2018年晋城市中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编

1、话题一：写人记事例文：初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为TheTeacherINeverForge”的作文。内容包括：1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长；2.列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的；3.感谢老师，祝愿老师。TheTeacherINeverForgetHowtimeflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIbecameamiddleschoolstudent.Ihadverygoodmemoriesofmyclassmatesandteachers.TheteacherIneverforgetisMr.Zhang,anEngli

2、shteacher.Heisverykindandfriendly.Hehelpedusnotonlyinclassbutalsoafterclass.Abouttwoyearsago,Mr.ZhangnoticedthatIwasworriedaboutmypoorpronunciation.Soheofferedmemanysuggestionstoimproveit,andhealsogavemeeverychancepossibletospeakinclass.Withhishelp,mypronunciationhasgreatlyimproved.Imustsaymanythank

3、stoMr.Zhang.Iwishhimahealthyandhappylifeinthefuture!例文：假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。要点：1.一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2.你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；3.孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4.你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。Onmywayhomeonthebus,Isawanoldmangetonwithhisgrandsonofaboutten.Hewasc

4、arryingtheboysschoolbagandaviolin.Igavemyseattotheoldmanatonce.However,theboysatdownfirst.Theoldmanhadtostandnearby.Afterawhile,theboyshoutedtohisgrandpaforwaterandthendroppedtheemptybottleonthebus.WhenIsawthis,Igotveryangry,Ithinktheboyshouldnotonlyrespectandtakecareoftheoldmanbutalsokeeptheenviron

5、mentclean.话题二：环保污染例文：节约资源，保护环境.从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重低碳”生活的中学生，请以MyLow-carbonLife”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的低碳生活”。提示:（1）每天步行上学;（2）离丌教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3）不用水时,记住关水龙头，循环使用水；（4）充分使用纸张；（5）不使用塑料袋。MyLow-carbonLifeItsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse,sowemustdosomethingtopreventpeoplefrom

6、pollutingtheenvironment.First,weshouldgotoschoolonfootandtellourparentstowalktoworkinsteadofdrivingthecar.Second,weshouldsavewaterandelectricitybyturningoffthetaps,fans,TVsetsandlightsintimewhenwedontneedthem.Whatsmore,watershouldbereusedbyus.Third,itisgoodtomakefulluseofpaper.Weshouldusethebothside

7、softhepaper.Bydoingthis,wecansavemanytrees.Atlast,remembertogoshoppingwithbasketratherthanplasticbags.Ibelieveourlifewillbecomebetterandbetterifwecandothesethings.Lowercarbon,happierlife.Letstakeactions,例文：目前，我们的家乡正在实施“城乡清洁工程”(cleaningproject).请你根据以下信息，给某英文报写一篇短文，就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方面谈谈你的看法和建议。状况：1.垃圾到处可见，

8、污染空气、土地和水源。2.摆卖不安全食品，危害人们的健康。建议:1.城乡统一堆放垃圾。2.禁止生产不合格食物，不卖不买有害食品。Presently,acleaningprojectiscarriedoutinourhometown.Itisnecessaryforustocleanourlivingenvironment,becauserubbishcanbeseeneverywhere.Theair,thesoilandthewaterareallpolluted.Somekindsofunsafefoodwhichisharmfultopeopleshealthappearinthesto

9、resandsomesupermarkets.Ithinkwemuststopthepollutionandtheharm.Peoplemustthrowthewasteintotherubbishbins.Dontallowanyonetoproduceandsellanyunsafefood.Payattentiontothefoodbeforeeating,sureitissafe.Ifwecandothatall,ourhometownwillsoonbecleanerandmorebeautiful话题三：体育健康例文：每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的

10、体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要再马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。HowtoDevelopGoodLivingHabitsEveryonehasdifferentlivinghabits.Goodhabitscanmakeuskeephealthy.Asteenagers,whatshouldwedo?Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldgetupandsleepontimeeveryday.DontplayorwatchTVallnight.Thatisbadforo

11、urhealthandaffectourwork.Weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit,andeatlessmeat.Iadviseeverybodytotakemorephysicalexercises.Donteatjunkfood,forexampleinstantnoodles.Dontlitterandspit.Dontplayontheroad.Remembertoobeythetrafficrules.Nojaywalking.Inaword,ifwewanttokeephealthyandhappy,wemustdevelopgoodlivingh

12、abits.例文：请以ILoveSports为题写一篇英语短文。1.你喜欢的体育活动有哪些？2.进行体育活动有哪些好处？3.你最喜欢的体育活动是什么？IlovesportsIloveswimming,running,ballgamesinmysparetime.Ithinkitisgoodforustodosomesports.Sportshelptobuildupourbodyandmakeusstrength.Itcanalsokeepillnessaway.Bydoingsports,Imbecomingstrongerandmoreconfident有信心的)thanbefore.My

13、favoritesportisswimming.IlikeswimmingbecauseIlikeplayingwithwater.AlsoIthinkswimmingismorepopularthanothersportsanditseasiertolearn.IfeelrelaxedwhenIswim.Ilovesports!Ithinkeveryoneshouldspendsometimeonsportseverydaybecausehealthismoreimportantthanotherthingsinmodernlife.话题四：语言学习例文：假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习

14、英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“FindyourownwaytolearnEnglish”，介绍你学习英语的体会。1.最初的情况:学习困难。如：拼写听力差、语法出错、阅读速度慢。2.现在的情况:学习方法。如：记单元词汇表(vocabularylist)多听磁带借书阅读3.学习体会:学好英语的关键。如：专心致志、自有方法。FindyourownwaytolearnEnglishTherearemanywaystolearnEnglish,buteveryoneshouldhavehisorherownwaAtfirst,IhadmanydifficultiesinLearn

15、ingEnglish.Forexample,Icouldntspell-someEnglishwords,andcouldntunderstandwhatpeoplesaidwhentheyweretalkingfast.Ioftenmademistakesingrammarandreadveryslowly.NowIhavefoundsomewaystoimprovemyEnglish.Icopydownthevocabularylistsforeachunitandkeeptheminmymind.IlistentoEnglishtapeseverydayandIcanunderstand

16、mostlywhatpeopletalkabout.IoftenborrowEnglishbooksandreadthemafterclass.ThemostimportantthingtolearnEnglishwell,Ithink,istokeepyourmindonit,sothatyoucanfindyourownwaystoimproveyourEnglish.例文：假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。要点：1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志；3.听

17、、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇；4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。DearDave,ImgladtogetyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadvice.First,Asaforeign,youneedtogoandjoinaChineselearningactivitygroup,themostimportantthingistorememberasmanyChinesewordsaspossible.Second,ifyouwanttoimproveyourlisteningability,youdbe

18、tterreadChinesebooks,listentothetapesandradioprogramsinChinese.YoucanwatchtheChineseTVprogramsorDVDs.Third,youmakesomeChinesefriends.YourfriendscanteachyoualotofChinesesongsandintroducesomeChinesefestivalstoyou,too.Inaword,Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtime.writetomesoon.话题五：旅游及交通安全例文：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生

19、活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？内容包含：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.Butunluckily,ithasalsobroughtmanyproblems,suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybodysbusiness

20、.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample,wemustwalkonwalkside.whenwecrosszebra-crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,thengoacrossfast.Dontplayfootballontheroad.wecantellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive,nottorunthroughredlights,nottotalkandlaughwhiledrivingetc.Wecansaycarsarecomingintoourlife,butonlywheneverybod

21、ythinkstrafficsafetyiseverybodysbusinesscanwebesafedrivingonroadsandwalkingonwalkside.例文：目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。要点：一、不重视课外阅读的原因：1.作业太多2.没有读书习惯3.时间花在电脑或网络上。二、课外阅读的好处1.更多地了解世界2.学会如何思考3.生活更加丰富多彩。三、对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）Atpresentonlyafewstudentsdosomereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreason

22、s.Firstofall,quitealotofstudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Stillothershaventformedahabitofreading.TheywouldratherspendtheirsparetimeonTVorontheInternet.However,readinghasmanybenefits.Throughreadingwecanlearnmoreabouttheworld.Besides,itcanhelpusthinkbetter.Lastbutnotleast,readingcanmakeourlifemor

23、ecolorful.Herearemysuggestions.Foronething,teachersaresupposedtolimittheamountofourhomeworksothatwecanhavemoretimetoread.Foranother,itsagoodideatoformreadingclubsandlearnfromeachother.话题九:提出解决问题例文：保持健康的体魄，拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。请以Howtokeepfit为题，从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇文章。HowtokeepfitAsweallknow,i

24、tisimportantforustokeephealthyandhaveahealthylife.Howtokeepfit?First,weshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon.Wemustnteatjunkfood,whichisbadforour中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编health.Second,todosportsisnecessaryforus.Itisagoodideatorunandplayballgames.Last,itisusefulforustohaveagoodlivi

25、nghabit.Weshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Wemustwashourhandsbeforemeals.Whatsmore,weshouldbrushourteethtwiceaday.例文：你的笔友Tom上周来信想你倾诉了他在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助。请根据提示给他写回信，给他以帮助。写作要点提示：1）简述Tom的烦恼；2）针对他的烦恼提出几点建议；3）表达你对他的鼓励与祝愿DearTom,Igotyourletterlastweek.Ihearthatyoudoverywellinallthesubjects.Co

26、ngratulations！Butyouhavefewfriends.Youfeellonely.Youdontknowwhatyoushoulddo.Igivesomeadvice:First,youshouldhelpthestudentswhoareintrouble,bothinstudyandinlife.Theythinkyoucangetonwellwiththem.Then,jointhem.Youcanplayandsingwiththem.Doingthatcanmakeyouamemberofthem.Last,afterclassyoucantalkwiththem.S

27、harethesadnessandhappinesswiththem.Ihopeyoucanmakemorefriendsandbecomehappy.Yours,Lisa例文Lifeisjustlikeamirror,yousmileatit,anditsmilesatyou,too.请你以“LearntoSmile为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的父流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语

28、言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。LearntoSmileIrememberasongbyWestlife,thefirstsentenceofitis“Justasmileandtherainisgone.”Doyoulikesmiling?Ithinkyoushouldlearntosmile.First,weshouldlearntosmileatyourselfwhensomethingunpleasanthappensinyourlife.Ifyoufailanexamoryouaremisunderstoodbyyourfriends,dontbesad.Justsmileatyo

29、urself.Smilingatyourselfbringsbackyourconfidence.Sometimestheonewhobeatsyouisnotothers,butyourself.Andsmilecanalsokeepyouhealthy.Second,itisimportantforyoutolearntosmileatothers.Itwillmakeyoucommunicatebetterwithpeople.Smilingatothersmakesyouhappyaswell.Inaword,smileisakindoflanguagebelongingtoevery

30、one.Itpassesloveandfriendshipandhelpsshortenthedistancebetweenyouandotherpeople.Livingwithasmile,everydaywillbeshiny.例文：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy计划今年暑假来江西度假，她向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，给她写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。DearLucy,ImveryhappythatyouarecomingtoJiangxitospendyoursummerholiday.Th

31、erearesomesimilaritiesanddifferencesbetweencitylifeandcountrylife.Bothinthecityandinthecountry,peopleslifeisgettingbetterandbetter.Theypaymoreandmoreattentiontokeepingfit.However,therearesomedifferences.Inthecitypeoplegotosupermarketstobuywhattheyneed.Theyeatathomeorinrestaurants.Theyliveinapartment

32、sandtravelaroundbycarorbus.Afterwork,theygotocinemas,clubsorparkstorelaxthemselves.Inthecountry,peoplegrowvegetablesandricebythemselves.Theyliveinhousesandridemotorbikesorbicyclestogoaround.IntheirsparetimetheywouldliketovisittheirneighborsorwatchTVathome.Asforme.Iprefertoliveinthecitybecausetherear

33、emoreplacestoenjoymyself.Ioftengotolibraries,bookstoresandsciencemuseums,whereIcanlearnmuchabouttheworld.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyou!Bestwishes!作文训练一、在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算。注意：1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名

34、；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。DearWordscantshowmythankstoyou,BestwishesYoursLiMing【答案】DearMr/Mrs/MissX,Wordscantshowmythankstoyou.YouvehelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,youusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomeadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Youcam

35、eandcheeredmeup.YoutoldmesomegoodwaystoimproveEnglish.Withyourhelp,IvemadegreatprogressinEnglish.ImsothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatIllworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.BestwishesYoursLiMingDearMum/Dad/MumandDad,Wordscantshowmythankstoyou.Youvetakengoodcareofmeinthepastthreeyears.WhenIwasintrou

36、ble,youusedtoencouragemeandcheermeup.OnceIarguedwithmyclassmatesandIdidntknowhowtodealwithit.Youtalkedwithmethewholeeveningandgavemealotofadviceonhowtogetalongwithothers.Withyourhelp,Ivebecomeapopularboy/girlandmadealotoffriends.ImsothankfultoyouforyourloveandcarethatIllworkharderandtrytodobetterint

37、hefuture.BestwishesYoursLiMing【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩。如：introuble；Atonetime；makegreatprogressin;takegoodcareof;arguewith;talkwith;workhard等。短文中还用了一些连词如：中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编when,that,and等，使句子结构更加复杂化，增加了文章的亮点。二、英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；你将在日常生活、学习中

38、做些什么来孝敬父母；词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。提示词（可选用）：learnfrom,respect,carefor,dosomehousework,studyhardMonday,June30SunnyThismorning,ourEnglishteachertoldussomestoriesabout“themostbeautifulfilialpietyyouthin2015”.【答案】Monday,June30SunnyThismorning,ourEnglishteachertoldussomestoriesabout“themostbeautifulfilialp

39、ietyyouthin2013”.Iwasdeeplymoved.Thoseteenagerssetusagoodexampleinrespectingandcaringforparents.IusedtomakemyparentsunhappyandnowIfeelashamedaboutit.IthinkIshouldlearnfromthem.Iwillhelpdosomehouseworkandtakegoodcareofmymumanddadwhentheyareill.IwilltrymybesttostudyhardsothatIcanenterthekeyhighschooli

40、nourcity.IhopeIcanbecomeafilialpietyyouthlikethem.（88words）【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:setanexamplefor为树立榜样；usedtodosth过去常常做某事；takecareof照顾；tryonesbesttodosth尽力做某事；强调句式Itisadjforsbtodosth,做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。三、为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语

41、向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶像梅西，有足球天赋梦想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西MessiDearclassmates,中考英语作文写作技巧及试题汇编ImveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20,000football-themedschoolsby2020.Thankyouforyo

42、urattention.【答案】Dearclassmates,ImveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20,000football-themedschoolsby2020.Footballhasaverylonghistory.Itislikedbypeopleallovertheworld.TheWorldCuptakesplaceeveryfouryears.Playingfootballhaslotsofadvantages.First,bothboysandgirlscantakepartinit.Second,ithelpsdevelopteamsp

43、irit.Whatsmore,playingfootballisgoodforourhealth.Imafootballfan.Messiismyhero.Hehasagiftforplayingfootball.MydreamistobecomeafamousfootballplayerlikeMessi.IhopeChinawillholdtheWorldCupsomeday.Thankyouforyourattention.写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Footballhasaverylonghistory.Itislikedbypeopleallovertheworld.The

44、WorldCuptakesplaceeveryfouryears.ithelpsdevelopteamspirit.Whatsmore,playingfootballisgoodforourhealth.等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first,second等使得短文层次清楚。四、每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议）如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓

45、名。语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?【答案】Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?Inmyopinion,weshouldntgoswimmingindangerousplacesorplacesweknowl

46、ittleabou,suchsareservoiesandrivers.Second,wehadbetternotswimwhenwefeeltiredorhungry.Ifweseesomeonefallintothewater,weshouldsavehiminaperporway.Forexample,wecanshoutloudlyaswecantogetthosewithgoodswimmingskillstohelphim.Lifeisvaluable.Weshouldtakeitseriously.Wemustrememberthatsafetyshouldalwayscomef

47、irstwhileswimming.写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：Inmyopinion,weshouldntgo，wehadbetternotswim.条件状语从句等。五、假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱任性（Renxing）：随心所欲秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的土豪（Tuhao）：很富有。注意：1.词数80-100；请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数

48、。DearPeter,AstheInternetisdevelopingfast,moreandmorenewwordsandphraseshavebeencreatedinChinese.Herearesomeexamples.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,AstheInternetisdevelopingfast,moreandmorenewwordsandphraseshavebeencreatedinChina.Herearesomeexample.OneofthemostpopularwordsisDianzan,whichisoftenus

49、edwhenyouquiteagreewithsomeone.AnotherexampleisRenxing.WhenyousaysomebodyisRenxing,youmeanthattheywilldowhatevertheylike.ThephraseMiaoshafirstcamefromonlineshopping,whichmeansyoucancompleteyourshoppingorderbeforeothers.Butnowitswidelyusedwhenyouachieveyourpurposeinaveryshorttime.Ifyoudescibesomebody

50、saaTuhao,youmeanthatheisveryrich.YoucanfindlotsofsuchnewChinesewords.Keeplearning,youllknowmoreaboutourlanguageandculture.Allthebest!YoursLiHua写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句whichisoftenusedwhenyouquiteagreewithsomeone.AnotherexampleisRenxing，.宾语从句;youmeanthattheywilldowhatevertheylike条件状

51、语从句：fyoudescibesomebodysaaTuhao,youmeanthatheisveryrich.等。六、你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。强身健体鼓励合作*了解科学*提高兴趣Studentsinourschoolarefreetochoosesomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterest:注意：1.参考词汇：模型制作modelmaking词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分【答案】St

52、udentsinourschoolarefreetochoosseomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterest.Thesecourseswillhelpstudentsrelaxthemselvesafterschool.Therearemanycoursesforthemtochoose,suchasEnglishdrama,football,ormodelmaking.Hereismoreinformation.IfyouwanttoimproveyouroralEnglish,Englishdramamaybethefirstchoice.Itisa

53、goodchancetopracticenotonlyoralEnglish,butalsoperformingskills.Ifyouareinterestedinfootball,takethefootballcourse.Itisgoodforyourphysicalhealth.Besides,youcanlearnmoreaboutteamwork.Whataboutmodelmaking?Youwillbeamazedbythescienceworldandbecomeinterestedinit.Formypart,apaintingcoursecanbeadded,becaus

54、estudentslikedrawingsomuch.Ihopethesecourseswouldbehelpfulandeachstudentwouldenjoyabrightandcolorfulschoollifehere!写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程paintingcourse，内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如herearemanycoursesforthemtochoose，suc

55、hasEnglishdrama，football，ormodelmaking、ItisagoodchancetopracticenotonlyoralEnglish，butalsoperformingskills.、Besides，youcanlearnmoreaboutteamwork、Formypart，apaintingcoursecanbeadded，becausestudentslikedrawingsomuch等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。七、假设你叫李磊，请你针对这封信的内容，给这位父亲写封回信，谈谈你的看法。要求：条例清楚，语义连贯，句式

56、规范，字迹工整。词数80左右。Deareditor，Imsorrytotroubleyou.Ihaveadaughter.Sheis13yearsold.Shelikesmakingtelephonecalls.Assoonashegetsbackfromschool,shepicksupthetelephoneandcallsherclassmates.Shetalksandtalks,sometimesfor2or3hours.Wecantuseit.Itellhimnottodoit,butsheisunhappy.WhatshouldIdo?Aworriedfather【答案】Dear

57、Sir,Dontworry.Youcanhaveawordwithherandtellherwhattodo.Asastudent,shemustputherheartintothestudy.Makingtelephonestoomuchisbadforherstudy.Ifshegoesondoingit,youcantellittoherteachers.Ithinktheycanhelpyou.Youcanalsofindoutwhomyourdaughtercallsup.Youmayasktheirparentsforhelp.Youmaybuyatelephoneforher.S

58、hecanmaketelephonecallswithherowntelephone,butshemustpayforitbyherself.Yours,LiLei书面表达做题策略：详细审题，判定体裁一2.明确题材，确定时态、人称一3.按照要求，锁定要点一4.根据要点，选定词句一5.文笔流畅，结构紧凑一-6.一气呵成，誊写清楚一7.审慎推敲，消灭遗漏一8.单词拼写，时态、语态、语气，主谓、标点皆须细致一9.遵我八法，水到渠成！八、卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题。我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下面提示内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的发言稿（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

59、主要内容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或结论，你对健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，多锻炼以健身强体，减少不良习惯）Dearboysandgirls，【答案】Dearboysandgirls，HereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealthyAsamiddleschoolstudent,firstyoudbetterdomoreexercisesuchasplayingballgamesrunningswimmingandjumpingropeThenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormealsDonteattoomuchme

60、atandsugarbutmorevegetablesandfruitThirdyouneedenoughsleeporrestNextkeepyourselfhappyAspeopleoftensaysmilingmakesyoungerLastyoumustntdrinkwineorsmokeTheyarebadforyourhealthThatismyadviceIhopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlifeThankyou,bye!九、人生要经历很多次考试，很多人都有不同程度的考试压力，请你根据表格中提示的内容以“HowtoDealwiththeExamStres