四级作文讲解(精)课件

1、(最新整理)四级作文讲解(精)2021/7/261大学英语四级作文2021/7/262四级考试中，作文最难拿分的原因: 一、作文是一项综合考察的项目，既考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握情况，也考察句型、篇章的能力； 二、有的考生过分自信，认为只要写足字数，大体写一写，就能得个八、九分；三、有的考生过于缺乏自信，觉得这个部分太综合了，平时也懒得写，考试时能写到哪儿就写到哪儿，结果造成了“活马当作死马医”，自然是“医死”了。 2021/7/263作文最低分的规定 （1）根据学生目前的作文分均值，将作文的最低分定为6分； （2）作文分为0分，总分若高于60分，最后报分一律按59分不及格处理；若低于60分则

2、报分时一律再减6分； （3）作文分大于0分，小于6分，则按下面的公式计算成绩： 最后报导分=原计算总分-6分+实得作文分2021/7/264例1：原计算总分为63分，实得作文分为2分，最后报导分=63-6+2=59分。例2：原计算总分为80分，实得作文分为4分，最后报导分=80-6+4=78分。例3：原计算总分为58分，实得作文分为2分，最后报导分=58-6+2=54分。2021/7/265评分标准 1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。2. 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该

3、分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)，但不得加或减半分。2021/7/2662分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。2021/7/26711分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。2021/7/268四级考试作文 作文题型纵览历

4、年的作文试题，我们可以发现论说文占绝大多数，但近年应用文有上升的势头。就话题而言，主要有三大类：社会热门话题、校园话题和日常生活话题。2021/7/269四级考试作文写作常识一、 基本的写作步骤: 在四级考试（包括其它水平考试）的写作中，通常进行以下五个步骤：审题、选材、腹稿（包括提纲和正文）、书写、修改。 2021/7/2610二、文章的衔接与连贯 在评分标准中，同是否扣题同样重要的是文章的连贯性。往往有的文章扣题倒也扣题了，但还是得不了几分，这其中的原因恐怕与连贯性有很大的关系。 这里所说的连贯有两两层含义。一是指文章在内容上是连贯、统一的，文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而

5、言，其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。2021/7/2611不同类型作文的写作方法 共同原则: 1. 中心第一;2. 注意分段; 3. 注意比例. 2021/7/2612表示列举的方法 First of all/Above all, secondly, moreoverIn the first place, in the second place, furthermore/whats moreTo begin(start) with, secondly, in additionFor one thing, for another th

6、ing, for still another thing2021/7/2613表示举例说明的过渡语For example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a case in point, Lets take as an example. Take for example. is a typical example of is a typical/proper case in point.2021/7/2614表示递进关系的过渡语In addition, furthermore, moreover,

7、 besides, also, whats moreNot only, but also, similarly, Another is is another is also a factor. 2021/7/2615表示对比对照的过渡语In contrast, by contrast, on the other hand,in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely, differ/vary greatly/vastly fromDifferent from 2021/

8、7/2616表示因果关系的过渡语Because of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reasonTherefore, so, as a result, consequently, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thusThe reasons why/for are/lie in results in result from2021/7/2617表示结论的过渡语To sum up, to conclude, to summari

9、zeIn sum, in summary, in conclusion, in all, in a word, in short, in briefSo, therefore, thusWe can come to the conclusion that A conclusion can be reached that 2021/7/2618表示转折的过渡语Though, although, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, even thoughLets look at the other side of the coin.As everything h

10、as two sides, we should not neglect the other side of the coin.Just as there are two sides of a coin,. 2021/7/2619归纳总结概括全文，得出结论 All in allIn a word As for me In my opinionPersonally, I think /believeAs far as I am concerned2021/7/2620作文模板（A or B）模板1：1 Different people have different views on 事物/问题。2

11、Some prefer 一种观点/选择。3 Others tend to 另一种观点/选择。4 As to me, I agree to the first/second opinion. 2021/7/26215 Of course, “我” 不赞同的观点/选择的合理性。6For example, 支持其合理性的例子。7 But, 我不赞同观点/选择的不足。8 The following reasons can account for my preference.2021/7/26229 One of the main reasons is that 我的观点/选择一。10 A good e

12、xample to illustrate is that 支持一的例子。11 In addition, 我的观点/选择二。12 To conclude, 重申观点/选择。2021/7/2623模板二1There is no complete agreement among people consider事物或问题。2 Some people consider that 一种观点或选择。3However, others think that 另一种的观点或选择。2021/7/26244 Some people may say that 观点一理由。5 They hold this opinion

13、 because 深入的阐述观点一的理由。6 However, others believe that 观点二或选择二的理由。7 They argue that 深入阐述观点二的理由。2021/7/26258 Personally, I prefer the former/latter opinion/choice. 9 Firstly, 我的理由一。10 Secondly， 我的理由二。11. Most important of all, 我的理由三。12. Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, I/we may reasonably

14、conclude that 重申观点/选择。2021/7/2626模板三1 When asked about/ When it comes to 事物/问题， different people will offer different opinions. 2 Some people take it for granted that 观点一。3 In their opinion, 观点一的理由。4 Besides, 观点一的理由二。2021/7/26275 However，other hold that 观点二/选择二。6 They maintain that 观点二/选择二的理由一。7 And

15、 观点二/选择二的理由二。2021/7/26288Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first opinion/choice. 9 For one thing/ On the one hand, 我的理由一。10. For another/On the other hand, 我的理由二。11 For instance, 举例说明理由二。12 Therefore, as stated above, 重申理由。2021/7/2629常用句式1. There is a general discussion nowadays on the p

16、roblem of Some argue/hold that, but other set forth a totally different argument about the issue.2021/7/26302. In reaction to the phenomenon/ in answer to the problem/ in response to the on-going social change, some people believe, in their minds, Others maintain, in their eyes,2021/7/26313. Persona

17、lly, I side with the former/latter opinion.4 I am of the opinion that priority should be given to 5 In conclusion, it is clear that6 There is a striking contrast between7It may be briefly summed up as follows.8. From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that 2021/7/2632Your a

18、ssignment today!Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Lectures or Discussions? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:2021/7/26331 有些学生认为大学里的教学方式应该是用讲授式2 另一些学生认为应该用讨论式的教学方式3 我的看法2021/7/2634现象解释型1

19、总体现象has brought into focus./总体现象, which has roused great concern. /Recently, the problem of 现象has become the focus of the public concern. 2 Nowadays, 现象表现或变化. 3 In addition, 进一步阐述现象. 4 The reasons for this phenomenon are varied./ There are many different factors deciding 该现象或其相关情况./该现象has a great ef

20、fect on 影响的主要对象。2021/7/26355 Among all these reasons/factors/effects, 原因一plays a critical role. 6 具体阐述原因一. 7. Moreover，原因二. 8 Besides, 原因三。 9 Therefore，最终结果或影响。10. As far as I am concerned/ As to me, 我的观点/态度/做法. 11 Furthermore/Besides, 进一步说明. 12 In a word, 总结全文。2021/7/2636常用句式1 There may be a combin

21、ation of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/ explain2. Its not easy/simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor.2021/7/26373 Among all the important/convincing reasons for, one should be emphasized.2021/7/26382007/12What Elective

22、to Choose1 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3. 以你自己为例。2021/7/2639 观点论证型1. It is true that 普遍的不适当的观点和做法。2 However, 不同的观点和做法。3 I think, 我的观点。4 My reasons for this point can be listed as follows.2021/7/26405 Firstly,论据一。6进一步说明论据一。7.Secondly, 论据二。 8 For example, 支持理由二的事例。9 Thirdly，论证理由三。10 A case in poi

23、nt is that支持理由三的事例。2021/7/264111 It goes without saying that 重申观点。12 Therefore, 与该观点相符的做法和态度。2021/7/2642Due Attention should Be Given to Spelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。2 出现这种现象的原因。3 为了改变这种状况，我认为。2021/7/2643问题解决型1It is well-known that 相关背景。2现象一。3现象二。2021/7/26444 There are many facts accounting for 该问题。/

24、Great attention should be paid to the fact that 该问题is causing great harm.5 On the one hand, 危害一。6 危害二。7 Therefore, it is high time that 解决问题。2021/7/26458 First of all, 方法一。9进一步阐述方法一。10 Secondly，方法二。11Thirdly，方法三。12 Only in this way can we 解决问题。2021/7/26461 Recently, there has been a heated discussion that 不良现象或问题。2It is obviously that 危害一。3 Additionally，危害二。4 Therefore，how to 解决问题is worth our great attention2021/7/26475 On the one hand, 方法一。6 进一步阐述方法。7 On the other hand, 方法二。 8 For example, 支持方法二的例子。9 In addition, 方法三。2021/7/264810 In fact, mor