inhale in cities, thereby reducing respiratoryproblems,g cancer and other diseases which are attr buted to poor air quali

8、ty. If open areas were all used for theconstruction of residential buildings, there would be fewer treesbuilt-up areas.t could filtollutants and alleviate air pollution in主体段二A 多种树 B 提供Place 供市民休闲 C 有助于上班族缓解压力背景：城市人的生活节奏快，没有时间去交友解释（A-B）：人们喜欢在公园运动，或者有树木的街道散步解释（B-C）：接触大自然让人心情舒畅对比：如果只是房子，大家回家就待在家里，变得很压

9、抑词伙:take a walk, go for a run, community activities, sports events,open spa, stay at home, solise with neighbours, enjoy outdoor pursuits.reduce prere, improve health, feel refreshed and reinvigoratedstay at home, cope winxiety, stress and even depres范文:Another obvious benefit of increasing trees is

10、t open spacan attract more residents who search for plaidealfor outdoor activities to redutress. City dwellers frequently complain about the fast pace of urban life, which leavesthem little time for sol life. With easy acs to greenspa, they can go jogging with friends on a daily basis, takea walk wi

11、th family along treelined avenues and attend musical shows or othublic events held in parksardenswhich have trees to provide shade. These activities can lower the stress level by exing them to natural elements,which can elevate moods immedia y, and also by offering them valuable opportunities to con

12、nect with loved ones andother members of community. If open spacommunity.were limited, they would stay at home and feel disconnected from主体段三A 应该多建房子 B 增加房屋供应 C 可以降低房价和生活压力背景：城市增加，房子价格上升解释（B-C）：有自己的房子，生活舒适，也不用花那么多钱在房贷和房租上拓展结果：其他方面有钱对比：如果买不起房子，不一定在意城市里有多少绿地词伙:Provide more housing, Lower housing pri,

13、reduce economic prerePopulation expan, population growthBuy their own homes, have a comfortable and secure environment, pay for mortgage or rent范文:On the other hand, in some densely populated towns and cities, it is reasonable to approve more housing projects onopen spa, which can help lower or stab

14、ilise housing priand reduce the economic prere on home-buyers orthose living in rentedmodation. Population expanhese urban areas can drive up property priunlessmore land can be developed for residential buildings, which enable people to buy their homes and enjoy comfortableliving conditions. Instead of spending a huge pro