《基础写作之人物信息整合》 课件

1、Welcome to our class!【Warming up】 Guess who the boy/girl is!Step11.能辨别长句、高级句子中所运用的语言技巧。2.能说出人物简介中并列结构，同位语结构， 非谓语结构，定语或状语从句结构的常用词。3.能把并列结构，同位语结构，非谓语结构，定语或状语从句结构灵活运用到人物简介相关信息的整合中。 4.能运用所学的1-2两种技巧把一篇人物简介的多个信息点（句子）整合成符合高考要求的5句话作文。学习目标： Basic Writing character writing B级 3-4种 C级2-3种 DE级1-2种【展示预习成果】 】1.观察

2、AB两篇英文习作，谈谈两篇的异同。 相同之处：（ ）不同之处：1.句子数量？ 2.句子结构？文采？你比较喜欢哪篇？为什么？电子书包互动讨论人物写作信息整合课前预习Step2 A篇 Jay Chou is a famous singer. He was born in January, 1979 in Taiwan. He was raised by his mother. He was shy and quiet during his childhood. As he showed interest in music, he began learning to play the piano a

3、t the age of three. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升). He received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting ne

4、w things.B篇 Born in January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of three. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. Hi

5、s popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs(突破) as he takes risks in attempting new things.阅读C,D两篇人物写作范文，判断划线部分所用的写作技巧。 电子书包测试反馈3语法技巧测试题 1.Born in Poland i

6、n 1867, Madame Curie, 2 a French physicist, showed great interest in physics 3 when she was young. At that time she worked very hard but women were not admitted to universities in Poland, 4 so she was determined to go and study in Paris University 5 where she succeeded in taking a first class degree

7、 in physics in 1893. In 1895, she married Pierre Curie 6 with whom she worked together on the research into radioactive matter. In 1904 she and her husband received the Nobel Prize for Physics 7. and in 1911, she received a second Nobel Prize for chemistry. In a word, Madame Curie is regarded as the

8、 great scientist 8 who is the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.9（）Born on March 7, 1915, Allan Stewart, 10（）an Australian, become the oldest man to obtain a masters degree over the world in 2006. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. He got his first degree

9、in 1936 and then his doctors degree in medicine. He decided to study law in his eighties,11（） and he got the masters degree in 2006, 12（）which was his third degree. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning 13（）and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in stu

10、dy.D篇 2012年广东高考英语试卷基础写作范文欣赏 3：在人物简介中，a并列结构 常用词：b同位语结构常用词： C,非谓语结构 常用词：d 定语从句 常用词：e状语从句 常用词： and, and then, but, so, bothand,not only, but alsoa famous singer, a French physicist, an Australian to do (主动、将来) doing（主动、进行） having done (主动 完成） done （被动、完成） 人+who that, 地点where 时间when 事件which If ,Though w

11、hen/After/Since 整合技巧：并列结构同位语非谓语结构定语从句状语从句 and, and then, but, so, bothand not only, but alsoa famous singer, a French physicist, an Australian to do (主动、将来) doing（主动、进行） having done (主动 完成） done （被动、完成） 人+who that 地点where 时间when 事件which If ,Though when/After/Since【研学问题（活动）一】【电子书包-互动讨论区 -人物写作信息整合研学问题

12、一】人物概况信息点的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones age, sex, birth-place, background into one sentence ?BrainstormStep3 1.Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China . He was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 1). Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China and he was born in Guangzhou

13、 in 1941. 2). Zhong Nanshan , one of the greatest doctors in China , was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 3). Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China . 4). Zhong Nanshan who was born in Guangzhou in 1941 is one of the greatest doctors in China ./ Zhong Nanshan who

14、is one of the greatest doctors in China was born in Guangzhou.【研学问题（活动）二】人物外貌、性格、品质信息点的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones appearance , characters and qualitiesinto one sentence ?【电子书包-互动讨论区 -人物写作信息整合研学问题二】Brainstorm .Cindy is a cute girl. She has long hair and big eyes. She runs like the win

15、d. 1).Cindy is a cute girl with long hair and big eyes and she runs like the wind. 2) Cindy , a cute girl, has long hair and big eyes and runs like the wind.3) Cindy ,a cute girl with long hair and big eyes, runs like the wind.3). Cindy ,who is a cute girl with long hair and big eyes, runs like the

16、wind.4).Cindy is a cute girl who has long hair and big eyes , running like the wind. 【研学问题（活动）三】人物教育经历信息点的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones education into one sentence ?【电子书包-互动讨论区 -人物写作信息整合研学问题三】Brainstorm Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University. He graduated with excellent results. Afte

17、r graduation he went to America for further study. 1）Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University where he graduated with excellent results and after graduation he went to America for further study.2）Tao Xingzhi graduated from Jinling University with excellent results and after graduation he went to Am

18、erica for further study. 3) Tao Xingzhi graduated from Jinling University with excellent results and then he went to America for further study. Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University. He graduated with excellent results. After graduation he went to America for further study. 4) After graduating f

19、rom Jinling University with excellent results, Tao Xingzhi went to America for further study.5）Having graduated from Jinling University with excellent results, Tao Xingzhi went to America for further study. 【研学问题（活动）四】人物生平、成就信息点的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones events and achievements into

20、 one sentence ?【电子书包-互动讨论区 -人物写作信息整合研学问题四】Brainstorm 4.Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006. Liu Xiang became the idol of the youth. 1).Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006 and then he became the idol of the youth. 2).Liu Xiang ,who broke the wor

21、ld record and got the gold medal in 2006, became the idol of the youth.3).Having broken the world record and got the goldmedal in 2006, Liu Xiang became the idol of the youth.4).After Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006, he became the idol of the youth. 【研学问题（活动）五】人物评价信息点

22、的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones evaluation into one sentence ?【电子书包-互动讨论区 -人物写作信息整合研学问题五】Brainstorm Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person . He is known as the “King of Pop”.He is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music his

23、tory. 1) Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person and he is known as the “King of Pop”, because he is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 2) Michael Jackson ,the “King of Pop”, was an outstanding music versatile person and h

24、e is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person . He is known as the “King of Pop”.He is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 3) Mic

25、hael Jackson , who is an outstanding music versatile person, is known as the “King of Pop” and he is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 4) Known as the “King of Pop” , Michael Jackson ,an outstanding music versatile person ,is the first art

26、ist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history.巩固拓展-应用 1.请先按人物写作的内容顺序分为5个部分。 小组合作探究合并句子的技巧， 学习组长指导。2.把狄更斯人物简介11个信息点整合为5句话作文。 要求用同位语、并列句结构，非谓语结构， 定语从句结构、状语从句结构等技巧中的1-2种。 B层同学自由发挥。层的1-2种技巧。层同学至少学会用并列句合并句子。把狄更斯简介11个信息点整合为5句话Please combine the 11 sentences aboutCharles

27、Dickens into five sentences.【电子书包我的作业】Step41) Charles Dickens was a famous novelist of England.2) He was born in February, 1812 . 3) He passed away in June.4) When he was young, his family was poor.5) He was forced to work in the factory.6) He was interested in writing.7) He wrote many novels.8) Man

28、y of his novels described the inferior group. 9) His works were affected by his childhood experiences.10) His writings reflected the darkness and unfairness of the society. 11) Many of his works are still popular in the world. 概况教育背景生平成就评价应用展示 【电子书包-互动讨论区1.是否5句？5句3分。多或少扣1分。2.每句的结构是否正确?一句2分。3.含2个整合技巧

29、的3分。多的加1分。认真评价各小组作品。Step5Charles Dickens, a famous novelist of England, was born in February, 1812 and passed away in June, 1870. When he was young, his family lived in poverty and therefore he was forced to work in the factory. Later, he developed an interest in writing，coming up with many novels which showed the