英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS

1、目录How are Task 2 answers assessed?1Ways to develop a paragraph（论证方法） 2雅思议论文论证结构3大作文分类4英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExaminers assess the answers according to these criteriaTask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidates id

2、eas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidates position is clear and effective) 英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExaminers assess the answers according to these criteriaCoherence连贯性 and Cohesion衔接 (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organised and presented i.e. paragrap

3、hing; how well the information is linked) 英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExaminers assess the answers according to these criteriaLexical Resource词汇资源 (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task) 英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExaminers assess the answers acco

4、rding to these criteriaGrammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS段落的组织250字，4段至5段话，4段更容易操作第一段：2至4句第二段：4至6句第三段：4至6句第四段：2至4句Introduction: state your viewBody: support your view with re

5、asons, arguments, examplesConclusion: restate your view主体段落：Topic sentence + supporting sentences英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSArgumentative devices - Ways to develop a paragraph（论证方法） exemplification（举例说明），explanation（解释说明），cause and effect（因果论证），comparison and contrast（比较与对比）concession and refutation（让步与

6、反驳），classification（分类）英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExemplificationExample: a specific fact, idea, person, or thing that is used to explain or support a general idea, or to show what is typical of a larger group举例相关关联词：For exampleFor instanceTake (Consider)as an exampleA case in pointsuch asincluding英语雅思考试

7、大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSSome people think that animals should be treated as friends. Yet others only consider animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Sample AnswerThere is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to treat animals as living meat and walking fur. T

8、his leads to the cruel slaughter of animals all over the world every year. Yet, in my opinion, instead of killing animals, human beings should treat them as their friends.It is an undeniable fact that animals play a vital role in maintaining the subtle balance of the earths ecological system. The la

9、ck of this essential part will bring about the destruction of the whole world. Therefore, to some extent, killing animals is equal to digging our own graves.For thousands of years, many animals have given loyal service to humans. Pigeons convey messages in wartime, and dogs help to detect crime. Eve

10、n pigs, which many people think are the most stupid animals, are used in the battle against drugs. There is no doubt that our lives would be far less convenient without a little help from our animal friends. Animals also help humans in a spiritual way. There is nothing better than keeping a cat or a

11、 dog if you want your kids to be more independent and responsible. It is also noted that senior citizens live longer if they keep pets after their retirement.To sum up, animals are human beings friends. Those who regard animals as merely a source of food and clothing should at least bear one thing i

12、n mind: Being kind to animals is being kind to ourselves. Therefore, for our own future benefit, please treat animals with love and care.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSTopic sentence:A growing number of environmental problems are no longer confined to a certain region or country. For example, oil spills can

13、 pollute international waters and the loss of the ozone layer may lead to the melting of ice caps and glaciers, which in turn, may raise sea levels worldwide.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS练习Topic sentence:The advertisements on TV, newspaper and other kinds of media may confuse consumers and make them rush

14、to purchase products which they dont really need.Take the cell phone for example. Its functions and practical use are often exaggerated in advertisements. Whats more, the advertisements even create a fashionable atmosphere for cell phones which appeals to young people to change their phones continuo

15、usly while ignoring the basic service of cell phones is just to make a phone call.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSExplanation解释：It meansThat is to sayIn other wordsTo put it another wayBy that I mean英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSI believe the traditional family, with both parents providing emotional support and rol

16、e-models for their children, is the most satisfactory way of bringing up children.Education after birth plays a significant role in ones development. Education, which helps children develop their thinking and accumulate their knowledge, is a deciding factor of ones success. For example, a high-schoo

17、l level person commonly may not succeed to the extent of a person who has received a university education. This is not only because of the greater breadth of knowledge acquired, but also due to a more critical and focused way of thinking that is imparted and refined during ones senior education.I th

18、ink an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a p

19、roblem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.)英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSCause and EffectCause:because ofas a result ofdue tothanks toowing tobecauseassinceforResult:as a resultas a consequenceaccordinglyin this waythushencesotherefore英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS练习妇女不应该当兵，因为她们的体力不如男子。Women shoul

20、d be join in the armyWomen should not be a member of the armyWomen should not take up a military career because they are not as strong as menbecause they are inferior to men in physical strengthbecause of their physical inadequacies英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSIn many countries schools have severe problem

21、s with student behavior.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?范文：Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that familie

22、s are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the

23、 children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that th

24、eir parents did.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSComparison and Contrastsimilarlylikewisein the same mannerin the same waybutwhilewhereaswhilston the contraryin contrastby contraston the other handinsteadratherconverselyPlane is the fastest means of transportation. It used to take us about 10 hours to go to a

25、 place by car. Now, we can go there in no more than 1 hour by air. What used to take us 10 hours by car can now be covered within 1 hour by air. 英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSConcession and Refutationalthoughwhileadmittedlyit is true thatit is often the case thatbuthowevernevertheless英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELT

26、SAlthough old people are unlikely to face physically challenging tasks, there are many jobs that are especially suitable for old people, such as jobs that call for more experience and wisdom than physical power. With their rich experience in both work and life, many old people would make good consul

27、tants, instructors, coaches, doctors and psychologists, to mention only a few. Girls also appear to be less aggressive than boys. In adulthood, it is men, not women, who prove to be the aggressors in crime and in war. Obviously, in raising children, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable to a m

28、ore aggressive one. Although there are certainly gentle men and aggressive women, by and large, females are less likely to resort to violence in attempting to solve problems.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS论证方法总结及分类论证 妇女是否应当参军？In many countries, women are not able to join in the army to share equal basis wit

29、h men and some people think that only men should be a member of the army, navy and air force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS应当；不应当；主体客体分类Why should?战争的状态和要求The way battles are fought has undergone dramatic changes and so women have an equal basis as men.参军的职责Just as

30、men have the responsibility of bringing up children with women, so women should bear the burden of protecting their own country by joining in the army.Why should not?（军人必备的条件？物质/非物质？）妇女体力不行（妇女不应当当兵是因为她们的体力不如男子。）男女分工不同Culturally speaking, women are not fit for the position of killing.分类：主体/客体主体分类：什么妇

31、女？客体分类：当什么兵？英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS完整文章分析：Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view.英语雅思

32、考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSSample Answer:The view that women are better parents than men has shown itself to be true throughout history. This is not to say that men are not of importance in child-rearing; indeed, they are most necessary if children are to appreciate fully the roles of both sexes. But women

33、have proven themselves superior parents as a result of their conditioning, their less aggressive nature and their generally better communication skills.From the time they are little girls, females learn about nurturing. First with dolls and later perhaps with younger brothers and sisters, girls are

34、given the role of career. Girls see their mothers in the same roles and so it is natural that they identify this as a female activity. Boys, in contrast, learn competitive role far removed from what it means to nurture. While boys may dream of adventures, girls conditioning means they tend to see th

35、e future in terms of raising families.Girls also appear to be less aggressive than boys. In adulthood, it is men, not women, who prove to be the aggressors in crime and in war. Obviously, in raising children, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable to a more aggressive one. Although there certai

36、nly exist gentle men and aggressive women, by and large, females are less likely to resort to violence in attempting to solve problems.Finally, women tend to be better communicators than men. This is shown in intelligence tests, where females, on average, do better in verbal communication than males

37、. Of course, communication is of utmost importance in rearing children, as children tend to learn from and adopt the communication styles of their parents.Thus, while it is all very well to suggest a greater role for men in raising children, let us not forget that women are generally better suited t

38、o the parenting role.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构ArgumentSome people think that Others believe that Discuss and give your opinion.题目特点：题目当中包含着针锋相对的两种观点。要求讨论并且提出你自己的观点。平衡式交代双方观点观点一及其理由观点二及其理由我的观点（倾向性-一或二或折中）注意：中心思想常在末段首句英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构Some people believe that money spent on space

39、 research benefits all of humanity. Others take the opposite view and say that money for this type of research is wasted. Discuss these views and give your opinion.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构Sample Answer：For over fifty years, a number of nations have been involved in the exploration of outer s

40、pace. This research has been very costly, of course. Has this money been well spent or wasted?Some people believe that all or most space research should be eliminated because of its incredible expense, not only in terms of money, but also in terms of scientific and human resources. These people poin

41、t out the fact that it cost billions of dollars to send astronauts to the moon, but all they brought back were some worthless rocks. These people say that the money and effort now being wasted in outer space could be spent on more important projects right here on earth, such as providing housing for

42、 homeless people, improving the education system, saving the environment, and finding cures for diseases.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构However, other people believe that space research has provided many benefits to mankind. They point out that hundreds of useful products, from personal computers t

43、o heart pacemakers to freeze-dried foods, are the direct or indirect results of space research. They say that weather and communication satellites, which are also products of space programs, have benefited people all over the globe. In addition to these practical benefits, supporters of the space pr

44、ogram point to the scientific knowledge that has been acquired about the sun, the moon, the planets, and even our own earth as a result of space research.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构I agree with those people who support space research and wish to continue. Space research, as shown, has already b

45、rought many benefits to humanity. Perhaps it will bring even more benefits in the future, ones that we can not even imagine now. Moreover, just as individual people need challenges to make their lives more interesting, I believe the human race itself needs a challenge, and I think that the peaceful

46、exploration of outer space provides just such a challenge.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS练习Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give

47、your own opinion题解：和从事其他重要职业的人士相比，成功的职业运动员能挣多得多的钱。一些人认为这是完全合理的，而其他人认为不公平。讨论这两种观点并提出你的看法。英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构范文：As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars

48、, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports sala

49、ries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of “fairness” is not th

50、e issue.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构范文：Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a pl

51、ayer is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings. Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justifi

52、ed than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS雅思议论文论证结构用词多样：“收入高”，题目中用的是earn a great deal of money，文中几处地方分别改写成了are paid huge salaries, super salaries,

53、 huge earnings。“认为”，文中分别用了find, feel, 和think等。句型多变：长短句结合：例如第二段和第三段论证用的长句和总结时的短句。分类式 交代双方观点并指出其复杂性，进行分类情形一及做法情形二及做法总结英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSAgree or Disagree?To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you agree or disagree with this view?同意不同意题型的几种开头写法：直接提出观点，同意：情景+观点： 让步反驳：事实+对方观点及理由+反驳并提出自己观点英语雅思考

54、试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS直接提出观点，同意：Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?创造性艺术家应该拥有以自

55、己想要的任何方式通过文字、图画、音乐或影像来表达思想的自由。对此政府不应该加以任何限制。你在何等程度上同意还是不同意这个观点？英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS展示+练习范文一：On the specific issue of creative freedom versus government restrictions, I am fully of the opinion that the latter should give place to the former. 范文二：To a very large extent, I believe that the work of c

56、reative artists should not be restricted by any government.英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTSUsing a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?每天用电脑对小孩来说弊大于利。你同意还是不同意？范文：I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much t

57、ime spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.我同意小孩每天花太多时间在电脑上会受到负面影响。部分原因在于无论小孩用电脑从事什么活动，长时间坐在屏幕前对小孩的眼睛和身体姿势有害。英语雅思考

58、试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS情景+观点： Should dangerous sports such as boxing or motor-racing be banned? 范文：Millions of people play sport every day, and, inevitably, some suffer injury or pain. Most players and spectators accept this risk. However, in my opinion, dangerous sports such as boxing should be banned.英

59、语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS让步反驳Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?大学应该在每一个学科都招收同等数量的男女学生。你在何等程度上同意或不同意这个观点？范文：Although some people may think that it is fair to maintain gender equality in every discipline in the un

60、iversity, I tend to believe that such a rigid rule is impractical and even harmful.虽然有的人认为大学里每个学科维持性别均等很合理，但我认为这种僵化做法不切实际，甚至有害。英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS改写的三种方法：Paraphrase换词性；使用同义词；改变句型。英语雅思考试大作文写作手法IELTSIELTS改写练习1：The position of women in the society has changed greatly in the past 20 years.Womens soc