人教版英语八年级下册第一单元书面表达

1、人教版英语八年级下册第一单元书面表达 书面表达是要依托话题的，这个单元的主要话题，就是标题所呈现的“Whats the matter?”围绕这个话题展开叙述，以及针对这个话题，给别人提出相应的建议。 书面表达前的准备： 表达病症或身体出现问题的症状：have has a cold fever have has a sore + 身体部位，例如：have a sore throat back neck leg have a + 身体部位-ache ，例如：have a toothache headache stomachache backache Theres something wrong w

2、ith.，例如: There is somthing wrong with my neck my computer. Something doesnt work. 例如：My computer doesnt work , it is broken.解决一些常见问题常用到的提建议的句型： You should could do sth. 例如：You should go to see a doctor.（你应该去看医生。） Why dont you do sth. ? = Why not do sth. ? 此句型以反问的形式，表达的意思实际上是“你可以做。”例如：Why dont you ta

3、ke your temperature? = Why not take your temperature? （你可以测量一下体温。） Youd better (not) do sth. 你最好（不）做某事。例如： Youd better eat less and exercise more. （你最好少吃点、多锻炼。） How What about doing sth. ? 例如：The TV show is boring , What about going out to play baskeball ?（这个电视节目很无聊，我们出去打篮球怎么样？） Shall we do sth.? 例如

4、：Shall we go fishing instead of playing soccer? 我们去钓鱼来代替踢足球好吗？一些常见的表示建议（针对身体出了状况）的短语：lie down and rest 躺下休息 go to hospital 去医院 see a doctor 看医生 get an X-ray 照X光 stay in bed待在床上 take one temperature测量某人的体温take some medicine吃一些药 take breaks 休息 drink more water 多喝水eat less junk food少吃垃圾食品 do more exerc

5、ise 多锻炼 have a good rest好好休息keep in good mood 保持好心情 drink hot tea with honey 喝加了蜂蜜的热茶书面表达训练：根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍你的朋友Bob的情况并根据他的情况提出相应的建议。你有一个朋友，名叫Bob，他酷爱玩电脑游戏，花了很多时间在上面，为此他几乎天天熬夜，没有时间睡觉。由于长时间打游戏保持相同的坐姿太久，给他带来很多负面困扰：头疼、眼睛不舒服，腰酸背疼，犯困。他不知道该怎么办？希望你能给他提一些建议。解题思路：第一步，判断人称和时态。介绍你的朋友Bob的情况，用一般现在时，使用时要特别注意主谓一致（谓语

6、动词要根据情况使用第三人称单数。）第二步，根据提示列出会用到的单词和一些短语、句型等。friend , name , like . very much , like doing sth. , spend time on sth . doing sth. , stay up late , have time to do sth. , sit , in the same , too long , trouble , have a headache , have sore eyes and back , tired 再列出根据这个症状常见的提建议的短语、句型等：shouldnt do sth. ,

7、give up , have enough sleep , take more exercise , listen to music.第三步，构思整篇文章的段落结构：分三段进行。第一段介绍Bob以及他现在遇到的问题，表达他很困惑。第二段，针对Bob的问题，给他提出建议。第三段，希望他的问题能够尽快得到解决。第一段：I have a good friend. His name is Bob. He likes playing computers games very much and he spends so much time on it every day. He usually stays

8、 up late to play computers games so that he doesnt have time to sleep well. Now he has a headache , sore eyes and sore back because he sits in the same way for too long. He feels terrible and tired and doesnt know what should he do ?第二段： I think he should take breaks from the computer and try to giv

9、e up this hobby. He shouldnt spend too much time playing computer games. On the one hand , its a waste of time , On the other hand , its not good for his health. In order to keep fit , he should take more exercise instead of playing computer games. Besides , he can also listen to music to relax hims

10、elves.第三段：I hope that he can feel better soon. And I believe that his problem can be solved quickly.写作过程中的注意事项：主谓一致：He likes , he spends , He usually stays up late , he doesnt have time , he has a headache , He feels terrible , He doesnt know情态动词+动词原形：he should take breaks , He shouldnt spend too mu

11、ch time , he should take more exercise , he can also listen to music , 一些经常出错的句子：He likes playing computers games very much. 其中like doing sth. like . very much. （动词+like + very much ; very + 形容词）第四步：连成短文。I have a good friend. His name is Bob. He likes playing computers games very much and he spends

12、so much time on it every day. He usually stays up late to play computers games so that he doesnt have time to sleep well. Now he has a headache , sore eyes and sore back because he sits in the same way for too long. He feels terrible and tired and doesnt know what should he do ?I think he should take breaks from the computer and try to give up this hobby. He shouldnt spend too much time playing computer games. On the one hand , its a waste of time , On the other hand , its not good for his health. In order to keep fit , he should